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According to all known laws of aviation, there is no way that a bee should be able to fly. Its wings are too small to get its fat little body off the ground. The bee, of course, flies anyway. Because bees don’t care what humans think is impossible.” SEQ. 75 - “INTRO TO BARRY” INT. BENSON HOUSE - DAY ANGLE ON: Sneakers on the ground. Camera PANS UP to reveal BARRY BENSON’S BEDROOM ANGLE ON: Barry’s hand flipping through different sweaters in his closet. BARRY Yellow black, yellow black, yellow black, yellow black, yellow black, yellow black...oohh, black and yellow... ANGLE ON: Barry wearing the sweater he picked, looking in the mirror. BARRY (CONT’D) Yeah, let’s shake it up a little. He picks the black and yellow one. He then goes to the sink, takes the top off a CONTAINER OF HONEY, and puts some honey into his hair. He squirts some in his mouth and gargles. Then he takes the lid off the bottle, and rolls some on like deodorant. CUT TO: INT. BENSON HOUSE KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS Barry’s mother, JANET BENSON, yells up at Barry. JANET BENSON Barry, breakfast is ready! CUT TO: "Bee Movie" - JS REVISIONS 8/13/07 1. INT. BARRY’S ROOM - CONTINUOUS BARRY Coming! SFX: Phone RINGING. Barry’s antennae vibrate as they RING like a phone. Barry’s hands are wet. He looks around for a towel. BARRY (CONT’D) Hang on a second! He wipes his hands on his sweater, and pulls his antennae down to his ear and mouth. BARRY (CONT'D) Hello? His best friend, ADAM FLAYMAN, is on the other end. ADAM Barry? BARRY Adam? ADAM Can you believe this is happening? BARRY Can’t believe it. I’ll pick you up. Barry sticks his stinger in a sharpener. SFX: BUZZING AS HIS STINGER IS SHARPENED. He tests the sharpness with his finger. SFX: Bing. BARRY (CONT’D) Looking sharp. ANGLE ON: Barry hovering down the hall, sliding down the staircase bannister. Barry’s mother, JANET BENSON, is in the kitchen. JANET BENSON Barry, why don’t you use the stairs? Your father paid good money for those. "Bee Movie" - JS REVISIONS 8/13/07 2. BARRY Sorry, I’m excited. Barry’s father, MARTIN BENSON, ENTERS. He’s reading a NEWSPAPER with the HEADLINE, “Queen gives birth to thousandtuplets: Resting Comfortably.” MARTIN BENSON Here’s the graduate. We’re very proud of you, Son. And a perfect report card, all B’s. JANET BENSON (mushing Barry’s hair) Very proud. BARRY Ma! I’ve got a thing going here. Barry re-adjusts his hair, starts to leave. JANET BENSON You’ve got some lint on your fuzz. She picks it off. BARRY Ow, that’s me! MARTIN BENSON Wave to us. We’ll be in row 118,000. Barry zips off. BARRY Bye! JANET BENSON Barry, I told you, stop flying in the house! CUT TO
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Somebody once told me the world is gonna roll me
I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed
She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb
In the shape of an "L" on her forehead
Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
So much to do, so much to see
So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
You'll never know if you don't go
You'll never shine if you don't glow
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid
And all that glitters is gold
Only shooting stars break the mold
It's a cool place and they say it gets colder
You're bundled…
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The Beginning
Match
Yeah, I know, she was so surprised.
Pencil
Really?
Match
Oh, for sure! I mean, it wasn't very big, just a little bug, but Flower went crazy!
Pencil
OMG, Flower is really afraid of bugs!
Match
Well, yeah. Flower thinks she's so fabulous! Like the time she asked Icy if she was beautiful...
Flashback to Flower and Ice Cube.
Flower
Ice Cube, don't you think I look beautiful?
Ice Cube
Umm, no?
Flower kicks Ice Cube.
Flashback ends.
Ice Cube
Oh, oh! I remember that! I am so gonna get revenge on her! I cannot believe how she thinks we will be her servants! I'm so glad you guys are my friends, though. Really! Bubble likes me too.
Ice Cube
Right, Bubble? Riiiiight?
Ice Cube grabs Bubble and starts hugging her
Bubble
Uh, yeah?
No! Ice Cube, STOP!
Bubble pops.
Bubble Recovery Center Edit
Bubble gets recovered in the Bubble Recovery Center and nearly gets stabbed by Pin.
Bubble
Pin, you nearly popped me!
