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Published: 2007-06-26 15:01:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 399; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 13
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Description The touch of roses does the lady bring,
The scent of sunflowers does the morning bloom,

The dance of jasmines does the lady grace,
The song of lilies does the angel sing,

The never-ending festival of life, love and majesty,
The pure white serenity of a clear early spring,

In my arms, my lady will rest,
Upon the day we will next meet,

In my arms, my lady will sleep,
The bed of flowers cradle her to peaceful slumber,

With I at her side, for eternities to come.
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Comments: 7

Rudi-Chama [2012-08-22 13:57:49 +0000 UTC]

I liked how you described the spring

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Robopoop In reply to Rudi-Chama [2012-08-27 20:09:33 +0000 UTC]

I dont know how you found my work, but thanks for commenting!

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Rudi-Chama In reply to Robopoop [2012-08-27 20:32:00 +0000 UTC]

it was random actually..
but i'm glad i read it
you're welcome!

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Oyamada-Manta [2010-11-10 11:46:07 +0000 UTC]

ah, this is poetry?

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Robopoop In reply to Oyamada-Manta [2010-11-10 11:47:32 +0000 UTC]

An 'attempt'. Really old from years ago. I focus on fiction nowadays.

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Kamitaiya [2007-08-06 06:00:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow, this makes me feel so--its like lying in a grass field with some beautiful girl and a bunch of days. Just so at peace. I can't write these, I try so much but it never works.

Do you think

[In my arms, my lady will rest,
Upon the day we will next meet,]

would flow more if you switched the words "next" and "meet"?

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Robopoop In reply to Kamitaiya [2007-11-07 12:53:14 +0000 UTC]

This came by REALLY REALLY REALLY late cause I just stumbled upon it. Sorry for the extra long delay since August, Kami.

Yeah I think it would work quite nicely, though I cant really think of anything poetic right now. The artist vibes got to me....

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