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Riverfox237 — What Ninja?

Published: 2011-03-16 06:15:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 2663; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 10
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Description It’s finished! *passes out on the ground*

This was just a fun idea I had that also gave me the opportunity to show everyone on the crew! (Minus Nic and Nyt, our newer part-time members and resident Hat Dragon and Raid Strategist. Sorry, guys!) For anyone who doesn’t know what’s going on, I shall refer you to one of my favorite UPD inside jokes:
“Cheeko’s such a good ninja that none of the crew even knows she’s a ninja.”


Panel Notes
Panel 1: I liked this panel best before I inked in all the black parts; I was experimenting with light-on-black highlights but I’m afraid it makes the blackless personas look washed out. Oh well, live and learn, and I’m still proud of it. That is probably the nicest building I’ve ever drawn. (And put down that produce, Wings, you know we don’t have enough fountain money for such frivolities!)
Panel 2: Hey, look! I didn’t give myself all the dialogue this time! I had to digitally shrink RzR a little bit for this one; I may be interpreting it wrong, but your profile makes you look kinda short, RzR.
Panel 3: I totally forgot Doodlee’s hat twice during this comic. This was one of those times. Yay for Paint.net and the eraser tool! And tell me if I am getting across the joke of Yubria pulling up her eyepatch to look around or not. I love that joke, but I’m not sure it’s obvious enough.
Panel 4: TINY DRAGONS ARE SO HARD TO DRAW but it was worth it. I totally love this panel. The guy coming out of the store has pokemon symbols all over his shirt.
Panel 5: Lol, Yubria’s comforting hand on RzR’s shoulder is one of my favorite parts. XD You just seem like the type who would be all sympathetic like that, Yubria. The posters on the windows (behind the stupid text that blocks everything!) are an ad for 25% off of batteries, a Missing poster for a sort of lizard cat pet…thing, and an ad for the new Koala the Fluffy Dragon doll (in stores now!)
Panel 6: Love how the background on this came out. That goofy abstract silhouette totally saved this picture; I was just going to stop it at the gas station. Yes, that is a gas station. And yay for disgruntled ninjas. ^^

Btw, in case it wasn’t clear, speech bubbles were filled in with the general main color of each speaker’s skin. Except for RzR, because his skin is white, but his color theme is very black and white and so I thought this would look cool.

Little things that were oddly difficult:
-Yubria’s horns (why were these so difficult I don’t know agh).
-Doodlee’s hat and Wings’ antennae, which apparently I was incapable of remembering after the first panel until I inked everything. I also forgot the fin on Doodlee’s arm in the fifth panel and the fact that Rise’s elbows have bumps and not spikes on them, but digital editing can do amazing things!
-Those evil pillars in the sixth panel! Took me FOREVER to draw those right!
- One word: cars. Thank goodness they were in a conveniently empty part of the parking lot most of the time. I was by that time so ready to be finished with this comic that you could not force me to look up car references when they just were not important enough for me to care.
- The fact that I left out Yubria’s bag, which is very important! But I didn’t manage to work it in. Sorry, Yub!
-SPEECH BUBBLES agh I hate theeeem. Does anyone have any tips on how to make them easier to make/control? I think they came out okay here but it was REALLY frustrating most of the time. They cover up my nice drawings!

Little things I’m happy with:
-Yubria’s feet in the first panel (I dunno, I think they look like how she draws feet on her anthro-type races in her comic, Second Generations)
-RzR in general—dude was oddly easy to draw, which was a nice change of pace, esp. since he’s a GUY and I am not as great with drawing guys.
-That whole little montage of us all in the first panel
-Rise’s and Doodlee’s noses (thought they would be hard, but I ended up figuring out how to draw them)
-The gryphon ninja Wanted Poster (go ahead, try and spot it)
-How my persona came out in the first panel; I esp. like how the legs look, for some reason
-The fact that, at least as far as I can tell up to this point, I managed to keep everybody pretty near their actual original selves! The marked exception to this is the lack of Yubria’s pretty cheek swirls, but those are absent for the same reason that her coloration doesn’t show up: I couldn’t get them to look right just drawing them, and I didn’t color anybody. Hopefully one of these times I’ll get that right!

MAN that took a while! I’ve probably been working on this off and on since…what, early February maybe? Yeah, that sounds about right. This was one huge experiment on drawing comics in a bigger format. Every one of those panels was either a full or half-page of sketchpaper. I’m really pleased with how much better the details came out, even if it did take forever and scanning them totally sucks away some of the quality. I hope everyone enjoyed! ^^ You probably won’t get a comic out of me for a little while after that (esp. since I’m moving in a couple of weeks for an internship), so I hope the rest of the crew is up for some contributions!