Pin
Oh, it's not my fault.
Camera pan, revealing Blocky holding Pin.
Pin
It's that stupid Blocky here. It's his fault!
Pin kicks Blocky, sending Pin flying.
Blocky
Fine! I'll get Needle.
Blocky grabs Needle from off-screen and throws her at Bubble. Bubble ducks to dodge Needle.
Needle
Help!
Bubble
Yikes! What was that for?
Blocky
Hey! I'm just in the mood to hurt someone!
Camera pan to reveal Woody.
Woody
Ahh... ahh... AAAAAIIIIIEEEEE!
Blocky kicks Woody.
Woody
(screams)
Enjoying Life
Woody lands near Teardrop, then Leafy picks Woody up.
Leafy
Woody, get up! There's a life out there to enjoy, so, enjoy it!
Woody moves towards Teardrop with love hearts floating around him.
Woody
Awww... Aiyeee...
Teardrop angrily kicks Woody in full force.
Tennis Ball
Teardrop, calm down! Kicking Woody could severely injure him.
The camera closes up on TB's mouth.
Tennis Ball
He is balsa.
Woody passes Snowball who is hang gliding, and then hits Rocky. A piece falls off him and he screams in pain. Eraser and Pen are overhearing this, and they cringe and cover their ears.
Eraser
I can't believe what a scaredy-cat Woody is. He's so uncool. Pen though, you're cool.
Pen
Same with you, Eraser.
Gliding Accident
Snowball hits a mountain while gliding, and crashes on the top.
Snowball
Oof!
Snowball walks down the mountain, where he finds Rocky.
Snowball
Woah! Rocky! Wake up!
Snowball shakes Rocky
Rocky
Wha? Hi, SB!
Snowball sighs and throws Rocky.
Rocky
Whee! Oof!
Rocky's fall hits Tennis Ball
Rocky
Hi, TB, my good ol' friend.
The Feud
Spongy is squishing up and down with Firey and Coiny standing on top of him.
Firey
Coiny! You're so dumb!
Coiny slaps Firey.
Firey
Hey!
Coiny
Oh my gosh, Firey! You're so easy to slap!
Coiny slaps Firey 7 times
Golf Ball
Firey! Coiny! Stop fighting! And Spongy, take a bath, you're stinky!
Spongy
Sorrrrry.
The Show's Introduction
Blocky
Isn't Golf Ball bossy?
Eraser
I know! She is like a bossy bot.
Blocky, Pen and Snowball stare at Eraser.
Eraser
Uhh, you know, a bossy robot?
Blocky, Pen and Snowball are still staring at Eraser.
Eraser
Well, a robot that was built to be its bossiest! I'd do anything to get away from her...
Scene cuts a white screen with Golf Ball and Flower
Eraser
... or Flower...
Woody shows up
Eraser
... or Woody...
Spongy shows up and knocks the other contestants away. Cut back to Goiky.
Eraser
... or Spongy!
The Announcer falls from the sky and knocks over Eraser (Probably from his UFO)
Announcer
Well, then you're in luck.
Eraser
Uhhh, how?
Announcer
Well, everybody, they're building the island of luxury. It's called Dream Island. A whole square mile of paradise, a five star hotel, a casino, six restaurants, robot servants,...
Images for each of the things mentioned above are shown
Announcer
... and the winner even gets to decide who gets to come in and who doesn't.
Firey, Blocky and Bubble are shown running through, but Woody slams into Dream Island's just closed metal door
Eraser
So, umm, how much will it cost?
Announcer
Not even a penny.
Eraser
Then I'll take it!
Announcer
But what about everybody else? They want it too, you know.
Eraser
Uhh, I wouldn't give up that island for anything.
Announcer
Neither would they. So we must settle this with a contest.
The BFDI intro plays
The Contest
Announcer
So, yes. Whoever stays on the bar the longest wins.
Contestants are released from tubes onto a balance bar.
Leafy
Let's help each other!
Pin
Yeah!
Blocky has his legs up his face.
Coiny
Blocky! Wake up! What are you doing?
Spongy falls off the bar
Spongy
Uh-oh!
Flower
Out of my way!
Flower pushes Woody, Eraser, and Tennis Ball off the bar
Flower
I need my space!
Flower pushes Firey, Golf Ball, Needle and Leafy off the bar, but Leafy managed to hang onto it.
Leafy
Help me Pin!
Pin catches and saves Leafy with a "Snatch!" sound effect
Leafy
Thanks!
