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Rider4Z β The Future of Trunks - Celari's Sacrifice [PDF]
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Published: 2020-03-20 05:41:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 4360; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 45
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This is my first attempt at a multi-page manga string. It reads from left to right. While I can read manga from right to left with no difficulty, creating it is another story so I decided to not even attempt trying and just let my brain do its thing. This scene is in Volume VII Chapter V of The Future of Trunks. Critiques are welcome but be gentle, it's my first time.
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Hi again 
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Ohhhh thank you so much for reading
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You're welcome.
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Seriously? I swore I would not accept it. XD
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The video I sent must have helped. The paneling for the first 3 pages flows a lot better. It build more tension and impact.
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There's more action on those pages tho and they're laid out almost identically... this is a tricky medium XD but yes i found that video really helpful. I'm gonna read back thru the android saga and try to pick up some more tricks.
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I thought the same thing. Anyway, I hope you do get better and improve. Good luck!
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i tweaked the layout of the second page
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Just saw it. It looks WAY better and more dynamic.
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Holy damn, Trunks gonna get revenge, maybe she gonna make out with Mai!
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Yeah, Trunks loves only Mai ;x
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It's not Trunks DBS... Rider4Z Β story has nothing to do with it.
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Yeah, but he can meet her
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Oh girl, I love this!Β It read very smoothly.Β That last panel doe...OOOoooOohh Trunks is PISSEDDDDDDDD
I'm kinda trying my hand at manga-fying my fanfic, too.Β It's just so much work.Β I can do like one page and then I have trouble following through XD
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It is a lot of work holy cow. But a little progress everyday adds up to big results!Β
And thank you!!
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Well, I'm at least curious to understand what happened. (I haven't been having time to start reading your story. Everything's been a mess lately ...)
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I understand. Life is tricky for us too right now.
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Before the world became a mess I was going back to studying and solving change problems right now with Corona, I'm having to keep working... Well... That's it... Wait, is this Trunks sword? Did she sacrifice herself for him?
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No and not exactly
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Ok, isso tira minhas duvidas e me enche com outras duvidas. ππππ
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It's all right. I am waiting for the next pages.
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Ooooeeeeeh, he F'ED UP! Trunks will DESTROY tha boyo!!
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Yeesss!! I absolutely loved it! Fantastic work as always π
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No celari. This is masterful and heartbreaking.
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Anytime you are so talented i have crush on Celari
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You're welcome. π
If you wanna improve, I think you should study how Toriyama creates composition in the dragonball manga. He's a master at it. Here's a video that explains it better than I can: www.google.com/search?client=mβ¦
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Hope this helps.
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This was so helpful!! Thanks!
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Thanks, which video is it? The first one?
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