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rocketxjoe — momentarily recognized
Published: 2005-04-07 08:27:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 189; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description
each day passesthe distance between
breeds twice daily
soon spanning beyond
semi-exposed epicenters
exceeding eleven miles
laws of perspective
impossible to enforce -
distant nearby invisible
familiarity levels decline
fractions in comparison
elapsed memories infiltrate
purposeless letters remain
containing worthless voids
every aspect wordless
fragmented beyond belief
momentarily recognized
certainly forgotten
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Comments: 3
I think what I appreciate most about this is the dreamlike, kind of mentally disturbed honesty. I've read this through about 8 times and am at a loss for a favorite line, I sincerely enjoyed the whole. Very clever wording. I'd get onto you for punctuation, as it made me read it very rapidly with very little pause apart from the dashes (-). Never underestimate punctuation my friend, but none the less, very nice work!
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hey man, i realize its like years since you posted this comment. but i just wanted to thank you for your kind words and encouragement. Your comment is articulate and useful which is rare these days. much thanks
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...momentarily recognized, certainly forgotten??? whew... sounds kinda sad. 
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