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ReverseTheEclipse — 'Immortal Dreams'
Published: 2006-03-22 02:29:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 189; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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Description It’s night in the world of the Living, and mortal souls sleep…as the quiet of the night…cradles their dreams.  All the world is at peace, all life resting silently, in the promise of a new day, a new beginning…that they may begin life fresh anew…with the sweet dreams of yester eve nothing more than a memory.  Yet, these dreams provide a freedom from the world we all know…our souls free to dream of eternal rest…until that fateful day does come to the world.

While mortal hearts sleep in peace, far away in the realm of Immortal Fields, where the undying souls find little rest; they silently cry, their tormented souls, burden with eons of grief…unable to dream…oh sweet dreams…the thought of eternal rest…it will always elude them…eternal bliss beyond their reach, and they continue to suffer…no rest, no relief…save them…

This is the price of Immortality…while dreams offer the mortal a chance to be free, with the promise of eternal rest after this life is done, this is not so for the Undying.  Immortal Dreams only allow temporary peace…and the Undying loathe their dreams, for they are nothing but fake freedoms from their sorrows…taunting them with visions of a kind of peace that they can never reach.  These sorrows that they cannot escape…they make an immortal soul that much to bear.

The pain of our sorrows, built up from years of grief and tragedy…it is real for us all, and yet only the mortal will ever taste the sweet cup of eternal rest.  The Immortal…no…the pain of lost loved ones, war and violence, sadness and grief…only the mortal may let go of their grief, death from this world…their souls free from the troubles of this life…forevermore…

And yet, for the immortal, this eternal rest will never come…unless they are slain, die from the troubles of their lives becoming too much to bear alone; …or…if they give up their souls…to die from this world of pain and tears, and find eternal life in the next…that is the bitter cup of immortality.  To stay in this life and achieve an uncertain and elusive purpose…only to lose their youthful hearts to sickness and despair.  They look for an answer…and perhaps, thinking the stars to be messengers to the other side…that is, eternal rest…and yet they find no answer.   It is only in their hearts, will they find the answer…

As mortal souls sleep…the souls of the Undying sleep in Immortal Fields…perchance to dream, perhaps to meditate, for in dreams, the immortal find no consolation…in their hearts, they know all too well the fate their souls will bear.  The immortal walk this world like ghosts…unseen by the mortal, as they hide themselves from all who Live and Die.  A few will lose their souls to grief…unable to walk the world alone, and share their sorrows with none.  Others too will never die…until the end of time comes, their souls strong enough to fight the pain, their wisdom giving them hope…as the promise of an eventful future keeps that inner youth within them alive and burning bright with the intensity of a thousands suns…

The Undying…are they really born, only to be bound to the fate of the world around them?  Must they live in sadness and isolation, only to suffer the same fate as the imperfect and scarred world?  No…this fate is not placed on anyone…the immortal too, may give up their lives, though their souls desire not to leave the world that they love.  Yet, the souls of the immortal may see the place their dreams tease them with, and this eternal rest…the Undying are only too grateful to accept.

In Immortal Dreams, the Undying dream, forever loathing their dreams for showing them what they might never see.  However, for the one soul, who gave up his life, crying silently on the cairn where a loved one lies beneath, so has another immortal soul found that rest, rest, that his immortal dreams illustrated for him…and in the promise of reuniting with one whom he holds dear…he no longer loathes immortal dreams…and no longer, does he suffer.

”A Broken Spirit, living in the land of Immortal Dreams, may I find that eternal rest, and find true bliss there.  May I only be reunited with those I love, though I might not stay in paradise?  Immortal is my soul, and I may not die…but I pray you let me find some comfort and release from the sorrows that weigh heavy on my heart.  If I may not die…please unburden my soul…and Immortal Dreams, thereafter be my peace.” Shadow, Dark Elemental, his final prayer to Arandor, the Light Elemental.
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Comments: 26

HopelssRomanticGhost [2006-03-24 00:36:50 +0000 UTC]

I love it! Dreams are important, are they?
Navi: I guess. I'm getting sleepy.
^^ Swett dreams little Navi.

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to HopelssRomanticGhost [2006-03-24 03:26:11 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thanks much! Dreams are important, but can be your best friend or worst enemy...depends...hee hee

Hope Navi sleeps well...hee hee...like my new little friend Kamie here...hee hee ^^ She's a two-year-old echidna/hedgehog cross like Flame...sweet little thing. ^^

Kamie: I go sleepy too...*yawns and curls up with her blankie and stuffed cat*

*squee* she's so cute...

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HopelssRomanticGhost In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-03-25 00:27:09 +0000 UTC]

Navi could be like that too....when she wants to be. Every blue moon she'll be nice and cute, but it's not likely.
Navi: *wakes up* Damn straight! *goes back to sleep*
.....*sigh*

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to HopelssRomanticGhost [2006-03-26 17:24:10 +0000 UTC]

lol! I hear ya...

Shadow: I'd rather not...

