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Balnazzara [2015-11-12 18:21:49 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I have a few things for you.

Firstly I think you need to increase the muscular definition in the shoulders and arms.  The bow she is holding looks to have at the very least a 50 lb pull and if she is suppose to have been using it for years her biceps triceps and deltiod would all be more developed, as well as her flexor and extensor masses in her lower arm and wrist.

I agree with the other commentor above about the rib cage being to high, also you have given her a very large curve in her back. It does a nice job for presentation but a trained individual would most likely have a flatter back and strong core muscles, definition in the abs and back muscles.

I have a strong background in anatomy and athletic physicality so if you want help with anything I would love to talk about it. Over all love the piece great detail and stance. 

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BrandonScottPilcher [2015-11-11 16:32:19 +0000 UTC]

To be honest, I feel her torso looks too stretched-out here. Maybe move the ribcage down a bit, closer to the hip bones.

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