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Finally moving on. Shino. Always the reasonable one that shares that reason through insect related analogies. >.>;;
Next up is Kurenai and Kiba.
EDIT: PEOPLE!!! I Quit updating this comic THREE YEARS AGO. Stop asking me to continue this comic. I have no desire to continue it. Thankyou for reading what is there.
EDIT: this doujinshi is on haitus until further notice. I'm sorry, but I just can't seem to continue. Quite frankly, my love for Naruto has died. If I ever get to catch up with the manga, I might continue, but this is all I have. Sorry guys. Thanks for reading.
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The Rest of the Story:
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Kiba and Kurenai fend off enemy shinobi, with Kiba having to use his giant dog jutsu. The other two arrive to help a bit, but the battle ends and they return home. On the way, Kiba smells blood, old blood. They happen upon a battlefield, where a few months ago it seems a caravan was travelling and was attacked. The decay around them shocks Kiba and Shino. It shocks Kiba because even though the battle took place months ago, the bodies and blood are still fresh, as if they had just been killed. Shino realizes a connection between this battlefield and Kitsune.
Kitsune learns a lot from the other students. In the final 2 weeks of her stay, she takes lessons from Kakashi when he's not away on missions, he having the excuse of being bored with no students around to teach. Since she's not really a shinobi (and because they can't risk the chance that she may be a spy), she is forced to leave Konoha when her wounds finally heal. Kakashi follows after her, seeing that she was followed by assassins (jeeze, it's been so long, i forget the name of those guys).... ANBU! that's it! lol. The students realize that she's gone, and chase after her after getting permission from the Kazekage. After reaching a far away village, using the speed skills she learned, she realizes that she was followed, and fends off the Anbu, but only long enough for Kakashi to arrive. She runs away before seeing that he knocked them out for her. Of the 4 Anbu chasing her, only 1 is left. The students arrive and find her, and together they fend the last Anbu off. They finally pin him down with Shikaru's shadow jutsu and show him the return summons from the Kazekage, and that Kitsune has been made into a citizen/shinobi. Kakashi appears, letting the kids know they did well, and that he would have stepped in if they needed him. They return to Konoha. They find that it was not the Kazekage that ordered the Anbu after Kitsune. She begins her own investigation on who ordered it.
She passes the first basic tests of being a ... gennin? >.> I don't remember the first shinobi rank. lol. With that done, she spends a few weeks enjoying being with her friends again, even participating in a few missions with them as an odd person out. Finally, she is recruited for a very difficult mission, S Class. Kakashi, Kurenai and Asuma are sent on a retrieval mission. The target was something that would instantly be known to have gone missing, so they take Kitsune along, who has a photographic memory, to look and memorize the contents of a scroll. They sneak in and the mission is a success. However, when Kitsune transcribes the written contents and gives it to the Kazekage, she realizes there was also a secret code, a code that reveals information about a secret organization named Akatsuki. She recognizes the name and remembers the events that occurred during the attack on her caravan (the same one that Kiba had found a few months prior).
There was more that happened... like she participates in the Chuunin Exams alongside Sakura. During the final exam, the battles between the gennin, Neji uses his byakugan eyes and sees her true form. She has a body, yes, but her soul floats above her body, held down by massive chains, her body as it's anchor. Shocked from the sight of it causes him to cry out. Hinata decides to use her vision as well, and collapses from a mixture of horror and sadness. From the moment of Neji's hesitation at seeing her true nature, Kitsune catches him off guard and wins the battle. She becomes a Chuunin, and so does Sakura.
I can't remember a lot of it now. =/ Eventually, she's sent on a mission. On that mission she encounters the member of Akatsuki, Hidan, that murdered her family and the rest of the caravan. She gives her best fight, but she is bested by Hidan. As she lies on the ground, bleeding to death, he finally remembers her. He recalls the battle with her father, a Knight from Europe, and mocks her for not being her father's equal in battle, and the stupidity of coming after him when she hadn't surpassed her father. It's revealed that she was not really alive. Her soul is tied down to her body. Hidan tells her about the forbidden jutsu he had used on them all, but only she was compatible with the curse. She was a walking puppet for him. And now that she was dead, all her knowledge would revert to him... unexpectedly, dogs come from nowwhere and rush to attack Hidan. He jumps away, realizing that more shinobi are on the way. He decides to leave, saying it wasn't time to reveal himself, that the plans of the Akatsuki must be upheld, even if he doesn't like it.
That scene is where a lot of questions are answered. The curse on her is the reason behind why people can't sense her presence - she's a really a ghost possessing her own body at a distance because of the chains. This is why Shino's bugs are repelled by her; her chii flows unnaturally. The blood from the caravan massacre smells exactly like Kitsune's blood. They had all been cursed too, to never decay. The reason she has a photographic memory is because she was meant to be a spy for Hidan, to eventually give all the information she had gathered to him when she finally passed on, and he would extract it from her blood that seeped out of her.
