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RogueZephyr — The Unknown Feeling
Published: 2004-12-30 08:59:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 58; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I love her more than she could imagine
But how do I let her know
I tell her
She hears it with def ears
I show her
She sees it with blind eyes
So how then does a man
Who loves a woman
Express that love
To one who sees but does not
To one who hears but does not
To one who feels that she is not
Able to love or be loved.
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Comments: 3

hushthedamned [2005-01-03 16:10:02 +0000 UTC]

I love it, I myself am fond of the particular topic but your work really flows smoothly, even with the repeatition at the end, making it all the better. A lot of things really can't flow with repeatition but yours does, of which makes me very proud of you XP. Good work, fav I must

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RogueZephyr In reply to hushthedamned [2005-01-03 20:41:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav... I just type straight from my mind... it's kinda a curse... and a blessing I guess... makes for interesting IM conversation I 'll say that...

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hushthedamned In reply to RogueZephyr [2005-01-03 20:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Hah- I know how that goes, I'm the same way... At least when I type poems...I dunno about IM convos though.. Oo

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