Members of the Urban Pirate Dragons: (in comic)
: Captain
: First Mate and Repairman
: Medic and Swordsman
: Official Truck Driver and Flag Knitter
: Lookout and Officially Designated Win
: Bearer of the Bag of Infinite Holding (which has a much longer name that I can’t remember)
: Ninja Spy

The UPD’s Main Prey/Nemesis:
: Ninja Dragon

*marches off singing the Urban Pirate Dragon Theme Song at the top of her lungs, since she is the only one who knows the tune thanks to DA’s incapability of loading music*
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Comments: 113

Riverfox237 In reply to ??? [2015-06-27 18:57:09 +0000 UTC]

XD Thanks! Man, it's been ages since I did this one, but I still like how it turned out.

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MaverikElf [2011-05-23 05:43:51 +0000 UTC]

BWAAAHAHA!! This is awesome! I love how we're all so wonderfully oblivious to Cheeko's ninja-ness!

Gehhh, I wish I could find that dang UPD comic I'd started working on. >__< Ah well! I'll just start another one!

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Riverfox237 In reply to MaverikElf [2011-05-23 05:54:05 +0000 UTC]

8D Lol, I didn't realize that you hadn't read this yet! I had so much fun with it. Glad ya liked it!

Aw man, sadness! YES DO START ANOTHER ONE YES PLEASE DO It's been so long since anyone (even me) did one, we need more material! \o/

And we are GOING to have a UPD chat setup sometime soon, doggonit! It's been too long since we all talked and so it's been just as long since we came up with any crazy new material for comics! ;D Although I hear that Dragonrise and Nic are working together to do something new with the Burninator's crow's nest...

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YamiRedPen [2011-03-28 19:35:38 +0000 UTC]

That third panel. Oh goodness that third panel. Excuse me while I crack up laughing. You Urban Pirate Dragons and your shenanigans.

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Riverfox237 In reply to YamiRedPen [2011-03-28 22:38:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh my word SHE LIVES! Whatcha been up to, Yami? I've missed you!

Thank you, thank you. It's always such a wonderful thing when even those outside the group can enjoy. Heehee, I did enjoy portraying our utter obliviousness there.

Shenanigans are the BEST! Pff, what was really funny was that Yubria came out and showed us a picture she'd recently drawn of herself as a cleaning ninja. So apparantly we have TWO ninjas infiltrating our group! D: The horror!

I love these guys. XD Glad you enjoyed, Yami!

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Guilrel [2011-03-28 01:11:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh so she was Cheeko, I think she just did her name sake in the last panel. I like that he started pointing at her again when the girls were saying there wasn't a ninja in their group.

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Riverfox237 In reply to Guilrel [2011-03-28 03:22:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch! Always nice to hear I nailed the character/person in the comic! Lol, I just thought the wink/point in the last panel would be something Cheeko would do. XD I'm very pleased all around with how well this went! (I think I had to move RzR's arm a little in that panel to make sure it was pointing right at Cheeko; glad to see someone caught that. ;D)

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Guilrel In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-03-28 05:03:12 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Actually I was just talking about on how you had her mouth on the cheek like that in the end. How hard was it for you to get him to point the right way?

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Riverfox237 In reply to Guilrel [2011-03-28 21:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I gotcha. Still thanking you, as that mouth did give me some trouble. Eh, not epicly. I actually drew him first, so I put Cheeko more or less in the right position and just fiddled with his arm. But oh my WORD tiny dragons are hard to draw! That was a pain, but it was a pain well worth it!

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Guilrel In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-04-01 21:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Well that "mouth" didn't get you into trouble this time around it actually served as part of the joke in the comic.

Wow, that sounds very hard, but you're right it did pay off well in the end.

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Riverfox237 In reply to Guilrel [2011-04-03 21:58:09 +0000 UTC]

Yesss, that is excellent. Thank you for pointing that out!

yeah, it was definitely one of the more annoying panels, because I had to be really careful when putting in detail so that I woulnd't mess up; you can't hardly erase at all or the whole thing goes. It got a little easier with each dragon once I got the layout figured out, and by the time I did the random shopper in the market door, I was really happy with it. ^^

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MegSyv [2011-03-21 19:09:08 +0000 UTC]

This is so. GENIUS. XDDDD
I think your balloons look great! I don't know why you worry so much.
Holy man, I wish I had the time and motivation to draw more comics like these/you. Your writing is really great, and the expressions are stellar!

