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Very nice mini comic. The wolf transformation sequence came out great.
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You should really try varying your line thickness Rex, I've watched your style progress, some parts I approve, some I don't really like anyways, I've always found your comics to be a bit flat and lacking energy though I mean no offense by it. Try varying your line weight a bit, making closer things or shadowed areas have thicker lines and Lighter, or further areas having thinner lines.
Otherwise I like the flow of your sequences.
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hmm nice advice dude! thanks alot!
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No problem DA needs more firm but concise critiquers you know ^^
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