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Finally moving on. Shino. Always the reasonable one that shares that reason through insect related analogies. >.>;;
Next up is Kurenai and Kiba.
EDIT: PEOPLE!!! I Quit updating this comic THREE YEARS AGO. Stop asking me to continue this comic. I have no desire to continue it. Thankyou for reading what is there.
EDIT: this doujinshi is on haitus until further notice. I'm sorry, but I just can't seem to continue. Quite frankly, my love for Naruto has died. If I ever get to catch up with the manga, I might continue, but this is all I have. Sorry guys. Thanks for reading.
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The Rest of the Story:
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Kiba and Kurenai fend off enemy shinobi, with Kiba having to use his giant dog jutsu. The other two arrive to help a bit, but the battle ends and they return home. On the way, Kiba smells blood, old blood. They happen upon a battlefield, where a few months ago it seems a caravan was travelling and was attacked. The decay around them shocks Kiba and Shino. It shocks Kiba because even though the battle took place months ago, the bodies and blood are still fresh, as if they had just been killed. Shino realizes a connection between this battlefield and Kitsune.
Kitsune learns a lot from the other students. In the final 2 weeks of her stay, she takes lessons from Kakashi when he's not away on missions, he having the excuse of being bored with no students around to teach. Since she's not really a shinobi (and because they can't risk the chance that she may be a spy), she is forced to leave Konoha when her wounds finally heal. Kakashi follows after her, seeing that she was followed by assassins (jeeze, it's been so long, i forget the name of those guys).... ANBU! that's it! lol. The students realize that she's gone, and chase after her after getting permission from the Kazekage. After reaching a far away village, using the speed skills she learned, she realizes that she was followed, and fends off the Anbu, but only long enough for Kakashi to arrive. She runs away before seeing that he knocked them out for her. Of the 4 Anbu chasing her, only 1 is left. The students arrive and find her, and together they fend the last Anbu off. They finally pin him down with Shikaru's shadow jutsu and show him the return summons from the Kazekage, and that Kitsune has been made into a citizen/shinobi. Kakashi appears, letting the kids know they did well, and that he would have stepped in if they needed him. They return to Konoha. They find that it was not the Kazekage that ordered the Anbu after Kitsune. She begins her own investigation on who ordered it.
She passes the first basic tests of being a ... gennin? >.> I don't remember the first shinobi rank. lol. With that done, she spends a few weeks enjoying being with her friends again, even participating in a few missions with them as an odd person out. Finally, she is recruited for a very difficult mission, S Class. Kakashi, Kurenai and Asuma are sent on a retrieval mission. The target was something that would instantly be known to have gone missing, so they take Kitsune along, who has a photographic memory, to look and memorize the contents of a scroll. They sneak in and the mission is a success. However, when Kitsune transcribes the written contents and gives it to the Kazekage, she realizes there was also a secret code, a code that reveals information about a secret organization named Akatsuki. She recognizes the name and remembers the events that occurred during the attack on her caravan (the same one that Kiba had found a few months prior).
There was more that happened... like she participates in the Chuunin Exams alongside Sakura. During the final exam, the battles between the gennin, Neji uses his byakugan eyes and sees her true form. She has a body, yes, but her soul floats above her body, held down by massive chains, her body as it's anchor. Shocked from the sight of it causes him to cry out. Hinata decides to use her vision as well, and collapses from a mixture of horror and sadness. From the moment of Neji's hesitation at seeing her true nature, Kitsune catches him off guard and wins the battle. She becomes a Chuunin, and so does Sakura.