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Riverfox237 In reply to MegSyv [2011-03-22 20:13:11 +0000 UTC]

Excellent! I am pleased you enjoyed it, especially since it does sort of focus on your persona. ;D

Aw, thanks, that is reassuring. I think it's just 'cause I'm used to reading comic books where the bubbles are worked into the picture originally, so they look more natural. It's annoying having to cover all that nice work with speech bubbles.

*glee* Thank you very much, Cheeko! I hope you'll be able to contribute comics one of these days, being the stellar comic artist that you are, but of course it's a matter of having the time. I'M definitely done for a while, I'm moving to Colorado for a few months and so probably won't have time to post anything for a while.

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shadow-hostage [2011-03-17 04:40:31 +0000 UTC]

This is so awesome. XD I loved the fountain money reference. That was so made of epic win.
UPD for the win. Oh, and Cheeko's expressions just made me lawl. XD

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Riverfox237 In reply to shadow-hostage [2011-03-17 22:02:07 +0000 UTC]

Yes, no UPD comic would be truly finished without as many inside jokes inserted as possible. Heeee, thanks so much, I'm glad it was enjoyed!

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shadow-hostage In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-03-20 02:15:35 +0000 UTC]

Indeed! And I actually got that one. XD You're welcome. Oh totally! Yay for mad drawing skillz.

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Riverfox237 In reply to shadow-hostage [2011-03-20 23:56:05 +0000 UTC]

^^

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BanditRingtail3 [2011-03-17 02:14:08 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant! XD I'm faving this now!

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Riverfox237 In reply to BanditRingtail3 [2011-03-17 22:00:55 +0000 UTC]

\o/

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Yubria [2011-03-16 23:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, and my bag's name is... um... crap. I can't remember it. XD

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Riverfox237 In reply to Yubria [2011-03-17 22:01:10 +0000 UTC]

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Yubria [2011-03-16 23:49:01 +0000 UTC]

LOVE IT

And I find my line rather ironic. *cough [link] cough*

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Riverfox237 In reply to Yubria [2011-03-17 22:00:44 +0000 UTC]

*follows link and stares in mixed bewilderment/awe*

SERIOUSLY, how did you come up with this. XD Was this a joke you made up IN RESPONSE TO this comic, or did it already exist? Either way, this is awesome. You are officially our crew's Epic Cleaning Ninja (who obviously isn't REALLY a ninja, since that would be treason!)

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Yubria In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-03-21 01:27:06 +0000 UTC]

Lol- my campus job is afternoon custodial checks. So sometimes I have to run over in between classes and don't want to change completely. So last semester it was cold so I didn't bother to take off my black turtleneck I was already wearing and stuck my black custodial shirt over top. Then I pulled on my black sweatpants over the black boots I was already wearing. Then I glanced in the mirror and told my roommate "Heh heh, I look like a ninja" and she's like "Yeah, you do" and somehow we came up with the dust bunny thing. So then I kinda had to draw that. Just haven't uploaded it until now.

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Riverfox237 In reply to Yubria [2011-03-21 17:36:10 +0000 UTC]

XD That is hilarious and awesome! Even better since you already drew this before the comic; now I get why it was so ironic. I love it. Just don't let us know you are secretly a ninja, or we might have to...I don't actually know what we would do, come to think of it. We're mostly talk, aren't we. XD Most of the crew would probably feign outrage and then find some 'logical reasoning' for why you weren't REALLY a ninja of the kind that are our sworn enemies, and then we would all go out for ice cream.

Btw, thanks for sharing that story. I love silly real-life stories like that.

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Yubria In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-03-22 20:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Yeah really. XD That's why we love the UPD!

Real life is hilarious, just saying. That's where I get all my inspiration from- people ask me how I get realistic dialogue in the comic? Real life. I think I got the twins from sister's personality, come to think of it...

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Riverfox237 In reply to Yubria [2011-03-29 15:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Eeeexactly. The UPD is awesome that way.

XD That is awesome! No wonder you have such great dialogue! I’ve always believed that stuff inspired by real life is the best; that’s why I keep a quotes archive of funny things people say. It’s like with movies: movies based on real-life stories are pretty much almost always totally awesome. Ex: Hidalgo, Remember the Titans, October Sky… (I could add Titanic, but I refuse to watch that movie. But seeing as it was such a hit AND based on a real story, it probably deserves a mention anyways. )

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Yubria In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-03-29 16:26:40 +0000 UTC]

Tell me about it. Nic's thing in the last page about hitting people with flutes came almost directly from real life.
Out of those movies, I've only seen Hidalgo, and that only once, I think. But it was pretty awesome, huh?

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Riverfox237 In reply to Yubria [2011-03-29 19:19:31 +0000 UTC]

XD I saw that in the notes. It made me laugh. (Or maybe I read it when you were telling someone else inthe comments. I comment-stalk a lot.)

