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Published: 2006-05-26 02:49:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Was I not meant for higher things than this?Whispered good-byes and a blind midnight kiss.
Open your eyes and make love to me.
I want you,
Please look,
I need you to see.
Your silence is murderous;
I have knives in my skin.
Can't you say what's wrong and let me back in?
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Your words never cease to amaze me.
I really should get back into writing as well. I have the inspiration, the paper, the pen, but no motivation and my short attentions span has not been helping either.
I'll be down in Maryland the 17-25/26 of June. Perhaps we shall reunite? Andy misses Joey.
<3 times infinite.
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YaY! You just made my day all happy again! Joey misses Andy too
Lovelovelove!
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Hahaha, good to know my words are worth something. :]
Ahhhhhhhhhh. Roderick J. Ferrel is quoted in your sig. -runs aorund in circles- He's my hero. :]
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Mi Amor, it is beautiful. Has tu amor, cause you so much woe?
Please, tell me. The poem is beautiful, as always.
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no, mi amor has done nothing of the sort. He's still beautiful and deeply loving in every sense of the word. The words just kind of came to me one day. Then I found the picture and I had to post it. Thanks for the comment, dear heart.
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I love it, the picture fits the poem very very well. The poem itself, is deep, very deep. I think a lot of people can relate, and will to this poem. The picture is one of either desperation, or exhaustion of trying am i right?
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It was frustration. At the time I was in love with an empty form; someone who could never love back. It's all been resolved now but the art that came from the experience was mind blowing and I love him for it anyway. Catch 22? Thanks for commenting.
Dark Prodigy
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I can see that; what did come from it (this anyway) is very very thoughtful, and good. I'd say Catch 22 applies yea. I know the feeling of not being loved back, I think all youth have felt this at some point, whether through a crush or someone who broke their heart. A very very good poem, and welcome, keep writing.
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