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Published: 2011-07-26 00:23:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 25603; Favourites: 495; Downloads: 372
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I've really turned my whole production process on its head. This is how the rest of the pages of this comic are going to look after all that. I still need a real title for the comic itself.Check out the first pass here !
Also, Page 2 .
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Finishing is awesome... Super work dude. So you just need a title for this story.... or have you got one?
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It's called "The Prison of Kahok" because of... something to be seen
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Ah ha... Harry Potter title makers... This one's better
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Hehe, that one's pretty good.
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It's also a trope already, so it might cause something legal.
Let's try and think of something classy, something truly evocative of the feel of the piece.
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DAMN LOOKIT THEM TITTAYS
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I have a title in mind now. It's not quite as funny, but should fit
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Nothing should fit that rack. If that's possible, her tits aren't big enough.
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But everyone and their peculiarly perverted dog has a "Treasure Chest" titled story
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I think this one looks better than the first one did. Keep up the great work.
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Well, the first one was also incomplete- mostly to show the graphic design for the borders, layout and text styles. I did change those slightly here though
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Looking good. I like how you tiled the gutters slightly off the cardinals, gives it a more panicked, uncertain feel.
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I don't know artistic terms like I should
What are cardinals and gutters?
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Cardinal directions are North, South, East, West, and then the directions between each of those points- Northeast, Southeast, Southwest, Northwest. Gutters are the divisions between each panel.
So, "Off-cardinal gutters" means slightly angled panel divisons.
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Ahh! Now that I know the terminology, I'll have to use it more
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If you've never read it, Scott McCloud's "Understanding Comics" is one of the best books on the subject ever made.
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Sounds like a good read. I'll have to look it up
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Wow! looks incredible, hope to see the finished piece soon.
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This should be the finalized version of this page, more or less. Gotta keep moving
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Looks like a lot of work! But it's appreciated!
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Ha! Yeah, now I know why it takes a whole team of people to make full color comics...
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oooooh man. this looks awesome, i cant wait to see the officially finished product, this is like one of my favorite comics youve done!
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Thank you! This one should end up be an interesting comic when I get rolling
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