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Work in progress, and pre-critique version. This ISN’T FINISHED.
Original sketch is here: ric-m.tumblr.com/post/73897988…
I want to post the progress so far with this practice piece, although technically, this version is already a few days old since I’m not at my home computer. The one I’m working on right now is addressing a lot of the issues that a couple of my friends Drewdini and NMartinez brought up post-sketch, such as the length of her left leg being too short, and a lot of wonky stuff happening with and around her breasts. Thanks again you guys for the critiques and the suggestions. Things still may be off even after I do revisions but at least a lot of things were caught that I really just forgot about.
All that’s left really aside from finishing the background is fixing her head. Nico provided me with two solutions that I’m still trying to figure out what will work best (either redo it entirely with a more downward perspective or tilt her head back to look up at the viewer, as I originally intended).

Description

Work in progress, and pre-critique version. This ISN’T FINISHED.
Original sketch is here: ric-m.tumblr.com/post/73897988…
I want to post the progress so far with this practice piece, although technically, this version is already a few days old since I’m not at my home computer. The one I’m working on right now is addressing a lot of the issues that a couple of my friends Drewdini and NMartinez brought up post-sketch, such as the length of her left leg being too short, and a lot of wonky stuff happening with and around her breasts. Thanks again you guys for the critiques and the suggestions. Things still may be off even after I do revisions but at least a lot of things were caught that I really just forgot about.
All that’s left really aside from finishing the background is fixing her head. Nico provided me with two solutions that I’m still trying to figure out what will work best (either redo it entirely with a more downward perspective or tilt her head back to look up at the viewer, as I originally intended).