Forming An Alliance
Bubble
Let's form an alliance!
Match
That would do no harm!
Pencil
Let's do it!
Ice Cube
Wha? An alliance? I've got to join! Coming through!
Ice Cube slides towards the recently formed alliance, knocking Pen off the bar
Ice Cube
Sorry Pen! Hey guys, can I be part-
Ice Cube slams Pencil, Match, Bubble, Snowball and herself off the bar
Pencil
No!
Coiny’s Mistake
Coiny
Blocky! Come on, wake up!
Coiny shakes Blocky but accidentally falls off the bar.
Coiny
Oops.
Blocky grabs onto the beam and swings around, knocking Coiny off the bar.
Blocky
Coiny, don't ever... oops.
The Final 6
Texts read Final 6 come up. Though not specified in the episode, they are Flower, Leafy, Pin, Blocky, Teardrop, and Rocky.
Voices
Yeah!
Leafy
There's the evil Flower! She's still in.
Pin
Let's run her over!
Leafy
Yeah!
Blocky
Uh oh!
Pin and Leafy run toward Flower, who kicks them off.
Pin
Hey! We're flying!
Leafy
You're right! Woo-hoo!
Pin
Uh oh!
The two hit Teardrop, and they all fall. Teardrop and Pin grab Leafy, who grabs onto the beam.
Pin
Pull up!
Leafy
I... can't! Oh no! Blocky? Rocky? Help!
Blocky walks to Leafy and steps on her hand
Blocky
What is it?
Leafy
You're stepping on me!
Blocky moves his foot off of Leafy's hand
Blocky
Better?
Leafy
Yes. Now pull us up!
Blocky struggles to pull them up, but falls, and grabs onto the beam with his feet.
Leafy
Teardrop! Hold on to my other arm!
Flower
Ha ha! I'm wearing non-slip shoes so ha!
Blocky kicks Flower, and she falls off the bar
Flower
Hey! Grrr...
Flower grabs onto Pin
Pin
Ahh!
Pin sticks her tongue out at Flower, trying to lick her.
Flower
Wha? Eww! Oh my god! Uhhh... uhhh... Ahh!
Flower falls off Pin's hand, into the water below.
Leafy
Nice going, Pin. A job well done.
Pin
Teardrop, let's swing!
Leafy
grunts
Teardrop and Pin swing up to the beam.
Pin
Yay!
Leafy
Pin, alliance, remember?
Pin
Oh yeah!
Pin pulls Leafy up, and Leafy lands on Blocky's foot.
Blocky
Leafy! You're stepping on me!
Blocky falls off.
Leafy
Wha...? Oops.
Final 4
Final 4: Pin, Rocky, Teardrop, and Leafy. Teardrop starts running toward Rocky to push him off and he falls, but Teardrop falls too.
The Last Two Edit
Final 2: Pin and Leafy
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Voice
Yeah!
Leafy and Pin
Rock, Paper, Scissors!
Leafy picks Paper and Pin picks Scissors
Pin
Scissors beats paper! I get to push you off!
Leafy
Wait, hold on a sec! We didn't agree to that!
Pin
Look, when I win the island, I'll let you on to the island.
Leafy
Pin! This still isn't fair!
Pin
Only one of us can win.
Pin raises her middle finger
Leafy
Um, Pin? Wrong finger.
Pin
Whoops.
Pin quickly withdraws her finger.
Pin
He he... Anyway! Still, only one of us can win.
Announcer
That's where you're wrong. The two of you both win.
Pin
Wait, we both get the island?
Announcer
Nope! You just get to choose the teams. The teams for a much larger, longer battle to win Dream Island.
Pin
Oh great!
Leafy
It's not that bad...
The episode ends.
