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Published: 2010-09-01 16:16:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 3028; Favourites: 81; Downloads: 19
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i saw a girl, yesterday, sitting on the pavement. her back was against the molding brick, and the leaves were falling around her body like tears, her arms were scrunched up in front of her face, shielding her beauty from the town. there was a fresh scar on her wrist, still bright and burning with pain. i've been in that position many times. so i sat beside her.she moved her arms from her face, and looked at me with her muddy brown eyes, one eye covered with her black hair, and other with tears. her eyeliner had run down her face like a symphony, and no one even stopped long enough to notice-except for me; i understood.
we didn't speak. we just focused our eyes on each other. not even a blink came from her or me. it was like a photograph, two people frozen while everyone else around them moved freely. except we didn't smile, or show our tongues, we sat-blank and damaged.
she moved closer to me, putting her hand on mine, and her head on my broad, pale shoulder. she trusted me, even though we had never met before. she worked like clockwork. her blinks were seconds apart, and her heart would beat when it should. there was chaos and madness outside of our own personal-invisible room. while we stayed, in silence and shallow voices.
"i'm manda", she told me.
"nice to finally know your name, i'm keri."
"your name is beautiful"
wow, never heard that before. "i actually hate my name. try being named after carrie on little house and the prairie."
"i was named after my mother's first girlfriend, not any better", she chuckled out.
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Comments: 99
RighttotheCore In reply to ??? [2010-09-02 11:31:29 +0000 UTC]
yeah, everything i write is from my experiences, and my life.
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Still-Dreams In reply to RighttotheCore [2010-09-02 11:41:33 +0000 UTC]
It makes you a great writer.
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RighttotheCore In reply to Still-Dreams [2010-09-02 11:49:22 +0000 UTC]
that's so sweet.
thank you. <3
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Still-Dreams In reply to RighttotheCore [2010-09-02 11:53:17 +0000 UTC]
No problem
Hah, crap. I told myself earlier
not to add any more favorites.
but here I am, adding two more
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RighttotheCore In reply to Malinda-Rose [2010-09-02 00:09:51 +0000 UTC]
it doesn't compare to your writing,
but i will!
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Athazagoraphobias In reply to ??? [2010-09-01 21:47:12 +0000 UTC]
A story would be lovely. I like the interaction between the characters so far.
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RighttotheCore In reply to Athazagoraphobias [2010-09-01 21:52:35 +0000 UTC]
it actually happened last night at our school orientation. same everything. :]
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Athazagoraphobias In reply to RighttotheCore [2010-09-01 21:58:42 +0000 UTC]
The best stories tend to be based on actual events.
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JohnTheCat1 In reply to ??? [2010-09-01 21:36:55 +0000 UTC]
Of course! Do continue! This is getting interesting! *leaves to get popcorn* I love romance stories!
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RighttotheCore In reply to JohnTheCat1 [2010-09-01 21:39:16 +0000 UTC]
i'll submit a new one tonight, (:
you should watch me.<3
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JohnTheCat1 In reply to RighttotheCore [2010-09-01 21:44:15 +0000 UTC]
It's done! Could you plz watch me too? I'd love to have more people commenting on my works.
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vynn-beverly In reply to ??? [2010-09-01 21:34:01 +0000 UTC]
I think it's cute.. you should continue.
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Nyx-n-Nut In reply to ??? [2010-09-01 21:30:46 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm...yes. It's really kind of adorable...but may I make a suggestion? Don't get too dark...at the same time as not getting too fluffy.
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RighttotheCore In reply to Nyx-n-Nut [2010-09-01 21:32:42 +0000 UTC]
i'll keep that in mind. C:
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Nyx-n-Nut In reply to RighttotheCore [2010-09-01 21:39:33 +0000 UTC]
Okay. ^_^ It sounds like if you extend it it'll turn out really adroably.
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RighttotheCore In reply to Nyx-n-Nut [2010-09-01 21:40:44 +0000 UTC]
that's what i'm going for.
(:
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RighttotheCore In reply to TsuraraUzumaki [2010-09-01 21:28:33 +0000 UTC]
thank you! :]
i will.
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Apollo-Alonzo In reply to RighttotheCore [2010-09-01 21:25:18 +0000 UTC]
More Than Welcome Hun!
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beautyfulsaphire16 [2010-09-01 21:19:54 +0000 UTC]
You should continue it! its a very good piece!
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RighttotheCore In reply to beautyfulsaphire16 [2010-09-01 21:21:07 +0000 UTC]
thank you!
i'm going to.
watch me for updates on it.
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beautyfulsaphire16 In reply to RighttotheCore [2010-09-01 21:25:46 +0000 UTC]
U r devious.... But I will add u to my DAwatch....
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fuzzyalligator In reply to ??? [2010-09-01 21:18:57 +0000 UTC]
That was really nice. I think you should continue it.
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RighttotheCore In reply to fuzzyalligator [2010-09-01 21:20:28 +0000 UTC]
i think i will. :]
you should watch me, so when it's up you don't miss it.
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Akaochan In reply to ??? [2010-09-01 21:18:00 +0000 UTC]
TT^TT BRAVO!!!! *clapclapclap*
More please?
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RighttotheCore In reply to Akaochan [2010-09-01 21:21:29 +0000 UTC]
i will. (:
watch me for updates!
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Akaochan In reply to RighttotheCore [2010-09-01 21:36:00 +0000 UTC]
heheh of course! You are so talented!
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KnowsNoRules In reply to ??? [2010-09-01 18:11:21 +0000 UTC]
i was caught from the beginning. you should continue. i'd love to read it
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RighttotheCore In reply to KnowsNoRules [2010-09-01 19:58:07 +0000 UTC]
well, looks like i'm continuing it. i'll work on it later tonight. :]
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KnowsNoRules In reply to RighttotheCore [2010-09-01 20:49:12 +0000 UTC]
great! can't wait to read it
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PleasurelyPainful In reply to ??? [2010-09-01 16:53:54 +0000 UTC]
LOVE IT! Please do continue darling! C: <3
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RighttotheCore In reply to PleasurelyPainful [2010-09-01 16:55:22 +0000 UTC]
gurgle.
damn. i wish my writing block would've stayed. XD
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PleasurelyPainful In reply to RighttotheCore [2010-09-01 17:04:01 +0000 UTC]
XDD
Sorry to be a pain
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