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RogueZephyr — Murder of a friend...
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Published: 2005-01-02 05:20:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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You close your fucking mind,Well I'll close your fucking mouth.
I want to rip your head off and scoop out your soul,
Shove it in your face so you can see how sad it is.
Small, Pathetic, Weak and Cowardly
Words that describe what you would read in the blood on the walls,
Your blood,
Spilled by the hands of one who tried to help you.
I share advise you give back exuses.
I give friendship you give anger and rebutles.
I didn't want to argue but you always got defensive.
This time is the last though for I have put you out of both our misery.
Your head in my hand, your blood on everything, your guts spilled on the floor,
And me squatting over you, pants at my knees, shitting into your open belly.
It's better than what was in there, hell it might do you some good.
Wait I'm sorry your dead.
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Comments: 13
aaah! hahaha.... this is great. its awesome. totally cool
you capture rape and the human spirit perfectly. you remind me of an odd triangle i was unfortunately involved in reading this.
this poem captures the beauty and horror that is rage. that absolute apalling beastiality of it. the bruetality unleashed. this rocks. you spin your words so well, and im stilling waking up. this is getting faved. and i love how at the end you remember your humanity, so haplessly chucked aside. oops, you were my friend. and now you are dead mentality. an accident brought on by the frustrations of a friend and companion you only wanted to help and they slapped it aside already too gone to be helped. these things happen. its okay.
and i love the whole shitting in the carcass, defacing the dead.... real bruetal, contemptous even. rage is so wonderful in written text. ahh.
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lol... why thank you... thank you very much...
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your welcome... and really i should thank you. that was wonderfully evil... i like it when people embrace the rage and express it as something beautiful. well done... take a bow. just dont bend over or someone is likely to give you a boot up that ass... for being smart.
what i mean whos to know.
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excuse me you capture rage and the human spirit well... im a doosh that wont make any sense otherwise. im an idiot.
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Thank you... tis amazing what anger can produce whne it comes to inspiration...
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And me squatting over you, pants at my knees, shitting into your open belly.
It's better than what was in there, hell it might do you some good.
Wait I'm sorry your dead
HAHAHAHAHAHA awesome
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Too true... I have come to the conclusion that from now on anytime he say that he can't do something and he is around me I am going to punch him and tell him to stop telling himself that... in the end I think the only way to get him t ochange is to make him fear what might happen if he doesn't... sucks to have to do that but nothing else seems to work... ah well tis life I guess...
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WHOA!!!!!! Dark dude, way dark. AWESOME! Sorry that people are fuckers, Sorry that humanity only applies to select few, but I do belive it will bite them in the ass one day.
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It will... not by my hand but by my mind... one day there own actions will get them into something they won't be able to get out of... until then I will just do what I do and release my anger on words and not my friends...
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good play, safe play and constructive
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