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ReverseTheEclipse — 'Bittersweet Peace'
Published: 2007-03-23 21:15:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 177; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description "Bittersweet Peace"
By: Jade Lightning, a.k.a. Inuyashas-hanyougirl

*Verse 1*
Watermarks streak...on a windowpane,
Left all alone...after a soaking rain.
Just like the scars...left on a heart,
One that knew love, only to be broken apart.

*Chorus 1*
Even the sky, must cry, for this wounded heart,
As it washes the bloody wounds clean of the pain.
It's a broken heart, trying to escape further sorrow,
As it walks and slowly beats alone,
And it's strength...begins to wane.

*Verse 2*
Only the scars...can tell this tale,
They are but shattered memories, on this heart so frail.
There's no love left...to soothe the pain away,
And there's no sunshine to bring light...to this dreary day.

*Chorus 2*
Even the sky, must cry, for this wounded heart,
As it washes the bloody wounds clean of the pain.
It's a broken heart, trying to escape further sorrow,
As it stumbles and begins to slow,
And it's strength...it's strength...begins to fade.

*Bridge Verse*
Say a prayer, one last plea; for comfort and release,
As you weep your final tear, and dream your last dream.
You wish for any kind of peace, no matter what it takes,
Even if that peace is bittersweet, as long as there's no more pain...
Your only wish...is to be free.

*Chorus 3*
Even the sky, must cry, for this wounded heart,
As it washes the bloody wounds clean of the pain.
It's a broken heart, that tried to escape further sorrow,
As it falls and slowly dies alone,
It's strength succumb to the pain...

*Closing Verse*
Though the pain is finally gone,
With consequence it came.
In death alone it found comfort...
At rest, at peace...so...bittersweet.
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Comments: 12

QueenLeaShanneen [2007-03-27 11:46:25 +0000 UTC]

It's fantastic!

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to QueenLeaShanneen [2007-03-27 18:05:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I appreciate it, and thanks for the fave too

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QueenLeaShanneen In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2007-03-28 15:25:02 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome!

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NestTheEchidna [2007-03-24 00:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Now that's powerful. Fantastically written, my friend ^^

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to NestTheEchidna [2007-03-24 04:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Thankies Nest ^^ I appreciate it, and thanks for the fave too

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NestTheEchidna In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2007-03-24 09:38:35 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, Jade

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ImRarityUnicorn [2007-03-23 22:26:40 +0000 UTC]

It's very nice sis

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to ImRarityUnicorn [2007-03-24 04:07:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks sis ^^

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ImRarityUnicorn In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2007-03-24 04:11:17 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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Cherie-the-hedgehog [2007-03-23 21:18:30 +0000 UTC]

It's really beautiful!

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Cherie-the-hedgehog [2007-03-24 04:07:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^ and thanks for the fave!

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Cherie-the-hedgehog In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2007-03-24 09:24:20 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome ^^

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