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Robot1979 In reply to jookami [2008-04-10 13:55:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeah sure... no problem.

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hombreimaginario In reply to NuclearConvoy [2008-04-07 06:32:10 +0000 UTC]

Then again, I must apologize. English is not my motherlanguage and I look for help where I can. Why don't you like it?

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NuclearConvoy In reply to hombreimaginario [2008-04-08 19:46:19 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm assuming one of the characters is Hot Rod, yes? the one torturing Dealer? (if it's not then I don't have as big a problem, and I'll explain why after you answer)

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hombreimaginario In reply to NuclearConvoy [2008-04-08 21:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Who the other two characters are is up to the readers. Doubledealer is being tortured and the interrogator could be Sideswipe, Red Alert, maybe Kup, or even Punch (my original idea). And the officer? Maybe Prowl? Hound? I like it that way

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NuclearConvoy In reply to hombreimaginario [2008-04-13 03:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah, well, the borders for the text really made me think Hot Rod...it was such a Hot Rod colour...and it didn't seem like hotrod would do that in the IDW-verse...

The dualogue also seems a bit forced, but English being your second (> language, that can happen.

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hombreimaginario In reply to BabeMause [2008-04-06 22:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Dear Miss Goertz... you're not sure you know Doubledealer?

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BabeMause In reply to hombreimaginario [2008-04-07 08:21:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that's him? I didn't recognize him in such state, sorry...

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hombreimaginario In reply to BabeMause [2008-04-07 08:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Heh, tt's okay Perhaps Iván and Rafael made such a good job screwing him up you didn't recognize his sorry face?
hope you liked it

Carlos

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BabeMause In reply to hombreimaginario [2008-04-07 08:45:43 +0000 UTC]

Or maybe it is just because I know only IDW-version of him...

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