I can't remember a lot of it now. =/ Eventually, she's sent on a mission. On that mission she encounters the member of Akatsuki, Hidan, that murdered her family and the rest of the caravan. She gives her best fight, but she is bested by Hidan. As she lies on the ground, bleeding to death, he finally remembers her. He recalls the battle with her father, a Knight from Europe, and mocks her for not being her father's equal in battle, and the stupidity of coming after him when she hadn't surpassed her father. It's revealed that she was not really alive. Her soul is tied down to her body. Hidan tells her about the forbidden jutsu he had used on them all, but only she was compatible with the curse. She was a walking puppet for him. And now that she was dead, all her knowledge would revert to him... unexpectedly, dogs come from nowwhere and rush to attack Hidan. He jumps away, realizing that more shinobi are on the way. He decides to leave, saying it wasn't time to reveal himself, that the plans of the Akatsuki must be upheld, even if he doesn't like it.
That scene is where a lot of questions are answered. The curse on her is the reason behind why people can't sense her presence - she's a really a ghost possessing her own body at a distance because of the chains. This is why Shino's bugs are repelled by her; her chii flows unnaturally. The blood from the caravan massacre smells exactly like Kitsune's blood. They had all been cursed too, to never decay. The reason she has a photographic memory is because she was meant to be a spy for Hidan, to eventually give all the information she had gathered to him when she finally passed on, and he would extract it from her blood that seeped out of her.
Kakashi arrives in time to find her before she dies. Desperate to save her, to not lose another student, he tries and tries every healing jutsu on her, to no avail. No healing jutsus are compatible with her, due to the curse. She smiles though, knowing he was trying to save her. Desperate to make her final moments just a little longer, he uses his sharingan on her. Inside their minds, she speaks to him for the first time. She tells him that she was from Europe, but she was happy to have made so many friends. He begs her to not die. She pauses and then tells him there was a possibility. She will die when all the blood leaves her body. The blood carries the curse that had been keeping her from crossing over, and acts as the chain between her soul and body. If he could stop the blood from leaving her body, she won't pass on. She warns him though, that she had already died. She asks him, "Which is crueler? To let me die having not avenged my family? or to keep me from resting in peace?" Kakashi decides to save her. He exits the sharingan jutsu and burns all her wounds closed. The blood can no longer escape her body, but she is incapacitated. He takes her back to Konoha.
The story ends with her in her hospital bed again. Kakashi visits her. A daffodil sits by the window. Sakura comes in and they talk. Kakashi had told her about the curse. Sakura's theory is that although not all the blood had escaped, it had weakened the curse jutsu considerably. Kitsune would not wake up until the curse had time to infect all the new blood. They decide to wait for her until she wakes up.
Sooooo yeah. Jyanpu would end on a bittersweet note. The purpose of it was to answer a lot of unanswered questions, fill in plot holes a bit. There was a LOT that was supposed to happen. Another reason I quit was I was overwhelmed by the shear scope of the story I had to tell.
Hope that satisfy's your curiosity.
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Shino and Hinata (c) Masashi Kishimoto-sama
pwned Rogue nin (c) moi
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Comments: 199
Yukihana-chan013 [2009-07-17 01:13:56 +0000 UTC]
Awesome work!! I really like so please continue it!!
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iMelancholyKid In reply to ??? [2009-07-14 06:06:09 +0000 UTC]
AWSOME!! thats all i gotta say, u gotsta keep up wit ur manga, people will be down if you dont. like kishimoto does during his 2week breaks,which he does randomly an everyone gets mad....but anyways as i was saying I LUV UR AWSOME NARUTO JYANPU! =^.^=
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RoxyRoo In reply to iMelancholyKid [2009-07-14 19:26:40 +0000 UTC]
XD
I keep trying, but I keep failing. I have too much going on right now. Thanks for reading.
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Bijuu-9 In reply to ??? [2009-07-01 21:32:24 +0000 UTC]
just curious to wonder but where's naruto?
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RoxyRoo In reply to Bijuu-9 [2009-07-03 04:33:35 +0000 UTC]
The doujinshi takes place during the 2 year gap that he's away with pervert Sannin. >w>
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kapperbeast In reply to ??? [2009-06-30 22:32:03 +0000 UTC]
is this going to continue
really strange to see shino with lifted eyebrows
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RoxyRoo In reply to kapperbeast [2009-07-01 01:26:30 +0000 UTC]
Maybe. I keep trying to start it up again, but you know how life always gets in the way.
