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Name: CromesethosNickname: Crome, Seth, Dr. Sethos
Age: 20 (220 earth years)
Species: Zenomite
Gender: Male
Height: 5"9'
Weight: 154 lbs
Home Planet: Xeronax
Alignment: Anti-villian
Occupation: High ranking geneticist and biological engineer of the Zenomite race.
Abilities/Powers: Naturally good at climbing, and like all Zeno's can attach to metallic surfaces. Special zenomite plated foot armor, enhanced magnetic strength, allowing him to walk and run on walls with ease and without using his hands. He has a collar that can automatically encase his head in a air tight shield. Allowing him to walk into contaminated areas, breath under water, and survive in any places lacking oxygen for a very long time. The back is a opening to can be connected to the doctor's spine, allowing him to take control of certain equipment.
Strengths: Is very intelligent, and like most Zenomites very agile.
Weakness: Sometimes can act immature, and abuse his authority. Is relatively weak and never really fights. Usually uses his cunning to get what he wants.
Personality: He is very curious of everything even for subjects outside his field of science, even wanting to learn what others feel that Zeno's cannot. Most of the time he acts immature in his spare time, but during time for work he is very serious with his projects. He is obsessed, and at times can be considered quite mad. Though there are times when no one is looking, he will slip a coin or two to the homeless. Unlike most zenomites, he could care less about perfection. Instead he more so wants to become less artificial, which is considered a downgrade and weakness to the zenomites goal for perfection. But due to his high rank and valuable status in the zeno ranks he is not questioned much, and usually is ignored whenever he talks in depth about science to random people anyway. He is also rebellious but does a excellent job at hiding it.
Biography: The doctor is one of the very few born fertile Zenomites and is considered essential towards the growth of the zenomite race. His eye color has caused the master to place delays from collecting DNA from him because of this. Since he is a normal sized zeno, and almost considered perfect, along with his high intelligence he is the third most highest ranking scientist on his planet. His life was pretty luxurious with him getting practically anything he wanted, and never going through much training to be exposed to war. As soon as the doctor fully matured at age 17, his curiosity had gotten a hold of him since he was never allowed to communicate with non-zenos or go past Zenomite territory. He was promoted and was to be moved to work with two other well known and highly respected scientists, but he requested to keep working in his old lab with more room in order to plan his next step of studying other lifeforms in person and moving any samples he collected into his lab.
No Zenomite, especially a valuable high ranking officer like the doctor are allowed outside except for the collectors. Though being a rebel, and a intelligent one at that he was able to slip past security and fly to another planet. Finally experiencing what it was like to be on the outside. His curiosity grew as he watched random hover screens playing strange foriegn movies from a distance. Movies that showed things such as affection, love and things called dreams. He wondered why he never felt these things, and why the zenos never had movies like this besides news, or anything related to fighting. That was the day he sought out ways to experience these dreams and figure out this thing called affection. This however was the beginning of addiction and a terrible obsession that would grow into pure madness. Using the captured species the Zeno's enslave to mine ores as test subjects. With his authority not many could refuse his requests for these prisoners he took away. When trying to experience these prisoners dreams, he usually tried simulation using computers, but he never truly felt it or got what was going on. He grew fustrated trying new and different methods to try to understand these other races behaviors. Including implants, torture, and the such but alas eachtime ended in failure, and his mind slowly began to sink away into madness and rage with some prisoners eventually dying in the process. What seemed innocent in the first place would eventually turn into something horrible. He eventually ended up messing with his own DNA, and trying to acquire these abilities Zeno's lacked genetically instead. It was also what he was best at since it was his field of study. But in the end he ended up mutating and being demoted.
Other:
-Most high ranking zenomite doctors wear similar uniforms like him
-His full name is Cromesethos, but as a high ranking scientist. To show respect since Zenomites lack last names, they refer to them by the second half of their name. Making him often being called Dr. Sethos. Being called simply Crome or Cromesethos is a sign of showing little respect to him, and is somewhat insulting.
