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Finally moving on. Shino. Always the reasonable one that shares that reason through insect related analogies. >.>;;
Next up is Kurenai and Kiba.
EDIT: PEOPLE!!! I Quit updating this comic THREE YEARS AGO. Stop asking me to continue this comic. I have no desire to continue it. Thankyou for reading what is there.
EDIT: this doujinshi is on haitus until further notice. I'm sorry, but I just can't seem to continue. Quite frankly, my love for Naruto has died. If I ever get to catch up with the manga, I might continue, but this is all I have. Sorry guys. Thanks for reading.
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The Rest of the Story:
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Kiba and Kurenai fend off enemy shinobi, with Kiba having to use his giant dog jutsu. The other two arrive to help a bit, but the battle ends and they return home. On the way, Kiba smells blood, old blood. They happen upon a battlefield, where a few months ago it seems a caravan was travelling and was attacked. The decay around them shocks Kiba and Shino. It shocks Kiba because even though the battle took place months ago, the bodies and blood are still fresh, as if they had just been killed. Shino realizes a connection between this battlefield and Kitsune.
Kitsune learns a lot from the other students. In the final 2 weeks of her stay, she takes lessons from Kakashi when he's not away on missions, he having the excuse of being bored with no students around to teach. Since she's not really a shinobi (and because they can't risk the chance that she may be a spy), she is forced to leave Konoha when her wounds finally heal. Kakashi follows after her, seeing that she was followed by assassins (jeeze, it's been so long, i forget the name of those guys).... ANBU! that's it! lol. The students realize that she's gone, and chase after her after getting permission from the Kazekage. After reaching a far away village, using the speed skills she learned, she realizes that she was followed, and fends off the Anbu, but only long enough for Kakashi to arrive. She runs away before seeing that he knocked them out for her. Of the 4 Anbu chasing her, only 1 is left. The students arrive and find her, and together they fend the last Anbu off. They finally pin him down with Shikaru's shadow jutsu and show him the return summons from the Kazekage, and that Kitsune has been made into a citizen/shinobi. Kakashi appears, letting the kids know they did well, and that he would have stepped in if they needed him. They return to Konoha. They find that it was not the Kazekage that ordered the Anbu after Kitsune. She begins her own investigation on who ordered it.
She passes the first basic tests of being a ... gennin? >.> I don't remember the first shinobi rank. lol. With that done, she spends a few weeks enjoying being with her friends again, even participating in a few missions with them as an odd person out. Finally, she is recruited for a very difficult mission, S Class. Kakashi, Kurenai and Asuma are sent on a retrieval mission. The target was something that would instantly be known to have gone missing, so they take Kitsune along, who has a photographic memory, to look and memorize the contents of a scroll. They sneak in and the mission is a success. However, when Kitsune transcribes the written contents and gives it to the Kazekage, she realizes there was also a secret code, a code that reveals information about a secret organization named Akatsuki. She recognizes the name and remembers the events that occurred during the attack on her caravan (the same one that Kiba had found a few months prior).
There was more that happened... like she participates in the Chuunin Exams alongside Sakura. During the final exam, the battles between the gennin, Neji uses his byakugan eyes and sees her true form. She has a body, yes, but her soul floats above her body, held down by massive chains, her body as it's anchor. Shocked from the sight of it causes him to cry out. Hinata decides to use her vision as well, and collapses from a mixture of horror and sadness. From the moment of Neji's hesitation at seeing her true nature, Kitsune catches him off guard and wins the battle. She becomes a Chuunin, and so does Sakura.
I can't remember a lot of it now. =/ Eventually, she's sent on a mission. On that mission she encounters the member of Akatsuki, Hidan, that murdered her family and the rest of the caravan. She gives her best fight, but she is bested by Hidan. As she lies on the ground, bleeding to death, he finally remembers her. He recalls the battle with her father, a Knight from Europe, and mocks her for not being her father's equal in battle, and the stupidity of coming after him when she hadn't surpassed her father. It's revealed that she was not really alive. Her soul is tied down to her body. Hidan tells her about the forbidden jutsu he had used on them all, but only she was compatible with the curse. She was a walking puppet for him. And now that she was dead, all her knowledge would revert to him... unexpectedly, dogs come from nowwhere and rush to attack Hidan. He jumps away, realizing that more shinobi are on the way. He decides to leave, saying it wasn't time to reveal himself, that the plans of the Akatsuki must be upheld, even if he doesn't like it.
That scene is where a lot of questions are answered. The curse on her is the reason behind why people can't sense her presence - she's a really a ghost possessing her own body at a distance because of the chains. This is why Shino's bugs are repelled by her; her chii flows unnaturally. The blood from the caravan massacre smells exactly like Kitsune's blood. They had all been cursed too, to never decay. The reason she has a photographic memory is because she was meant to be a spy for Hidan, to eventually give all the information she had gathered to him when she finally passed on, and he would extract it from her blood that seeped out of her.