Hidalgo is one of my all-time favorite movies. It also solidified Viggo Mortenson as one of my favorite actors, because--dude, come on, first an epic ranger in LotR and now an epic cowboy in a desert race? There is so much awesomeness.

Oh oh, favorite quote:
Frank: You're workin' for me?
Arab Guy: It was this, or be removed of my left arm. The future will show if I have made the right decision.

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Yubria In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-03-29 23:27:59 +0000 UTC]

LOL. What's that from?
One of my favorite quotes:
Bishop/Priest Dude: Mawige.

And

Jailer: Aren't you going to lock the door?
Jailer 2: He's dead.
(this is ironic because the supposedly dead guy then escapes...)

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Riverfox237 In reply to Yubria [2011-04-25 00:55:44 +0000 UTC]

That's from Hidalgo. Love that movie.

....XD What is THAT from?

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Yubria In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-05-08 13:32:41 +0000 UTC]

Ah. It's been a while since I watched it.

Count of Monte Cristo. If you've read the book, the movie will make you cry because of all the stuff they left out/changed, but I guess the movie wasn't too bad... but then, it's been a while since I've watched that one too.

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Nashoba-Hostina [2011-03-16 15:25:27 +0000 UTC]

Buahaaa, I love it. great, amazing stuff having so many characters in each panel, and wonderfully drawn to boot!

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Riverfox237 In reply to Nashoba-Hostina [2011-03-17 22:04:23 +0000 UTC]

Heee, thanks so much, Nash! ^^ High praise from a regular comic artist! Glad you enjoyed!

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Wheatart [2011-03-16 15:05:09 +0000 UTC]

AHAHAAHAHAHHAAAA! Oh gosh... this is epically brilliant! Oh gosh oh gosh... I LOVE IT!

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Riverfox237 In reply to Wheatart [2011-03-17 21:59:14 +0000 UTC]

Yaaaaay! All those maddening nights of meticulous drawing and even more maddening hours of digital manipulation have paid off! /o/

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Wheatart In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-03-17 22:48:54 +0000 UTC]

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Riverfox237 In reply to Wheatart [2011-03-29 16:31:03 +0000 UTC]

I want this icon. This is the best icon ever.

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Wheatart In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-03-29 17:33:02 +0000 UTC]

Haha, indeed it is!

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GhostLiger [2011-03-16 14:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Haha XD Nice one. I love that last panel.

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Riverfox237 In reply to GhostLiger [2011-03-17 21:59:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! ^^

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Razor23119 [2011-03-16 08:07:59 +0000 UTC]

... Y'know what? Forget it. Just... Just forget it. *throws hands up in the air* IDIOTS.
===

In other news, I love this. I try to keep my characters easy to sketch out, considering how little ink and color I use, so I'm glad that you thought so, too.
And white lettering on black is cool, though I would have probably used the most boring combination of all-- black lettering on white. XD I may have brown hair, but it would probably not look right in conjunction to my overall color scheme.
Again, I love this. That last panel.



I probably should update my character profile soon, though. :I

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Riverfox237 In reply to Razor23119 [2011-03-17 21:55:21 +0000 UTC]

XDXDXD Exactly the reaction I was hoping for!

Yup! You were quite easy to draw! ^^ And I agree, the brown would have looked all wrong. LOL, I really probably should have gone black on white, but I thought it would blend into the background too much.

Yess. The first and the last panels were by far my favorites of the whole thing. Followed by Panels 4, 5, 2, and 3.

Do it! \o/

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Razor23119 In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-03-18 01:50:41 +0000 UTC]

XD


Nuuuuuuuu... D:

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Riverfox237 In reply to Razor23119 [2011-03-19 04:20:51 +0000 UTC]

....What am I ragging you to do again? XD

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Razor23119 In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-03-20 00:18:27 +0000 UTC]

I dunno. :>

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Riverfox237 In reply to Razor23119 [2011-03-20 21:52:57 +0000 UTC]

....Okay, we'll just pick something else HEY WHEN IS THE RP STARTING

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Razor23119 In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-03-20 23:38:05 +0000 UTC]

IT IS ALMOST READY I JUST NEED THE PROFILES FROM OUR MEMBERS.

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Riverfox237 In reply to Razor23119 [2011-03-20 23:55:52 +0000 UTC]

/o/

Yes, I just pestered Yubria about it. Although you might want to make sure she knows she needs to send it to you (if you haven't already, lol).

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Razor23119 In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-03-21 00:23:33 +0000 UTC]

Already got it; she just needs to make a few tweaks, and she's good to go. Now we just need Nyt's.

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