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RogueZephyr — Cut you, Cut me...
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Published: 2005-01-04 06:38:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 85; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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I lift your shirt and reveal your soul,The cuts on your arms reveal your pain,
I kiss you gently on the wounds.
You dig your nails into my back,
The blood that drips reveals your pleasure,
I pull you closer.
I take off your pants and reveal your suffering,
The slashes on your thighs are torture to the eyes,
I glide my fingertips across them lightly.
You bite my shoulder, neck and lip,
The cuts you make release the sorrow,
For a few brief moments we are one.
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i just came to investigate who would be watching me and what do i find but this being my first poem read. kay....
i like it. i really do... it makes me want to explore the rest of your gallery see what you got, what your about and some shit. so far i like what i see.
i dont know if im suppose to find a deeper meaning than the text obvious but i like this. its original, and the act is not cheapen... though you can defiantly hear the moaning, slapping bodies writhing around where ever they may be. heaven hell....someone elses bedroom. both neither. interesting. you capture the roughness and yet at the same instance point out human flaws... humanity. are we suppose to assume those that seek violence are only running from themselves... no i dont think so. i think this is just one of those cool 'give me an itch' poems... with a lil morbid flavor for kicks.
very cool.
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mmm yea the second... give me an itch...
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I like the unity created, the two people brought together by one person's scars and the other's blood.
Nice.
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ocassionally rough sex is fun...
hmmm rough sex is always fun...ROFL
however the title seems more of a masochist (i dont know if i spelled it right) relationship...
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Yes rought sex is fun... lol... yea after I wrote the poem I gave a thought to the title... it could be better but I just liked the sound of it even if it didn't fit the poem... I am weird like that...
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hehe...it is good to hear...and the poem is brilliant...you write so openly...
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Yea... I have always felt being true to yourself is the most important thing... I am a fan of truth... there is no point in lying when the truth is better for everyone... tis just how I have lived my life...
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wow....just wow.
if you knew what i aws thinking....
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Ah... yes that is something many wish for... does your boyfriend flinch when he touches you?... he shouldn't if he does... I am sure you are a magnificent person... unconditional love is something everyone deserves... so long as you have a good heart there is someone out there to give you just that... but of course I talk to much and ask to many questions...
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he flinches if he even sees....never mind.now its my turn
\where did you get the inspiration for this poem?
where does it all stem from?
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Then he doesn't deserve you... the inspiration was an encounter with a girl I care a lot about... she has this thing about cutting herself... not like suicidally or anything she just gets off on it... almost like a fetish touching on S&M... or better more like self tatooing with scars cause she cuts in patterns and such... and well when we have sex it is easy to tell when she is getting off because she claws my back and legs... almost always drawing blood... so yea that was the inspiration for this particular piece... I like that you asked... thank you for that...
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i see.well, im not sure about him not deserving me,because noone really likes to see scars.....so shes your girlfriend?dont you worry?
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Well I like scars... they add personality to the beauty that is the human body... besides everyone has a story... she is not quite my girlfriend... yes I do worry but tis complicated... tis not suicidal or anything she just likes the pain... tis all very complicated... I believe everyone has there flaws... some people like pain because that is all they have known for so long... but I already know that she loves life so she would never take it to that point...
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few people actually find that they add character.most people are afraid,or disgusted.i dont know.i dont mind them,but i know others dont like them,and that doesnt bother me too much either
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Tis true most people are scared of them... but I am of the sort who finds that they add character... I believe they can be something of an insight to a persons nature...
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its good to know that there are people like you.
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Meh... I am but one lonely person in a world of lonely people... I just have the misfortune of being able to regognize those few rare roses in a field full of dandylions...
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and how do scars make roses,pray tell.....
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lol... scars don't make roses... roses are those rare people in life who are more amazing than they know... I have an uncanny ability to find such rarities in life... the scars are just a sign of someone who has a story that unlike most others... thus they do not make roses so much as they are a sign that someone is a rose...
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i see.are you a rosealthough to me you sound like a gardener.
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lol... I have been called many things but gardener... I like that, I like that a lot... tis very original... but nah I wouldn't say I am a gardener, just a fan of rare things... I wouldn't know if I was a rose... never really thought about myself... hmmm...
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lmao.i know i am a rose.the twisted one at the bottom,with brown around the edges and a different color to all the rest.
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I see you as the one rose that has that orange and purple shaded look to the petals... twisted? nah not any more than any one else... most people have some twist to them... you would probably be the most beautiful rose in the field... that is based on our conversations thus far... I like our conversations...
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as do i.i cant say ive met a gardener like you.few look past the thorns to see the rose at the bottom.
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Tis something I am especially good at... the most beautiful things in the world are hidden within thorns and barbs... the only way to see them is to take the risk of getting scratched...
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im sorry to dissappoint you then.beauty is as beauty does.what more is beauty than a whimsy?
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dissappoint?... you have not dissappointed at all... in fact I was pleasantly surprised... if anything I would say that you have sparked an interest in me to want to get to know you better... tis a rare thing that interest...
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what do you want to know?
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I don't know... anything... everything... what is your story... why do you have scars?... how do you feel when it rains outside?... for starters...
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you can never know everything.you can read the poems though.they might give you some grounding.you can note me i guess.
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Oh I have... they are good but only so much can be read through words on the page... it is what you reveal outside of the poems that is the purest form of you... note you eh?... hmmm...
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few people actually find that they add character.most people are afraid,or disgusted.i dont know.i dont mind them,but i know others dont like them,and that doesnt bother me too much either
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few people actually find that they add character.most people are afraid,or disgusted.i dont know.i dont mind them,but i know others dont like them,and that doesnt bother me too much either
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Tell me... tell me what you are thinking... I always liketo hear the thoughts of others...
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thoughts of whta?the poem?
um....sort of the thoughts about how it must be when people look at me....
and how i wish they could touch me without flinching.....
and how i have to show my boyfriend this poem.
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thoughts of whta?the poem?
um....sort of the thoughts about how it must be when people look at me....
and how i wish they could touch me without flinching.....
and how i have to show my boyfriend this poem.
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And I always thought rough sex was ravishing and carnal...until I read this and it made me want to... 👍: 0 ⏩: 1