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GUMM1-GUTZ [2021-07-07 14:38:19 +0000 UTC]

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Thederpfluffer [2021-05-24 08:44:20 +0000 UTC]

I know I'm late to the party but here's my thoughts on the ocs so far (with one bonus joke)

Raspberry- Oh dear god what are those object furry scientists up to? /j /lh In all seriousness, I think it's interesting to have an oc that's an object-animal hybrid. Also, she has a plesent design. I do have a small critique about it, but I'll get to it when I talk about Garrett next.

Garrett- Hello anime protag. /j /lh Just like Raspberry, the concept of an object-animal hybrid is interesting. I wonder about how he (and Raspberry) was made. Also, facial hair on objects will forever be cursed to. /lh My only critique for both his design and Raspberry's design is that they may be difficult to draw for people who draw objects with stick limbs. My suggestion would be to try to draw them in the BFB style and adjust their designs from there.

Toby- Is he a birdkeeper (I wonder if you'll get this refernce or not) /j /lh He has a nice and simple design. I love the blue gradient on his limbs. It both looks so pretty and cool.

Cotton Ball- *insert one those cute, high pitched songs here* /j /lh She has an adorable design and she looks so soft and fluffy and cuddly. Precious baby. Must protect. Also, why do I feel like she has a mother-daughter relationship with Mattress with her being the daughter and Mattress being the mom.

Cerulean- Ow the edge. /j /lh /pos He also has an interesting design. I wonder how he got all those scars. And he probably needs a hug. Poor dude.

Blank- Let some kids scribble some things onto him, that'll give him more color (I wonder if you'll get this refernce since I don't think you've ever indulged in the FNaF fan-game community). /j /lh He has a interesting backstory and motivation for his personality. With a name and design like his, yeah, I'd do anything to not been as a "super normal and average object."

Konpeito- SHINY! Like a treasure from a sunken pirate wreck. Scrub the deck and make it look, SHINY! /j /lh She's kawaii. I feel like her and Cotton Ball are bffs. Also, I like how her name has a little pep in it (KonpEITo); it fits her.

Mattress- She's a MILH (Mother I'd Love to Hug) /lh /pos She has really pretty eyelashes and eyeshadow. She also looks cuddly. Good mom vibes. If I had to critique her design on her design. Mattress don't look like that. I'd suggest look yup mattresses to see the patterns. The pattern is usually a diamond and is made by the stitching. Also, I don't know if you've done this already but also round the corners. I say this not to be mean but because I think her body maybe looks a bit too similar to Spongy's body. Other than that critique, she's a good oc. 10/10 mom. Will hug again. /pos

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Springdude11 [2021-05-12 10:49:49 +0000 UTC]

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RobotWolfgang [2021-05-12 04:21:04 +0000 UTC]

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