-looks like this after he mutated Β
Someone guessed it pretty close already so it is revealed to who this character is. It is Crome. I decided to remake his back story because I hated his original one. It was fine when he was a fan character, but now that he switched into being a original character his story had to change since it didn't make so much sense in some areas and had a gaping plothole with him being easily accepted as a scientist while being picked off the street. I also didn't like that he was a innocent experiment, that turned evil because of other people's doing. I want him to be a true mad scientist, and make everything his fault, and his fault only that his life went straight down the drain. A tragic character yes but not to the point it is pure tragedy like before.
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Comments: 31
Spaffi [2014-12-14 13:59:31 +0000 UTC]
That character's really amazing! I like his design and his story, personality and features are really interesting!
Now I really wonder who he is for. You made me really curious XD
First fo all, does he even have someting to do with Crome? Do they live in the same time?
Maybe ??? has something to do with CromesΒ mutation.
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RoboticMasterMindX In reply to Spaffi [2014-12-14 21:37:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
Well he does kinda live in the same time line but not exactly. He does play a huge part in Crome's mutation though
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Spaffi In reply to RoboticMasterMindX [2014-12-14 22:16:48 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome XP
So Crome was younger in that time "???" was this age?
Maybe he got so crazy he wanted to experiment with his own race.
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RoboticMasterMindX In reply to Spaffi [2014-12-14 22:40:08 +0000 UTC]
Crome was the exact same age as the doctor. Yes the doctor defiantly got crazy to the point of experimenting on his own too
But not exactly another person.
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Spaffi In reply to RoboticMasterMindX [2014-12-17 01:08:58 +0000 UTC]
Ooh so he experimented on himself? Oo
And man, that's difficult. I wanna know what's the secret XDD
Gotta be patient I guess =v=
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RoboticMasterMindX In reply to Spaffi [2014-12-17 01:37:44 +0000 UTC]
The character is Crome.
I decided to change his backstory cause when I turned him original since his old backstory had huge plotholes in it. Plus I wanted his madness to be his fault completely which leads to his downfall. He ends up mutating, losing everything. His respect, crippled himself almost,Β and further became obsessed.
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Spaffi In reply to RoboticMasterMindX [2014-12-17 04:31:55 +0000 UTC]
Hoooooly shit D8
that actually really shocked me. Which is aweome, that means the story really got something to it!
I expected everything but not that.
But now I see similarities in the face and height.
That's really kinda sad how he destroyed his body and mind all by himself and nobody could bring him out of this.
Really awesome thought there. I love that *-*
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RoboticMasterMindX In reply to Spaffi [2014-12-17 10:51:53 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, and it's a better reason as to why his race would want to desperately recapture Crome more than they would Nyx. Because he knows way too much and has had access to almost all their technology.
I thought it would had been a bit obvious from his eyes giving it away, and his jaw shape. His eyes are the exact same shade of blue Crome has XD
Zenomites aren't very caring of creatures. They can express it in a strange way to benefit themselves and show kindness but they still think of themselves superior. A slave hating Zeno such as Crome who hated not having his freedom to leave and roam around didn't have much encouragement besides from his messenger robot that had limited capabilities to encourage him even if she did kinda care for at least as much as her programming can allow. He himself felt like he was a slave, like the alien miners the zenomites force to mine, except with privileges and things placed in their heads about them being valuable and only to be stuck there for safety.
I actually wrote the first chapter for it and will be making a comic about what happened, hopefully this time complete it. Also makes the title Zeno Corruption make more sense.
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Spaffi In reply to RoboticMasterMindX [2014-12-23 21:20:37 +0000 UTC]
Ah yeah that's right. now that makes moresense.
yeah, I alread thought about that but then i didn't know if that was the eye color all Zenomites have.
and the new story is much more thought through, that's really good.
I really like it. and there's that shock moment when you realize Crome is actually that scientist you drew there.