Kakashi arrives in time to find her before she dies. Desperate to save her, to not lose another student, he tries and tries every healing jutsu on her, to no avail. No healing jutsus are compatible with her, due to the curse. She smiles though, knowing he was trying to save her. Desperate to make her final moments just a little longer, he uses his sharingan on her. Inside their minds, she speaks to him for the first time. She tells him that she was from Europe, but she was happy to have made so many friends. He begs her to not die. She pauses and then tells him there was a possibility. She will die when all the blood leaves her body. The blood carries the curse that had been keeping her from crossing over, and acts as the chain between her soul and body. If he could stop the blood from leaving her body, she won't pass on. She warns him though, that she had already died. She asks him, "Which is crueler? To let me die having not avenged my family? or to keep me from resting in peace?" Kakashi decides to save her. He exits the sharingan jutsu and burns all her wounds closed. The blood can no longer escape her body, but she is incapacitated. He takes her back to Konoha.
The story ends with her in her hospital bed again. Kakashi visits her. A daffodil sits by the window. Sakura comes in and they talk. Kakashi had told her about the curse. Sakura's theory is that although not all the blood had escaped, it had weakened the curse jutsu considerably. Kitsune would not wake up until the curse had time to infect all the new blood. They decide to wait for her until she wakes up.
Sooooo yeah. Jyanpu would end on a bittersweet note. The purpose of it was to answer a lot of unanswered questions, fill in plot holes a bit. There was a LOT that was supposed to happen. Another reason I quit was I was overwhelmed by the shear scope of the story I had to tell.
Hope that satisfy's your curiosity.
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Shino and Hinata (c) Masashi Kishimoto-sama
pwned Rogue nin (c) moi
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Comments: 199
flyingslow13 In reply to ??? [2011-05-13 19:26:50 +0000 UTC]
of cource thank you for telling me
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irethculnamo [2011-02-11 00:59:49 +0000 UTC]
i loved this! although i'm a bit sad it has ended here, I'm happy you shared it. Thank you!
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RoxyRoo In reply to irethculnamo [2011-02-11 07:32:22 +0000 UTC]
^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it. There's lots of great doujinshi on DA.
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SkeleLock In reply to ??? [2011-02-05 02:37:52 +0000 UTC]
im sorry your love for naruto is dead...but i congradulate you on the wonderful doujin you started. I WISH I COULD DRAW LIKE YOU! >.< so sad!
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RoxyRoo In reply to SkeleLock [2011-02-05 05:11:41 +0000 UTC]
i loved this doujin, but yeah. I'm proud of what I accomplished.
^^ The more you draw, the better you get. Drawing comics is a great way to learn. I've seen so many online comics starting out iffy at best, but then grow to decent, if not incredible work.
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TeenCat [2010-12-09 03:02:02 +0000 UTC]
gosh while re-reading this manga i couldn't stop grinning like an idiot it'd be nice if you could continue it... some how... idk. The plot seems to be complete already, but we have yet to find out if kiba and kurenai-sensei are okay.
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RoxyRoo In reply to TeenCat [2010-12-09 05:12:52 +0000 UTC]
There's a lot more to the story that I never got to tell. *sigh*
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TwinDragonz In reply to ??? [2010-10-30 08:37:28 +0000 UTC]
i hope someday you could update again! like the old days XD and, I'm proud to say... you have talents for making doujins ^^
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lucky6s-JKT In reply to ??? [2010-10-27 11:15:50 +0000 UTC]
please make more comics i loved this one , also the manga rurouni kenshin is awesome try it ive got a pic of the main character in my tiny gallery
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RoxyRoo In reply to lucky6s-JKT [2010-10-28 00:01:07 +0000 UTC]
I have an original manga called "The Glass River" in my gallery. Check it out.
I've read Rurouni Kenshin. it's an awesome series.
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SabGDroxxx In reply to ??? [2010-09-12 08:56:23 +0000 UTC]
Zomg, my favorite team?! *bangs head* well, I can actually understand... The only reason I kept on watching was Kiba
And Shino
And Kankuro
Well, all the hot boys (not including Naruto)
I really enjoyed reading it, though, I really liked it
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PutterPen In reply to ??? [2010-09-02 16:06:37 +0000 UTC]
You would quit ON MY FAVORITE TEAM! *bangs head on the keyboard* I can't find any good doujins of Team 8.
But I can understand your lack of interest. Things have been hurtling south in the manga for quite some time. Though recently its been trying to pull itself out of the muck and mire, the going is slow.
