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Published: 2014-12-04 08:33:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 345; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 0
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We all have dreams... ^^ Some of them come true, some not.(:I had most fun colouring her dress... And the colourful lights in her hair!
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Sarumaneyarou [2015-03-28 08:36:04 +0000 UTC]
Wow I absolutely love this piece. the colours that you used go together very well and you have great shading techniques. Even though it's a great piece if i have to point out things that i think is possible to improve would mainly be the shape of the girl and i guess a deeper shading would be nice to make the drawing have more depth. and also blending techniques especially on the sky would help improve the drawing a lot. I hope my comment helps you in your further artwork. I'm sure you will improve so much more with plenty of practice
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ritu13 In reply to Sarumaneyarou [2015-03-28 11:21:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!! (:
I was thinking the same about the sky, but i left it that way
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Sarumaneyarou In reply to ritu13 [2015-03-28 15:57:47 +0000 UTC]
haha it still looks great
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RubyRyn [2015-03-28 00:33:54 +0000 UTC]
I looked at this picture via the Feedback corner on Rising Artists and I really love it. It has A LOT of strong elements, and looking at your other colored pencil work, I'm blown away by your potential. I just started playing with this medium and I'm so impressed by the degree of saturation you've achieved! I also really love your compositional choices. You have an eye for how elements play together.
I think there are two major ways this piece could improve: First - the castle has some distortion. The lines in architecture have to be so specific to read well on paper and the spires are a little distracting as they are right now. And secondly, I think your values are a little monotone. By which I mean that if you run this drawing into a photo editing program and change it to black and white, it will look a little one dimensional.
Overall, I think this is reflective of so much skill - keep working with color pencil. You have so much talent! Well done!
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ritu13 In reply to RubyRyn [2015-03-28 11:29:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! (:
I see what you mean with the castle, I was struggling with the castle, mostly when I draw one by heart it ends up like it's drawn by aΒ five year old kid, and I really need to practice buildings.
Thank you for theΒ advice, I'll try to keep them and they are very helpful!! Β
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Raqonteur [2015-01-05 05:58:40 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful.Β
Her dress has come out really well and I love the reflection of the sunset in her hair.Β
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Cloudestic [2014-12-16 21:40:33 +0000 UTC]
this is just beautiful. I like everything about it.Β Β Β
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