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"When No one Would Love Her"By: Jade Lightning, a.k.a. Inuyashas-hanyougirl
For all of the Shepherd's and Marie's in the world, who are living inside the pages of a similar story.
When no one would love her,
She began to believe,
There would be no day,
Where she'd find reprieve,
From all of the hurtful,
And cruel things they said,
Laughing at the tears,
And her heart as it bled.
It was part of growing up,
Just teasing and play,
None taken seriously,
It would all fade away.
But when the days came,
Where she found no relief,
She looked harder for love,
To dispel all the grief.
True love it seemed,
Eluded her well.
While all around her,
All else felt its spell.
Those walked hand in hand,
Lost in their eyes.
Others kissed gently,
As rain poured from the skies.
While her heart was hopeful,
Too oft was she spurned,
Something so simple,
Not yet her turn.
Days came and went,
Seasons flew by,
Still that time never came.
Her heart wondered why.
Then she pondered,
If perhaps they were right,
Mocking her, abusing her,
And she could not fight.
She had no defense,
For all that was said,
The tears they came back,
Again, her heart bled.
If after so long,
She had never found love,
That simply meant,
It just wouldn't come.
Nobody could love her,
And nobody would,
There was nothing about her,
That did any good.
Nothing special about her,
Nothing spoke to the heart,
And to her desperate desire,
Nobody'd play the part,
To lift up her spirit,
To allow her to see,
That somebody loved her,
And what was to be,
If she just held on longer,
To wait for the day,
When somebody would love her,
And her doubts would allay.
But because nobody loved her,
The time never right,
Instead the day came,
When she lost the fight.
Cruel words became truth,
True love now a lie,
All comfort was useless,
Hope laid down to die.
Now the one who would love her,
Arrived just too late,
He felt he had killed her,
Mishandling her fate.
For if he had spoken,
And hid not behind lies,
Perhaps she'd be smiling,
With no tears in her eyes.
Instead the cruel words,
Took her away,
And for her loss,
His heart would pay.
Because somebody loved her,
And had all along,
Unable to know this,
She couldn't hold on.
Feeling nobody loved him,
Was the biggest mistake,
For he felt no courage,
No chance would he take.
Now he was afflicted,
And would now walk alone,
Looking for comfort,
All on his own.
Somehow he'd find love,
In this he believed,
That her angel'd return,
And he'd find reprieve.
So perhaps he would join her,
In peace he would lie,
To pass away was to live,
To find hope, was to die.
"I love you forever,"
Is what he would pray,
"Tonight as I slumber,
Come take me away.
Let my soul escape,
So I'll be with you.
That I may show you now,
Love is indeed true."
Sleep shut his eyes,
Dreams came to life,
And with wings and a halo,
At last they would fly.
When no one would love her,
Her life over too fast,
He laid his down humbly,
To be with her at last.
All because he loved her.
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Comments: 8
ReverseTheEclipse In reply to QueenLeaShanneen [2010-03-16 03:10:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you <3 Thanks for the fave too! Much appreciated!!
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QueenLeaShanneen In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-16 09:14:47 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome
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Superspud [2010-03-12 16:40:03 +0000 UTC]
Very well written. I like your poetry- it always tells a story. A full story. The rhyming scheme is perfectly maintained too. I always have so much trouble keeping a good flow with my poetry. Yours just rolls wonderfully.
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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Superspud [2010-03-12 20:23:27 +0000 UTC]
Aww thank you <3 My poetry has never gotten that much attention, comments and faves, but I love it.
This one, the idea nagged me. I had to actually drop working on my picture "Rest Here" just so I could write it. I like this one a lot. Thank you so much ^^
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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to ImRarityUnicorn [2010-03-12 05:37:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks sis ^^ <3
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ImRarityUnicorn In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-12 05:59:11 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome sis
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