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N͙O͙̫̯̝͍͔ͅW̞ ̲Y̗̯̝̺̣ͅO̺̰͇͎̣U҉̰̣̱̯̖̮ͅR͚̬̯͔ ̺̬̖͈C͎H҉̗̳̦̻̭̝̦I͚̟̙͉̮̬͠Ĺ͇͈̤̝̞D̸ ̖̮̭C̗A̴͇̫̼̜̹̘̖N̲̠̻͚͙͘ ̗͎̪̜̦̺V͈̘̳͘I̲̙S̟̝̬͈͇I̷͖͚T̵̘̲̮͚̘ ̮̫̻͙̠͕̼S̥͈̼̙̟̟T̸͙͈͉̺E̸͚̠͍͙͓̺A̯̮͜Ṃ̣Y͉̪ͅ ̝͕̪̤̺̫̞͝J̖͓̱̗̬̬Ụ̧͈̘NG̘̣̜̮̤͍L͏̲E̼̹S̸̤͍̪͖̺̠,̞̻̙̼͞ ̼G͏̗R̩͖̦̥Á̯̫̤̝ͅS̰̜̭̰̝͟S̝͚͚͚̫͚̜Y͉̼̺͉ ̵̼̬P͉̮̜L̗̪̰̺͓̦̩͞A͈̬̭͔̺͓I͕̗͇NS̛̬̜̣,̦̹̦͎̲̘ ̮̗̙́A̗̫̣͕N͇͉͖̫͇̪D҉̗͚͈̩̳̰͎ ̶̝T̖͕͉̪͉̠̭H҉͍Ȩ̼̫̦̠̖ ͏̰͍̠D̵̖̳A͇̙̮R̝̘͔K̨͕͕̤̱̮͎̼ ̞͚̗Ḑ͖̪̺̟̼̝̰E̝͍P͟T͇͖̜̜͖͉H͏̘S̝͔̳̠̳̜̲ ̤O͏̻̺̠ͅF̜͔̟̻̙ ̶̖̫͖̜̫T̵̖̰̥͇͈Ḩ̠̫͇̘E̷ O͝C̣̠̹̖̝E̗̫̹̻A̴̼͔͙̪͔̲N҉̙͕͖͎̠ͅ!̩̼̖̺͎̩͝ ̷T͎̞͕͚̺̕O͉ ̬M͓̥ͅE̹̤̣E̥͚̲T̡ ͓͎A̩̗͍̯͚͠N̢D̹͚͎̣͢ ͙̯̣̪̰LE̗͈̘̥͖AR̠̤N̝͙̼ S̪̣̬̞U̯̪̕ͅͅR̯͚̜͕͍̺͙PR̖̙͟IͅS͕̀ING̷͖ ̲̥F̱͎̲̲AC̫̼̟̲T̠̥̠̟͕͘S̭͚ ̼̤A̹͎B̨̺̣̺̤̯O̱͚͠U̵̮T̘͈̰͎͉ ͎Ṯ͎̭̝H̼̟͇E̯͈ ͖̤̖̙͚̬̤M̱͚͚̭̣A̴̤̱̙͖̥̼̹G͎̞̫̲͔͖̫N̶̪̠̖̥̯̞I̠̠̳̩̩̮͇͜F̖̞̰͔̖I̭͍͇̱͎C̛͇͙̖̝ͅE̯̣̣̠N̛̲͚̦͖T̢̥̰͔͉ ̭̗A̳͈̥̝N̢͓͎̫̫̺I͈̖͕͍͘M̧A̵̠̼̯͙̦̝̠L̺̖̖͍S͘ ̶̩̳̜TͅH͙̝̬̙̭̲A̙̥̗͇̭̺͙T͇ ̜̰̭͎ͅL̫̹̜I̘͖V͓͡E̶͓̣̻͎ ͎̗͇̞T́H̶̹̼̦̞E̫̜͕͎̱̝ͅR̰̪̖͠Ę̟̦͉!͈͉̝̬̥̟ ̨̮̜A̡͔͉͖͉̻̭͉L͓̹L̼͔̻̰̀ ̫̰̜̟͠T͎H̴̪̖͖̯̼̱R̤̘̙̳̞O̶̬ͅU̟̣̗̖͍G͠H̴ ̡̭̜̺̠̞̟͔T̩̦̖͠H̩E̝͚̬̜ ͙̝̫̹̙͔ͅC̬͕̯͍͖̦̖A͏̼̰̠̟̞̙͙P͕̭͇͚̗͇ͅT͕͓̤͖͉̲̳I̲͍̞̦͝V̖̩͚͍A͇͇̭̖̰͈ͅT̢͍̯͎I҉͇N͘G̲,̶̭͓ ͏͍̥̖̝C̼O̫͍̻̩̫͖̻L̜O̩R͍̲̖̼̩F͡U̜̟͚̩͖̤Ḷ̵̲̤̤̦̹͍ ̧͙̗̼̤P̴̳̦͍A̫̹͓͖̪Ģ̝̪E̯̣̝̺͙ͅͅS̹͍̰̣̭͟ ҉̭̺͕͚O̘̟̖̥F͕̠̙͚ ̷̹͚͓̹͕̪Z̫̘OƠ̼̲B̢͉̰̮̣͔̮O̭͉͎͚̝̳O҉̥̺̗̗̯̜̘K͔̯̦̱͞S̛͕̝͍̣̟!