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Published: 2008-05-16 09:00:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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... the sun is allways shining, little boy. No fear. ... Don´t fear."A new Photoshop work-out today, for slightly 5 hours, which is better then my former, but still nothing spezial at all. ... -.- I used this turtorial this time to cope with the fire. The owner left DA because of ART theft... [link]
A nother Card, but I dont know what exactly it should be. On the one hand a soldier, a tough dog rebell which turnes his back to those he served before, or a card with which you can take over an enemy-creature under spezial circumstances and use it to defend yourself immediatly.
I quite don´t know.
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But the most important thing is: How can i make it better? every good hint increases my skills, so please, raise me
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cooowl. Thank you plenty, also for the fav
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Hmmm...
I really like the sky
about the fire: it looks real, bet you should look at some photos how real fire looks like, it is not in the one place and big, but more separated in small groups and also you forgot to add smokes, there is no fire wothout smokes, you now 
And also to improve your work don't be afraid to add more contrast, more dark colors, it is an evening, yes?
well I'm glad to see you improving
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yea, you're right. But its really not that easy. I kinda tried to use contrasts .... but it haven't really worked, yu see? ^^
But this fight isnt over yet. I takes alot of time, but in the end it is my skill i can increase with these advices. My understanding in pictures and color at all
I#m glad to have you back, maybe ^^
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well I'm back 
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Also ich finde es sehr sehenswert. Du möchtest Verbesserungsvorschläge? Das wären meine:
Ich zeichne die Mittelpunkte, also die heisstesten Punkte, von Flammen immer in einem sehr grellen gelb, bis sogar weiß. Und dann kommt erst das gelb-orange-rot.
Ausserdem zeichne ich auch immer kleine, 'losgelöste' Flämmchen über Feuerherde.
Auf Böden macht es sich oft gut, Gebäude und Personen mit einem leichten Diffusen Schatten zu umgeben. Wenn die Sonne nicht gerade grell scheint, kannst du das überall in der Realität auch sehen.
Das wär aber nur, was ich machen würde - bei meinem Stil. Nicht, dass es sonst schlecht wäre - wie gesagt, es ist trotzdem sehr sehenswert und zeigt viel Potenzial.
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danke ^^ ja, die schatten .. hm ... klinget schwer! XD mal schaun ob ich sowas gebacken bekomme :
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Just a few notes:
The lines of the fire seem a little bit too defined, maybe lighter on those would work better,
the head of the hooded soldier seems a little too narrow at the top, and the boys hand would work better coming around the inside of his cloak rather then grasping the outside, it makes the anatomy seem more natural.
It would look really cool if the soldiers arm was moved a little further under the child, allowing his body to drape itself in a slightly limp fashion, but that's just a matter of personal taste
Certainly nothing major, and when it comes right down to it I doubt I know as much about this sort of thing as you do, so take my advice as you wish
On a side note, go for the rebel idea. It seems to fit the nature of this picture far better than your other suggestion.
On the whole, great job, very artistic!
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Wow. Thanky for the feed
At the beginning. In fact these are no hooded soldiers, even if, on a checking view, I noticed that it really could be seens so, and looks .. well ... even quite cool XD
But those are kind of Dog Soldiers. They got wulf heads.
The hand. I sat here some minutes, checked your comment and the pic again and understood: You are right XD I will remembe these kind of thoughts.
Thanks for the hints.
Cheers!
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Aha! I took a second look and realized that they are in fact canine in nature! My apologies. That'll teach me to not pay attention to things outside the focus of pictures.
Glad I could help out, I think I'll add you to my watching list if you don't terribly mind
Cheers to you as well, and good luck on any future endeavors!
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Allright.
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