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Published: 2006-04-21 16:06:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 120; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Drifting to nowhere
through the void
of not existing.

No longer happy or depressed.
No longer damned or blessed.
Just locked inside yourself,
but totally at ease with this fact.

Gliding off into space,
fading out
from your daily ways.
No need to understand
the big master plan.

Just be
and experience.
No more thoughts,
no more questions.

Cause answers
were never meant
to be invented
in the first place.
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Comments: 5

SpottyWuff [2006-06-19 21:35:41 +0000 UTC]

I read "just be an experience" the first time, which was nice too, but I'm happy I always read pieces twice at least ^^

Very nice twist indeed, in the end, what I liked most though, was the part where you say "fading out from your daily ways".
So reassuringly stated, it strangely marks exactly what happens, yet carries the poem in a very "at ease" way. Nicely done!

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Robbeknol In reply to SpottyWuff [2006-06-19 22:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!

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SpottyWuff In reply to Robbeknol [2006-06-20 01:41:22 +0000 UTC]

Very welcome ^.^

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DeathRages [2006-04-26 14:32:19 +0000 UTC]

this is a ncie one... i really liked the way u showed how we curious ppl will think... and a nice twist in the ending too.... good work

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OracleGlass [2006-04-21 16:12:13 +0000 UTC]

Interesting approach to this topic..and yes I had conversations about this before, too.
A thought that never occured to before though is this:


Cause answers
were never meant
to be invented
in the first place.

That has given me something new to contemplate about : thank you

xx
Ella

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