̰̯̯͢ ̠T̜͓̠̝H͍E̯̪͚͝ͅ ̜̗̝͈̝̦͖P̨̖̪U͘B̷͈͙̖̙̪L̸͍͕͓̗̠͉̤I̝͍C̷AT̥͙̗͎̹̮̝͞I͢O̱͓̻̝̰͞N̟ ̛̞̥̫͎̗̝̬IS̡̰͖͓̼̻ ̧̬S̶̘̦̗̹̰ͅP͉͉̹Ę̙͎̲C͍̬I̯̭Ą̝͔̰͙͚̝͍L͟L̟̼Y C̘͉̥̖̰̬R̲̺ͅE҉̬̮͙̰A͍̟TE͓͎̩͢D̻̳̭̩̥̕ ̬͔̳̰̺̳F̸̼̱͙O̭̞̺̹̭͜R̴̩̦̳̦ ͙Y̲̞̣̹͈̙͙O̤̥͠ÚN̗̜͉͇͜G̰͕ ̘̱̻̤̞͠ͅṚ͙͓̬̙͝E̜̣̫̬̰̺A̜̪͖͎͇̖D̖E͕͎̖͕̹͓͟R҉̪̫̰S҉̱̤͔͔!̤͎̬ ̧͕̥͈E̟̹̜̣͉͝ͅA͕̗̫͉̝̠̯C̵̩̥H͓ͅ ̱̲̼̞̫̪͞M̀O̪̘̝̥N̜̦͝T̛̖̻̯̗H͈̟͖̮͚L̢͕Y ҉̠͓̰̭̼̼I̹̝S̳̖̥̤ͅS̖̮͓̰̻͍̘U̧͍̖̪̱͍͉͍Ȩ̟̮̺̤͍͓ ͕͜O҉̥͔͚F̼͢ ҉͉̭͉̲̦Z̻̪͚͠O̻͚̣͢O̼̹̮B̸̮̣̬̰̻̟ͅO̺OK̨͓̙S̘̭̩͍̖̠̦̕ ̵͙͚̫I̦̦͇̝̮̯S̼̝͝ ҉P̼̳̤A̗͇͎̩͉C̣̺K̗̬E̺͚̝̠̝͔͟D͚͎̮ ̠͎̀W̭͎̫I͈̰̦̺T̪H̰͚̳ͅ ͏͔̳ͅB̰̳̫R̻̙̲̯E̷Ą̮̥̟͉T̫̱̺͓H̦͍̝͙͎̳T͖A̯̟͈͔̜̯͢K̛̳̫̹͚̳͍̺I҉̟̺̲̺͇Ń̠̟͍̳͎Ǵ͖̫̘̫̥ ͏̙̘̝͉̩F̘̤̪̘̩̰̞U̵̦̤͓̝̤͚ͅL͖̖͙͚L̺̮͖̝͉̖ ̶̻̪̼̱̼̩̲C̤̱̯̙̣̝O̢LO̢̖̮͔̠̬̝Ṵ̧̱͓̳͈̫̙R̙̠E̳̦̬̗D̪͔ ̜̠̞͔̻PH̺͖̠̘̫͇͉Ơ͚͖T̶͇͕̳̞O̻͍͎͇̙̬ͅS͖̝͢,̛̜͓̹̥̳͙͚ ͔͙̲̬͕̰̯A̟N̠̠͇̼̕D͚̹͕͍͉̰͕ ̸̙͎͔̠͔̥ͅS̳͚̭̪̖̱͓C̯̻I͢È̜̩ͅN̙̮͚̞̬̥̖T͔͚̠Į̲̰F̻͙̬̲̮̲͈I͏̭C̛̱̩A̷͓͎̯̺L͍̦̩L͚̩̘̪̱̮̻Y̦͞ ͏̼̞̩̪͈̱͖AC͖C̶UŖA͠T͈͖̯͚̦͈Ę͖͈̯͔̭̘ ̝͙̞̤͙͙I͇L҉̲͓L͇͎̜͖͚̪U̲̦̬̻̲̜̥S̸͍͓͍̣T̤̮R̷̳̥͖̬ͅA̮͞T̡̪͈̪̪I̮͓̱̩O̘͓N̡͎͖S̺̖̤!̗̭̣̩̦̼ ͢P̪̟L̷̻͙̬̝̲̭Ṵ̴̣̫̮̗̣̙S̻͖̬̕ ̬G̛̻̱̯̖A̘͕̜̙M̮̥̱̳͘E̼̜̦͟S͇̟̮̲̻̳͖͡ ̲͕̘̲̲̟̱A̞̲̖̦͓̖N̴͎D̹̭̖͎ ̣P̠̞̻̼͕̬̜U̶Z͙̲͡ZL͍̯̀E̛̺S̀!