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Jazzyannemarie [2012-05-04 01:04:54 +0000 UTC]

This is great!

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yansek [2012-04-21 01:12:42 +0000 UTC]

really nice, i like it.

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artildawn [2012-04-09 21:45:31 +0000 UTC]

dang it. Should have proofed more carefully. "...polished armor was NOW battered...", "the could have AT least buried me..."

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artildawn [2012-04-09 21:43:23 +0000 UTC]

So what is the story on this guy then?

Here's what comes to my mind...

"Godric woke with a start. He was in a battle, he remembered that. He remembered the war hammer striking his jaw, and then, well, he could remember nothing after that. He propped himself up onto his elbow and was dismayed to discover that his once finely fitted and polished armor was not battered and tarnished, and worse, hanging not from a well muscled frame, but a fleshless skeleton.

'Well this sucks' he thought to himself. He had intended to say it aloud, but found that he was unable to. He raised hand to where his once mighty beard had been and discovered not only that face was fleshless also, but that his jaw was gone. 'This REALY sucks' he thought again. 'This is the last time I enlist to join a necromancer's horde, dammit.'

He clattered to his feet, thankful that his bones at least appeared inclined to stay together despite the lack of supporting muscle and ligature. Having assessed and grudgingly accepted his physical condition, he moved on to his surroundings. He appeared to be in a grave yard. 'Geeze, they could have least buried me since they went to trouble of moving me here' he pondered. He considered what to do now, the horde was gone, who knows for how long. He probably couldn't go home, that would be too much to ask of his dear wife, assuming that she was still alive herself. Suddenly a single thought resolved itself in his mind. 'I'm gonna kill the necromancer what done this to me!' He spied a worn but sturdy looking spatha nearby. 'That'll do' he though as the gripped it and prepared to head out to find the cursed necromancer."

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