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Izaks In reply to ??? [2009-06-25 21:45:32 +0000 UTC]
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! MUST KEEP READING (bangs head on desk)
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Izaks In reply to RoxyRoo [2009-06-26 02:56:51 +0000 UTC]
i love it and i swear that when i get the next book i will expect your OC in there XD
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flagitious In reply to ??? [2009-05-12 11:11:01 +0000 UTC]
I don't usually comment much, but I felt your comic really deserves some. I'm always a little wary of OCs in fan comics cause of the usual mary sue-ing and all that, but your comic has been excellent! Your OC is interesting without being too... indulgent on the part of the author, and most of all, I really like the interactions between the original characters. They all act as they should, you really have a great grasp of their personalities. The art is good too, its dynamic and it really does look like the style of Kishi. I know you're kinda on hiatus now, but I await the continuation of the series! Keep up the amazing job!
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RoxyRoo In reply to flagitious [2009-05-12 16:38:30 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou. Comments are always appreciated by any artist. ^^ I hope to continue this doujinshi this summer. There's still a lot of the story to tell.
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moomoocandy In reply to ??? [2009-05-12 07:20:14 +0000 UTC]
i read all of your comics..and overall..omg!! im a fan xDD..rofl you are a goddess!! i cant wait for mooore x3
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RoxyRoo In reply to moomoocandy [2009-05-12 16:36:03 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope to continue it during the summer.
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moomoocandy In reply to RoxyRoo [2009-05-12 19:40:22 +0000 UTC]
at least i have something to look forward to
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trebthegamer In reply to ??? [2009-05-09 22:44:59 +0000 UTC]
having another art block for this one?
i hope you havn't given up on this serie
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RoxyRoo In reply to trebthegamer [2009-05-10 04:11:55 +0000 UTC]
Not art block. School block. XD It's an actual reason that is acceptable.
I haven't. Once school ends I'll be updating randomly.
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angela-n00b In reply to ??? [2009-04-22 22:00:50 +0000 UTC]
u should totally sent it to make into one of the many fillers on naruto anime xD or something : )
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RoxyRoo In reply to angela-n00b [2009-04-22 22:47:04 +0000 UTC]
oh lord. No more Naruto fillers... D:
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RoxyRoo In reply to Toshio14 [2009-03-27 18:48:49 +0000 UTC]
T.T yeah. At least until summer. I can't seem to get the next pages out of me.
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Toshio14 In reply to RoxyRoo [2009-03-27 18:59:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh ): Well I hope you draw soon
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RoxyRoo In reply to Toshio14 [2009-03-27 20:54:26 +0000 UTC]
in the meantime you can read my other manga... >w>
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Toshio14 In reply to RoxyRoo [2009-03-27 22:04:02 +0000 UTC]
I know I started reading it already xD
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EmberQuill [2009-03-15 10:35:50 +0000 UTC]
Randomly found this while browsing deviantArt. It's a wonderful story, and I can't wait to see what happens next! What happened to Kiba and Kurenai?
I'm definitely adding you to my watch list.
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RoxyRoo In reply to EmberQuill [2009-03-16 04:25:10 +0000 UTC]
thanks for reading.
They're battling another ninja elsewhere...
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Nekooujo In reply to ??? [2009-03-10 05:21:03 +0000 UTC]
I love shino... he's so totally awesome!
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LizzyZuko In reply to ??? [2009-02-16 18:58:50 +0000 UTC]
no! now i have to wait.. i was enjoying just clicking next! this is amazing, love love love it. i'm adding you to my devwatchh!Can't wait till you update!Yeah.. i'm rambling now
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RoxyRoo In reply to LizzyZuko [2009-02-16 21:11:29 +0000 UTC]
I'll be updating hopefully soon. I've been busy.
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omegar112 In reply to ??? [2009-02-06 05:05:54 +0000 UTC]
bat rastard. keep kickin ass shino
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