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Published: 2014-06-21 02:40:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 836; Favourites: 87; Downloads: 5
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I really really love Sai
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Beautiful work...great expression and colours!!!
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O_O
That lighting!!!!!!
This is beautiful >.<
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Thaaank you!!Β
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XD You're welcome~
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You have a really fantastic atmosphere with this painting. The color is very vibrant, yet so soft. And your character's expression is very calm and loving, which is imparted to the viewer. The lines are a bit sketchy, so some could be cleaned up, but I really enjoy the looseness of your lines, it really fits the theme.
The only thing I think you should work on is anatomy. Even through the stylization, there are still a few things which are too off. Most notably is her chin, it needs to be lower and to the right. Her mouth should be moved the opposite way (left and up) so that they are centered. Also, character's heads are as deep as they are long, so her head is a bit narrow. The connection of her elbow also needs to be worked on, perhaps widened. Her chest should also angle upwards with her arm.
Otherwise, this looks fantastic, and your capture of creation was very successful and beautiful.
on behalf of
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Thank you so much for the suggestions! I'll try my best
Thanks for the awesome comment
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I'm glad you could find my suggestions of help 
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Amazing!
Astonishing!
Awe-Inspiering!Β
Awesome!Β
Aaaa. Really Really good!Β
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Great use of colour to create a very atmospheric piece. I especially like how you drew the eyes and hair. I also like the way you handled contrast in the piece because it's very subtle and the light and dark gently blend in with each other. Great job
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Wowowow, I really like this piece! The colors are really soft, which is a contrast against her sharper looking hair. I see a lot of people using sia, but not to make art like this. It really stands out in my inbox, which is great. There are a few mistakes though (on her ear, for example), but I know a little bit of practice will help with that. It is okay to make mistakes, so don't feel discouraged! I really hope to see more from you!
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hehe the ear xD Even I'm laughing at how weird it looks!
Thank you so much!!
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Β this picture is very interesting.
The art and deisgn is simple and smooth with warm colors. the character's clothing is simple and beautiful and how her hair seems to float due to creating light. the lighting and shading via smudgy gradient is also apealling with a visible defined light source. What could be worked would be a bit of the anatomy, because the right arm seems way to long and the left ear lower than it's usual place, and i noticed in a few spots the character0s coloring seems to extend and leave the lineart (though this i don't now if that was intentional or not to fit the style)
As for the concept, i think it's great and was deep value of molding a pure heart via golden yellow light through the right hand, (which it's said to be a creation hand, i think)
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Thank you so much for the detailed criticism! I completely agree, need to work on the anatomy... which is probably my weakest point at the moment D:
I thought the clothing was a bit plain, but glad you liked it
The coloring leaving the lineart... I just thought it didn't look too bad and hence left it like that. I have a bit of messy style I think~
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yeah, do you draw your characters froma Β puppet stick figure?
Sometimes plain can be the best
well that i asked if it was intentional or not cause some styles tend to do that
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I draw the characters by instinct, so I rarely use guidelines. I don't really like them because I feel that they restrain me a bit... art should have freedom!Β
I learn from trial and error I guess o.O
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i see, yes in a way it's right. but in my recent work, i tend to use lineart that's thin and thick in some angles to give it more dynamic
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I'm still learning how to do creative lineart... wow, your lineart is so smooth!! I'll definitely try out a more dynamic lineart 
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awww thanks. i totally wanted to improve my lineart
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And you definitely have
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The sentiment is beautiful as Β the art itself.Β
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Great colours!
The arm looks a bit weird, I think it might be because something in the hand is too long.
Really nice character! Is that an ear on her jaw?
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I agree with the arm... need to practice with body proportions!
OMG the EAR... xD Thanks for pointing that out! I usually just place it randomly as long as it's in line with the eye! WOW. The more I look at it, the more ridiculous it looks now.... OTL
Thanks so much for the constructive criticism!
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wow this is sooo cute and awesome i totally love thisΒ
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Ooooh very cute! I like SAI too! You can do all that smudgy, blendy stuff! Although that said your sense of colour definitely helps you get the most out of this.
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'smudgy, blendy stuff'
Thank you! >~<
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Heheh you know what I am talking about! Because SAI is so good at it!
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And that's why I love it too~
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