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Published: 2005-06-27 16:38:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 318; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 20
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Brown hair.Beautiful blue eyes.
Sultry tones pour from your mouth,
Roll off of your tongue like music.
You're too good for me and I don't deserve you.
But you say otherwise and, as long as those intense blue hues continue to stare into my very soul, who am I to disagree.
You kiss me softly and whisper 'I love you's that will drift into the steamy night sky, lost to everyone but me.
I'm enthralled by your scent. It overtakes me and memories rush into even the darkest corners of my mind.
Hot days, hotter nights. Wild passion fills the crowded streets, and it's all ours.
Bound by the moment, inspired by limitations.
Seeing those eyes, framed in black, caught by beauty. Trapped by my own; green and blue, capturing the moment, hearts and souls make love under the stars.
I hear your words of love and philosophy of life. I'm entranced by the mouth of a fool.
Fool of love with a love of life and a life of beauty. A fool in love with a thought... with me.
Changing me. Melting my own icy walls with professions of your lust and love.
Pull me into your bold, throbbing embrace. Truly Bohemian; dark, wild, violent.
Each touch anew with searing desire.
I don't know who you are but, already, I'm yours.
In the smoldering heat of the darkest night, our bodies are entangled in a seductive, hypnotic dance.
Our tango of the senses leaves us both longing for more breath than out lungs will allow and more of each other than we can get.
We lie, intertwined, alone in the dark. Content.
Fall into a deep sleep in each others' arms. And nothing.
Dreams too far away; nothing can be a happier dream than the one we lived.
Love enchanted us. Allowed us to do crazy things.
Now we are more than just us.
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Comments: 8
twiztedthought831 [2005-07-13 02:32:51 +0000 UTC]
very nice....... for some reason just reading it makes me smile. :smile:
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nimaway [2005-06-28 03:29:41 +0000 UTC]
Damn. From my head, I feel like you may have just described the best part of a brand new relationship, the spilling of words, like the idea might get away before you can spell it. I'm sure others could see it from a different point of a relationship. You did a marvelous job, connecting language with an emotion that is not prone to words so much as action and smiling. Very nice.
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RhayningAcidity In reply to nimaway [2005-06-30 22:21:23 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Thank you for the kind words of encouragement. There were a few places where nothing seemed to flow right, but every writer has their moments of glory and downfall. It is very appreciated to hear from people. It means a lot.
Dark Prodigy
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lizard168 [2005-06-27 23:46:01 +0000 UTC]
IT IS SOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!
SO PERFECT!
(sorry for ze caps)
faving galore!!!!!!!!!
9.5/10
you rock!
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RhayningAcidity In reply to lizard168 [2005-07-12 01:00:17 +0000 UTC]
I don't deserve it, but... Thank you my adoring public. lol.
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lizard168 In reply to RhayningAcidity [2005-07-12 13:38:32 +0000 UTC]
rofl... I AM YOUR ADORING PUBLIC...jk
that maybe didn't come up too well....
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RhayningAcidity In reply to lizard168 [2005-07-12 17:32:07 +0000 UTC]
I think I got it. Yay, I feel special that I have a 'public' at all.
Dark Prodigy
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