̙̳̘ ̧̗̟̙̹T͉̦O̸͖̜͚̟D̝̳̥̠̜͍́A͎̗̦͈̰͉̗Ỳ,̷̤̖̻͉̮̗ ͚̤̞͔̙̖̮T̺̱̹H̹R͙͓O̟̜̘͉̺̱Ú͕͇G̮̘̩̮͕H͔̯̦͉͞ͅ ̨̹̠̪͔̭T̡HI͍̹S̸̺̭̹̯̥͇ ̠͇ÉX҉͇̞̻̤͖̜̲C̨̫̯̘̣̗L͏̳̳̖̳̥U̙̯̣̹S͏̯̪I̩V͍͓ͅE̦̕ͅͅ ̦̱͎̘̙͚T͈̭̗V̻͡ ͉̞ͅO̰̖͠F̯͡F̱̻̤̥͝ͅͅE̹̤R͇̟̱͔͔̣,̹̙̞̹͡ ̬Y̝̦̠̱͉O̳U̖̤̮͙ ̞̠͢C̠̫̣͚͜A͉̞̙̗̠̗̤N͙̻͇͓̮̯͈͟ ̷̫̪̘GE̯̘̩̟͓̩T̘ ̛̼̳T̫W͙̤E̥͕̪͕L͚̞̰̝͡V̭̙̲̖̥ͅȨ̙̩͇͈ ̹̩̯̱͢F͈̬A͖̮̭̝S̙͈̩̥̥̫͖͞C̮̖͕͇I̠͍̹͜N̵̼̲̖͉AT̩I̛̦̝̹͚̱̟̣N̷G ͏̱̩̘̬͖͕̜I͇͎̗S̜̘̫S̢̗̺͖̭̮U̳̻̳͈͙̬̖E͔S̼͖ ̳̗̯̫̠͔O̖̙̝̺̬̼̝F͙͖̤͎͇ ̪̫̦͓̝̠̞Z̵͇̻̹̰̝̳O̩͙͕O̘̩̮̦Ḅ̻̫̯̼̙͜ͅO̗͜O̢K̢̺̯͔͚̺S͡!̶̹̤̳̟ ̵͔͈̺͇͍F̺͙͙̞OR̩̜̯̹̠͕ ̙͉̻̻̩̬T͘H̖̼̭̕E͍͕ ̟̥̗̞͙͔͟S͇̭P̵̺͓̻̠̯̣̭E̡̘̻C̨͚̟̙͚͙̗ÍA͉̘̺ͅL̥̼ ̞̪͎P̲̭͙̼̹̻͎R̼̳̪͎̮͖̜I̥̘̫C̝̮̯̗̮̝E͓͡ O̭̝̠͠ͅF̱̜̲̦͘ ̯͇̮͙$̠̯1̡9̪̣͓͈͖.̱̙̤͢9̼̝̯̹̖͉̩5̛̤̟̳͙͕̣!͢ ̳͙̗̙͔WH̞̥͎̮̝̠E̸̝N͍̘ ͇̣̣̻͇͙̖́Y͚̗͇̬̠͖O͓̺̼U̻̝͖̹̮̦ͅ ̴̹̦͔C͟A͇̩̞͝L̦̫̻̮͎͟L̸̲̞͉̘͇ ͈̟̺A̧N̨̮̥D̥͚̣͔̼̰ ̦U̡SE̤̩͈͝ Y͓̖Ó͇̺͎͙͓̖̫U͓̱R͈͚̦̠͉̼͢ ͓̭̥̱̻̝C̲̘̰R̮̻̣̼͍͘E̶̥͓͚D̨I̳Ṭ̻ ̟̥̝̟͉C̞̰͢A̛̯̯̰̯R͓̹͟D̜̖̹̮,҉͍̜̱ ͢Ẁ͈E͘'̱͍L̬͚͓͚̜̹̤L ̛̤̥̮̥̗͓̤I͍Ṋ͡C̵̭͇̼̙̣L̥͎̀Ų͈̬̝D̺̪̜̦̩E͏͎̹͉̼̯ͅ ̣̟̞͔̩T͕̯̯͓̻͚H̻E͇̦̳͎̖͘ ̭̤̀EL͓̯̯͟EP̸͇̜̲̝̦̖̠H̡̳A̝Ṉ͉͠TS̢͉̤̯͇̠͙͇ ͏̩̖̞̻I͙͙͔S͘S̝̼̜͉͜Ú̝̗E̢̟̣̦ ̰͘A̢Ş ̶̝͚̠͚ͅA̹̭̤̼ ̭̻͇̗G̞͓͕̘̦͘I̘̤̤̟̥͝ͅF̦̮͡T̝!͎̬̪̟͖̕ ̞͕̳̺P̕L̖̖̲̦͠U̘͈S͇̼͠ ͕̩͖̗̦͓̣Y̜̙͎͙̩͍ͅǪ͇U̖̗͕̘̞͕ͅ'͘L̘͚͉̬L̦̞̙̞̝̬ͅ ̗̙͎̼̦̟A͉͉͎͇̼͖͔Ḽ̳̺͈S͇̥̟̩͡O̢̮̣͖̗̞ͅ ̜̘͖͚G̴͎̺͇̤̤̥É͇̠̤̩T̷̬̻̰͕̝̯ ̮̪̳̪T̷̯͔̝͍̬̳͖H͏͍Ḙ ̨C̡̩̥͔O͍͙L̗͙̤͡O͝R̩̞̱̭ͅFU͏͍̺̠̼̫̼L҉ ͍́C҉̝ͅO̹̪̪̩͟L̵̟͕̱̱̰̖L̴͎͕̠͉͓̫̠Ḙ̮̞̱̱̜C̷̙͔͕̬T̘͚̞̰͇͓̻I͓͉̩̹O̢N͚̺̜̗ ̭͍͍̰O̷̪͈̣̘F ͚̤̜̭͚͚A̹̤͍N͚͔̖͖I̥̺ͅM̶̠̼̜̭̪A̬̻͡L͏̼͕̺̼̼ S̲̼̼̜͟T̢͚I̛̯̠̩̙̠̜C͍͙̱̫̘̣͓͡K̡E̮̟̝̤̹RS͓̝̯͚̲̝͉ ̹͔̜̰̦̖͇͠A͙̤̼͍̲͇N͈̝͓̪͕͓D̴̤̟̹͎͙ ͏̝̪T͉̯͙̩͞H̯̳͈͓̕E̜̮̜͉̳͚̗ ̴͚̰̺̥ͅT̯͇͉͘Ì̖̩̖̫͍̼͓G̬̖͚E̸̗R͔̣̺̟̻͕͜ ̹̲͕̀ͅP͙̫̹̗̱͘ͅO̪͕̯̮̣̕S̬̣̹͙Ṯ̠̙̳ͅE̸̪̠͖̣̮̬R̘͔̗̱!̫̲͕͙ ͉͓̤̘͘S̲͇O͏̭̗ ̠̕O̹R̫͙̺D̥E̝̩̰͈̫̦̪R̖̰͙̩͕̜ Z̮̼̪̟͓OO͕B̯̺͚̥̗̥O̻̜͎̹̯̹̘͟O҉͉̥̖̙̪Ḵ̘S̗̻̞͟ ̶̫̫͚̗̝̥Ț̙̝̜̭̟͘O̤̫̙̭D̼̰͍A̗̱̟͚͝Y̩̺͈͙͕̬ ́A̭̖̪͚͙N̺͚D͎͙̞͈̻̭ͅ ̷͓͓̩͎͇S̥̟̲͓̰E̦͍͈͓̞͓N͏͎̣̻D͈̹́ ̀Ĺ͕̻̲͍̖E͓͉̳͚Á͉̹͇͇R͙̦̫͕͜N͙̱͓͇I͈̫̞͔N̳G͓̜͇ ̣̪̻̱̜͠A͕̲̤̥̩ͅN͙̘̫̭ͅD̜̼͘ ͍̞̦F̢̘̳͉U̘̻͘N̨͚͍ ̮̻̦̜͔̙T̬O̫͚̳̜̙̯ ͏̟͉̭͇̬̫ͅA̬̻ ͈C͈̪͟H̗I͙̤̹̪̲LD̗̩̺̟ Y̥͎̬̻͕O̞͘U̮̫̥͎ ͏̦Ḽ̲͇̠̭̳͕O̧̜̪̘̫V̺͕̺̠͜E̫̪̭̜͚͔ͅ.̟͙̣̬̞̼
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This is a very nice piece of art, certainly. Of course, there's always room to improve. Your choice of line color is nice, albeit a bit harsh on the eyes. If you were to color this piece, a duller reddish-brown tone would likely suit a bit better (of course, depending on the colors you would choose.) Though, the bright red is eye catching and draws the viewer in, which works for itself. I would like to see this piece a bit less rushed, however. The lineart is nice, but quite shaky and lacks in certain places (the pupils catch me a bit.)