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alarmclock1309 In reply to ??? [2010-08-02 19:44:32 +0000 UTC]
The same thing happened to me. The love died...
Then I started to read Bleach
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Shippuden23 In reply to alarmclock1309 [2010-09-13 19:30:12 +0000 UTC]
Unfortunetly Blerach is having the same problem thet Naruto manga is having XD
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keide8 [2010-06-15 00:24:31 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed reading your douj. it was really nice, You have a similar style to kishi. I am pretty much done with naruto too, but naruto is an easy world to start working on comics. Im still working on my short douj. but after that im pretty much done with naruto related things.
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cdk1 In reply to ??? [2010-05-23 18:25:51 +0000 UTC]
haha Shino and that Mantis thing, so is something he would say!
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Mariette-Tonzou In reply to ??? [2010-05-10 17:11:04 +0000 UTC]
Too bad there's no more of this I was really getting in to it
But I understand, my interest for Naruto is slowly fading.. Either it's where the series are heading, or I'm just growing up... or both
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RoxyRoo In reply to Mariette-Tonzou [2010-05-10 18:57:19 +0000 UTC]
yeah. I wish I had more time to read all the mangas that I've lost track of.
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Myouhiro-san In reply to ??? [2010-04-21 02:29:03 +0000 UTC]
You're really good. I hope you continue, the story's really interesting. I wanna know what happened to Kiba... He better not have died. No, he's too BA to die. XD
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RoxyRoo In reply to Myouhiro-san [2010-04-21 06:13:35 +0000 UTC]
He wouldn't have died anyway. He's alive in Shippuden, so I can't kill off any characters that appear later on. lol
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beyblade23 In reply to ??? [2010-04-20 06:19:59 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! But why isn't it continuing?
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ShadowBunny698 In reply to ??? [2010-04-13 18:12:05 +0000 UTC]
Awesome story ^^ i hope you continue it sometime ^^
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MikanOshima In reply to RoxyRoo [2010-04-10 04:13:15 +0000 UTC]
I wish you would make more XD
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RoxyRoo In reply to MikanOshima [2010-04-10 07:01:48 +0000 UTC]
D: aww... me too. Maybe someday.
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LostDreamer80 [2010-03-17 08:14:35 +0000 UTC]
This is so good! I only wish I could draw as good as you! Can't wait for the next page!
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RoxyRoo In reply to LostDreamer80 [2010-03-17 18:48:58 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry to tell you this, but this is as much as there is... I stopped updating over a year ago.
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Sparrow686 In reply to ??? [2010-02-24 21:44:58 +0000 UTC]
I just read it a second time! XD
I just suddenly thought of this and wanted to reread it. ^_^
I hope you continue someday, I really like this.
You made me want to draw >3<
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RoxyRoo In reply to Sparrow686 [2010-02-24 22:58:56 +0000 UTC]
TwT I'm glad it made you happy. I too wish I could continue, I just don't have time. Have fun drawing!
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NicoleGlory In reply to ??? [2009-12-23 05:29:37 +0000 UTC]
Wow... I found one page looking for Itachi... I went back to the begining and read all te way to now...
That is amazing...
And so capitivating
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guitecarla In reply to ??? [2009-10-13 22:08:13 +0000 UTC]
waaaaaa it is really awesome *-* great work! I love your style in the the story (the lines and the scenes and go on).. And you draw very very well.. Amazing! but you just know that ne? rsrs
so I won't ask you to continue... Kishimoto won't like to lost his fans for you xD rsrs... this story is more interessant than the current manga story .. but you know I will be very very happy if you do... now I am your fan xD
I know how hard is to continue a doujinshi.. I have no time to continue mine.. beause it I don't upload that yet (the another one I was working) actually I haven't start to upload it..
so, sorry for my bad english ^^"
see you!
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RoxyRoo In reply to guitecarla [2009-10-14 20:20:12 +0000 UTC]
^^ Thanks
yeah. I miss this comic. But if you like my stuff, I have an original manga you might like. It's called The Glass River.
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Lostoverlord [2009-09-22 10:43:19 +0000 UTC]
Are you going to contiune with this? It's a pretty cool Doujinshi
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RoxyRoo In reply to Lostoverlord [2009-09-22 23:12:05 +0000 UTC]
I updated my artist's comment on this page just now. Please read it.
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zo-za In reply to ??? [2009-09-11 10:52:07 +0000 UTC]
AH!
how long until the next one?
I know how life can get in the way.
I love this!
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RoxyRoo In reply to zo-za [2009-09-11 18:04:13 +0000 UTC]
It's on haitus. T.T I haven't been able to draw it lately.
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EarthBound-healer In reply to ??? [2009-08-17 04:42:00 +0000 UTC]
is there another page or not
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