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RogueZephyr — The Suffering
Published: 2004-12-30 08:54:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 54; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description The pain
The pain inside
It burns like fire
Like fire on dry grass
Fire that won’t be quenched
Fire with a purpose

That purpose… love
The problem… lack there of

What
What can be done
To put out that flame
That flame that burns so strong
So strong I quake

I quake with the urge
The urge to hold
The urge to touch
The urge to embrace

That urge
That urge which hurts
Hurts to hold
Hurts to release

The pain
The pain of love…
Unrequited.
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Comments: 6

mystiquepearl [2004-12-30 20:11:23 +0000 UTC]

The pain of love…
Unrequited

very nicely written...and sad.... hmm pain bring out most of the brilliant poems

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Sleepstolen In reply to mystiquepearl [2005-01-05 21:53:58 +0000 UTC]

im tellin u jay, its the Spiral! THE SPIRAL!!! AAH HA HA HAH AH!!!

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mystiquepearl In reply to Sleepstolen [2005-01-06 22:39:05 +0000 UTC]

hmm clicked the wrong reply button and you've sent this to me.. ...

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Sleepstolen In reply to mystiquepearl [2005-01-06 22:57:38 +0000 UTC]

yea, happens sometimes in fits of manic laughter. dont worry, shan't happen again, my apoligies, deer person

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mystiquepearl In reply to Sleepstolen [2005-01-06 23:06:21 +0000 UTC]

hehe no worries...i jst thought i'll return it so jason would know its for him

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RogueZephyr In reply to mystiquepearl [2004-12-31 10:00:10 +0000 UTC]

All to true... sad but true...

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