*sighs* We love them...and they love us, even if they don't show it,

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HopelssRomanticGhost In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-03-28 01:25:52 +0000 UTC]

That's good to hear.
Navi:
T_T.....I hope so anyway.

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Nights-wolf [2006-03-23 20:55:32 +0000 UTC]

Looks like no one would want to live forever o.o;

Your just very fluent in your words, you bring understanding and emotion in the form of typed characters.

You have a gift

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Nights-wolf [2006-03-24 03:56:12 +0000 UTC]

No...I don't think anyone would...and why no one does. Like in Lord of the Rings...the Elves are immortal, and the Men got jealous...thinking that death is a curse rather than a precious gift. They should read this, Nooo...I don't think living forever is smart...it's scarier, and more painful perhaps than we think dying is.

As for that second bit, ...wow, that blew me away. I really, REALLY am honored that you, and others think enough of my writing to say that. That was such a sweet comment, and I really appreciate it. It's comments like that that really boost my confidence and will to write, and I'll say it, you all make writing really worth while. Thankies so soo much!

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Nights-wolf In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-03-24 17:11:08 +0000 UTC]

We must educate the men in lord of the rings! xD -prints pages out and makes them read it-

I'm very glad that I'm able to keep you writing. I'm sick over here and have a bit too much time on my hands, so when I get the chance of being able to read your stories at a time i'm not rushed I can definetly get more from it, and you do have beatiful writings. Heh, thats what I'm here for, to keep everyone going

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Nights-wolf [2006-03-24 17:49:40 +0000 UTC]

lol! Poor men...only the few and wise ever realized it meant true freedom. *shrugs*

Well, your efforts are very much appreciated,

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Nights-wolf In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-03-24 18:00:51 +0000 UTC]

Men: Nayah, we dun wanna read! T^T

xD yes, poor them, 1 out of all of them might get half of the message...

I'm happy I could be of assistance ^^

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Nights-wolf [2006-03-26 17:19:31 +0000 UTC]

They won't listen to the Elves...nope nope, XD *sigh* Oh well, moving on...to the Dwarves!

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Nights-wolf In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-03-26 22:41:34 +0000 UTC]

Then to the Pilsberry elves who make the cookies! After that, most of the informed population of Kansas! xD

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QueenLeaShanneen [2006-03-23 15:46:43 +0000 UTC]

Very powerful stuff! You are super talented! Great job!

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to QueenLeaShanneen [2006-03-24 04:21:00 +0000 UTC]

;o; Awwe, thankies, I appreciate that so much. It's in situations like this, that the comments mean more than the faves, although they are both appreciated just the same. I'm glad to hear that so many people love my work and think I'm talented and gifted and such. Makes it that much more important to me! thanks again!

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QueenLeaShanneen In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-03-24 15:38:26 +0000 UTC]

You are so very welcome!

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NestTheEchidna [2006-03-22 04:54:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow...This is fabulous

Another reason immortality would suck xD;

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to NestTheEchidna [2006-03-22 05:25:21 +0000 UTC]

Thankies, I'm glad you like it...I admit I do like it when my poetry appeals to the emotions.

That's kinda what I've been going for...I mean, people like to think sometimes that it would be awesome to live forever. When I place myself in the shoes of an immortal, Shadow and my charrie Arandor in this case, I like to just transfer their actual, "feelings", on it on paper, and well, I think it rocks if I do say so myself. lol! anyway, tis true, immortality is not all it's cracked up to be, and I'm glad that you liked the poem; thanks much for the comment and fave, tis appreciated!

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NestTheEchidna In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-03-22 05:30:12 +0000 UTC]

You're really good at it ^^

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to NestTheEchidna [2006-03-22 06:16:34 +0000 UTC]

Awwe, thankies! That means a lot, ^^ Makes my foolish writing pursuits worthwhile! Seriously, thanks much!

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NestTheEchidna In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-03-22 06:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Foolish nothin'! *Fwaps* And you're welcome ;D

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to NestTheEchidna [2006-03-22 23:34:57 +0000 UTC]

lol!

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dreamsofagirl [2006-03-22 03:27:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow.......Just wow....This is so good. It just blows me away. Im speechless. All I can say is

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to dreamsofagirl [2006-03-22 04:47:32 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thankies much, chapters to my two novels are soon to follow...not too long...lol, thought I'd post this first. Anyway, i'm glad ya like it, cause this "immortality" thing has been a big topic for me; why, just last night, I came up with this analogy, soon to be incorporatedin further poetry:

"Immortality...living an immortal life, is like being a ghost: You're unable to die, but unable to live."

Shocking eh? lol! Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks much for the fave! Tis much appreciated! Thanks for the comment as well!

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dreamsofagirl In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-03-23 00:18:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow! That's a great analogy. I can't wait for more. ^-^

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to dreamsofagirl [2006-03-23 01:18:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, and stay tuned! ^^

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dreamsofagirl In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-03-23 01:45:53 +0000 UTC]

You bet I will.

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