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As one we breathe,As one we move,
One beat,
One heart,
One mind,
Two bodies,
Intertwined,
Together we are one,
so close we meld,
As one we dance,
Our bodies so close,
Sweat drips from us,
One,
Two,
One,
Two,
A rhythm we keep,
As we move through the night,
Lightning flashes in our eyes,
Fire in our hearts,
As one we close,
The finally is grand,
A climax,
An eruption,
As one we gasp,
As one.
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Comments: 2
Sleepstolen [2005-01-05 22:09:36 +0000 UTC]
this shit's been done, jay. im a dick. this is what yo uget for wanting me to read your stuff, lol. its just that u gotta give somthing else, u have to add somthing more. all u did was desribe the rationale for why we like it, not the actual purpose or connection or anything else. but girls are suckers for that, so go with what works i guess. i see u for what you are, fucker!!....literally. tho i do like yuor repetition, u captured the essence of fuck rhythm very nicely? im guessing cuz i wouldnt kno.
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RogueZephyr In reply to Sleepstolen [2005-01-06 04:20:56 +0000 UTC]
I don't think yo know what you speak of... then again you are lost in the underworld still... Mr. Deviant drugy...
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