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Published: 2016-06-05 13:21:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description This is a gift for a cousin my cousin, her birthday is in a few days. It is a short animation, but I hope to try and make it as best I can.

Any feed back and critics would be helpful. As well as what you guys think in general.
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waterfish5678901 [2016-07-10 03:27:29 +0000 UTC]

CICI!!!! This turned out so cool!! You got the animation really smooth for this being one of your first ones The only thing I would suggest in the future is a few more frams to make the wings opening to be smoother, and maybe a few more variations in the colors of the butterfly's body

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rosefirst In reply to waterfish5678901 [2016-07-10 04:56:50 +0000 UTC]

XD Thanks! Noted, just hadn't wanted it to be very long and had actually added a few frames at beginning, middle and end. Just due to I didn't like how it was feeling like a loop and not just actually opening and closing. Where do you think the best places would be to add frames? Just to all of them or anywhere in particular?

Oh! You mean a shadow right? thought about that, but wasn't sure where it could go and accidently merged a couple wrong layers together on gimp... XD Will definitely try to get that better next time! Or do you mean colors other than the black and swirled in grey?

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featherblade2008 [2016-06-05 16:03:31 +0000 UTC]

I think this is a very nice gift for your cousin^^ You've done very well with the animation I think^^ I'm just not too well knowledged with these things to give a better feedback

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rosefirst In reply to featherblade2008 [2016-06-05 17:18:34 +0000 UTC]

^^ thanks, she loves butterflies.

XD also, don't worry about it. Thanks for the feed back, it is one of the first ones i did, so I don't know much myself

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