Otherwise, the piece looks fairly well done, even if rushed. The expression on the character above really shows the essence of this piece, and the text -- although a the top text covers part of the piece -- is fairly well placed and certainly legible. Nice work!
(god im sorry i understand this is a joke im twisting the satire i swear)
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Finally, something that does look like a proper critique, in spite of this deviation’s nature as a joke. Well thought, and good job in pointing out the deficiencies there, although I am sure the deficiencies there were purely intentional (and maybe the deviant is more competent as an artist than this) so as to reinforce the ironic fact that this was a mere joke meant to attract attention and amusement (and, of course, laughter).
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Niggas iffy, uh, Blicky got the stiffy, uh
Got blicky, uh, drum it holds fifty, uh
Scum Gang
Pop these niggas like a wheelie nigga, you a silly nigga
In the hood with them billy niggas, and them hoover niggas
You run up and they shooting niggas, we ain't hooping nigga
Yo KB, you a loser nigga, up that Uzi nigga
On the stoop, grills in, my Georgia girl on my fro
She wanna fuck but keep her clothes on, I only want the jaw
Man, that's really all I use her for, then I kick her out the door
I don't want her, you can keep the whore, she fiending for some more
In New York my niggas don't Milly Rock, my niggas money bop
Blow a case a nigga throwing shots, I run 'em off they block
Quarter milli in the stash box, I grinded for my spot
Niggas talking 'bout that cash but my bag worth a lot
I don't fuck with no old hoes, only new hoes
Put my dick in her backbone, I pass her to my bro
I don't love her that's a sad hoe, she a bad hoe
I'mma fuck her then I dash home to the cash hoe
I'm on some rob a nigga shit, take a nigga bitch
Do the dash in the whip, count the cash in the whip
I pull up with a stick, I let that shit hit
Shout out... but I fucked that nigga bitch
Niggas iffy, uh, Blicky got the stiffy uh
Got blicky, uh, drum it holds fifty, uh
Move milli, all my niggas on fifty, uh
Talk down, you silly, uh
Hit a stain, fifty bands, all hunnids
Spinning through ya block like a pop shove it
Shoot at me I'm shooting back, I'm getting buckets
I ain't wanna take his life but nigga, fuck it
I'm on some rob a nigga shit, take a nigga bitch
Do the dash in the whip, count the cash in the whip
I pull up with a stick, I let that shit hit
Shout out... but I fucked that nigga bitch
I'm on some rob a nigga shit, take a nigga bitch
Do the dash in the whip, count the cash in the whip
I pull up with a stick, I let that shit hit
Shout out... but I fucked that nigga bitch
Scum Gang
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10/10
Would like and look at everyday
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Good golly, I sure hope you have an N-Word pass
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Is this your definition of a critique? Are you kidding? Or is all this an intentional joke between you and the critiqued artist?
I refuse to say whether this was fair or unfair; I would rather spend my time critiquing something far more worthwhile.
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It was Intentional Joke, I don't have the talent to properly Critiques someone artwork properly.
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Lmao I made a thing for people to spam critiques as a joke-
I wanted to just do something for fun, m'kay?
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My mom is not gay, she is just mentally ill that's all!
Besides, when I said no negativity, I meant it!
So, don't you EVER talk about me or my family that way! D:<
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Were y'all really insulting me and my mother or was it just a joke, because I didn't think it was so funny?
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It was literally a joke that everyone knows. I wasn't even directing it at you. You really are tone-deaf are you?
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I'm autistic and I've been on DeviantArt since October 2015, so I didn't know this whole "Gay Mom" thing was a common joke/meme.
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I'm autistic too and I know it's a joke, I've been on Deviantart for three years. Get with the program, kid.
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I don’t think it is fair to insult the deviant’s mother.
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