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BeckyKidus [2019-01-11 13:44:10 +0000 UTC]

A short critique by :

This is a really lovely drawing! I love the highlights and the texture of the jacket! I also like the contrast of this piece - your shadows are certainly dark enough, and the highlights are good too. The prepositions look good too. And ballpoint pen... That's impressive itself

To the things you could improve. I would draw some more shadows in the hair. Hair usually comes in clumps. It's not entirely smooth. I see you already have some highlights and shadows, but I would add some more. Also, the end of the hairs. Parts look good, but others parts are just a little too thick. Also - her fingers. Either her fingers are too long, or her nails are too small.

But all in all this is a really great! I absolutely love that jacket! Keep it up!

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Monster1One [2018-11-25 07:16:18 +0000 UTC]

Very Nice!

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worlgirl24k [2018-11-24 23:50:47 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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