Oh you really want to make a comic out ofd that? Amazing *--*
I'll totally be an active reader and commenter!
and yes, the title really fits XP
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RoboticMasterMindX In reply to Spaffi [2014-12-23 22:43:41 +0000 UTC]
Nah, Zenomites usually all have a extremely dark grey eye color with black pupils, with some very rare uncommon eye mutations that can vary either from orange-red and blue color. But it is so rare to the point there is only 1 or 2 of these eyes colors appearing every century.
With the story I no longer feel limited , I can do whatever I want without sticking to someone elses universe rules. It gave much more freedom.
I just hope with this comic I find motivation to complete it. I might have to make a goal to post a page weekly one day.
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Spaffi In reply to RoboticMasterMindX [2015-01-04 22:42:40 +0000 UTC]
Aaaww okay, I understand D8 that's interesting....
Even "funnier" it is that Crome, with his rare and kind of beautiful eye color managfed to become such a crazy and wrecked being.
Yes! I k now what you mean there XD
Since I think out of the IZ universe with my story of Alpha, there really are unlimmited new paths to go.
It's kind of amazing.
Yeah, that sounds good. Setting deadlines really helps with the workflow XP
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HaloLune [2014-12-13 20:25:04 +0000 UTC]
Well i have no clue XD its not Crome THATS for sure XD
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QueenDarike [2014-12-13 18:07:50 +0000 UTC]
Awwww he seems like a softy to me. :3
Oh letΒ me guess he's going to kidnap Mr. Cromey?
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RoboticMasterMindX In reply to QueenDarike [2014-12-14 07:22:34 +0000 UTC]
Kinda could be considered soft.
Nope, he's not allowed to go on adventures XD
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Marine1337 [2014-12-13 15:57:45 +0000 UTC]
He looks kinda spooky, but I do like his outfit.
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Marine1337 In reply to RoboticMasterMindX [2014-12-14 14:37:40 +0000 UTC]
You're Welcome ^^
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RoboticMasterMindX In reply to PeppermintLoser [2014-12-14 07:41:08 +0000 UTC]
Not exactly new.
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PeppermintLoser In reply to RoboticMasterMindX [2014-12-14 08:27:27 +0000 UTC]
i thought you redesgined crome again when i first saw it xD
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RoboticMasterMindX In reply to PeppermintLoser [2014-12-14 21:38:50 +0000 UTC]
Close guess actually
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PeppermintLoser In reply to RoboticMasterMindX [2014-12-14 22:25:50 +0000 UTC]
*thinks more* crome before all of those scars?
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RoboticMasterMindX In reply to PeppermintLoser [2014-12-14 22:44:30 +0000 UTC]
You pretty much probably got what I'm doing. I didn't like cromes backstory since zenos aren't that nice and are extreme perfectionists so wanted to redo it a little to make more sense and much more twisted.
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PeppermintLoser In reply to RoboticMasterMindX [2014-12-14 22:49:10 +0000 UTC]
ahhhΒ
oooo this sounds interesting o3o
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RoboticMasterMindX In reply to PeppermintLoser [2014-12-14 22:52:58 +0000 UTC]
So you win the 80 points xD I'll have to wait til I arrive home tomorrow though. I don't know how to work DA that much with my phone :'D
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PeppermintLoser In reply to RoboticMasterMindX [2014-12-14 23:12:59 +0000 UTC]
yeah depending on the type of phone, d.a. can be a bit hard v.v
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Zamayn [2014-12-13 12:55:47 +0000 UTC]
Nice, I really like his design, his biography is quite interesting. Hmm, perhaps he'll meet Chrome face-to-face, either work together, or battle each other of some kind?Β Β
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RoboticMasterMindX In reply to Zamayn [2014-12-14 07:40:29 +0000 UTC]
He most likely won't get into any fights since he fights like a flailing school girl xD
As for meeting crome, he will but won't.
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RoboticMasterMindX In reply to Shuffles101 [2014-12-14 07:36:03 +0000 UTC]
Nope. He sticks around in a lab or randomly talking to people who could care less about science all day :,D
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Shuffles101 In reply to RoboticMasterMindX [2014-12-14 14:31:17 +0000 UTC]
Ah! I've gotcha
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