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Short story I’ve been working on for a while, now. I think I can fairly say that this comic has reproduced worse than any other one I’ve ever made: The non-repro blue pencil I did my sketches in ended up being NOT non-repro, so everything copied super messy, which led to a lot of clean up (which STILL isn’t done). I actually started out liking this thing, but now I’m just tired of looking at it. So here.
Also found out my inking still isn’t up to snuff (I think next time I’ll try using a brush instead of nibs, see how that works for me). My lettering is still bad enough that I felt the need to replace it with computer lettering. Also ended up cutting dialogue/panels to keep it 10 pages or less (which was the original point, to do a 10 page story), but now when I read it it sounds rushed and stilted.
Well, whatever.

Description

Short story I’ve been working on for a while, now. I think I can fairly say that this comic has reproduced worse than any other one I’ve ever made: The non-repro blue pencil I did my sketches in ended up being NOT non-repro, so everything copied super messy, which led to a lot of clean up (which STILL isn’t done). I actually started out liking this thing, but now I’m just tired of looking at it. So here.
Also found out my inking still isn’t up to snuff (I think next time I’ll try using a brush instead of nibs, see how that works for me). My lettering is still bad enough that I felt the need to replace it with computer lettering. Also ended up cutting dialogue/panels to keep it 10 pages or less (which was the original point, to do a 10 page story), but now when I read it it sounds rushed and stilted.
Well, whatever.