Kakashi arrives in time to find her before she dies. Desperate to save her, to not lose another student, he tries and tries every healing jutsu on her, to no avail. No healing jutsus are compatible with her, due to the curse. She smiles though, knowing he was trying to save her. Desperate to make her final moments just a little longer, he uses his sharingan on her. Inside their minds, she speaks to him for the first time. She tells him that she was from Europe, but she was happy to have made so many friends. He begs her to not die. She pauses and then tells him there was a possibility. She will die when all the blood leaves her body. The blood carries the curse that had been keeping her from crossing over, and acts as the chain between her soul and body. If he could stop the blood from leaving her body, she won't pass on. She warns him though, that she had already died. She asks him, "Which is crueler? To let me die having not avenged my family? or to keep me from resting in peace?" Kakashi decides to save her. He exits the sharingan jutsu and burns all her wounds closed. The blood can no longer escape her body, but she is incapacitated. He takes her back to Konoha.
The story ends with her in her hospital bed again. Kakashi visits her. A daffodil sits by the window. Sakura comes in and they talk. Kakashi had told her about the curse. Sakura's theory is that although not all the blood had escaped, it had weakened the curse jutsu considerably. Kitsune would not wake up until the curse had time to infect all the new blood. They decide to wait for her until she wakes up.
Sooooo yeah. Jyanpu would end on a bittersweet note. The purpose of it was to answer a lot of unanswered questions, fill in plot holes a bit. There was a LOT that was supposed to happen. Another reason I quit was I was overwhelmed by the shear scope of the story I had to tell.
Hope that satisfy's your curiosity.
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Shino and Hinata (c) Masashi Kishimoto-sama
pwned Rogue nin (c) moi
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Comments: 199
Hanaru-chan In reply to ??? [2009-02-01 05:17:30 +0000 UTC]
i know you say there isnt any romance, but i still see some chemistry between Kiba, Shikamaru and Kitsune. Its just tooooooooo cute to ignore! update this soon! I love it!
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RoxyRoo In reply to Hanaru-chan [2009-02-01 06:41:21 +0000 UTC]
I actually plan to. I'm working on a commission first, and then I'll be moving on with the rest of chapter 3.
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RoxyRoo In reply to silverSahar [2009-01-10 17:34:31 +0000 UTC]
That's it for now. NJ is on temporary haitus. sorry.
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crazyczzl11 In reply to ??? [2008-12-16 22:43:21 +0000 UTC]
for some odd reason i just luv shino in this page ...o.0
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tigerdaemonlover345 In reply to ??? [2008-12-07 02:59:01 +0000 UTC]
EEEWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but cool....EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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tigerdaemonlover345 In reply to RoxyRoo [2008-12-07 20:07:50 +0000 UTC]
oh...I get it...it's just eating chakra...hehe...I thought they were eating him....you know...flesh...lol....
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tigerdaemonlover345 In reply to RoxyRoo [2008-12-08 20:45:03 +0000 UTC]
lol. man I feel stupid!
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RoxyRoo In reply to tigerdaemonlover345 [2008-12-09 17:23:54 +0000 UTC]
XD don't. Cuz... you're not.
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TehKail In reply to ??? [2008-11-28 21:23:40 +0000 UTC]
I love reading this manga <3
Er- fanmanga... whatever it's awesome.
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RoxyRoo In reply to TehKail [2008-11-28 21:34:34 +0000 UTC]
fan manga, fan comic, or doujinshi. :3 many names, all work.
thanks. I'm glad you like it.
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IcEKoLd In reply to ??? [2008-11-18 01:23:50 +0000 UTC]
Man that panel with the bugs is just AWESOME! LOL - Shino and his buggy sentences.
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free-energy03 In reply to ??? [2008-11-16 01:18:13 +0000 UTC]
Whoooaaa, I didnt' think you'd go there...and actually show the bugs feasting on the victim, really creepy and well done!!! That what he gets for messin with Team 8
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RoxyRoo In reply to free-energy03 [2008-11-16 02:59:13 +0000 UTC]
Kishimoto doesn't hold back on the grossness factor. If he doesn't, why should I? Besides. I needed to get the image out of my head an on to paper so it would leave me alone! XD
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free-energy03 In reply to RoxyRoo [2008-11-16 17:48:34 +0000 UTC]
You just hit upon something very poignant there - when an image gets stuck in your head for some part of the story you're working on, you just have to get to it somehow jsut to be able to draw that image out, so it's not constantly stored in your head! It's almost like saving it somewhere so you don't forget. Well, at least that's how it is for me, and good call there really is some gross-out stuff in Naruto, Orochimaru especially...
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RoxyRoo In reply to free-energy03 [2008-11-16 18:22:05 +0000 UTC]
Orochimaru... *shivers* that one scene from that once chapter. yeah. you know what I'm talking about.
But yeah. I completely understand with that. That's how I get a LOT. Remember that page from TGR, where all the florelk are stampeding? Yeah. That's another image I had to get out of me. o.o;;
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free-energy03 In reply to RoxyRoo [2008-11-20 06:26:18 +0000 UTC]
There's many scenes involving Orochimaru that make me know what you're talking about
That was a great page full of detail and dynamic and so was the page with the aerial view of the village. Mostly though, I admire that you can visualize it and have the drive to draw it out of your mind, right now I've got a bunch of mental images and low motivation to draw it so I think that's really not good. That's why right now to me, that is inspiring to see you be able to do that.
So would you say that what you draw 100% matches what you had visualized in mind?
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RoxyRoo In reply to free-energy03 [2008-11-20 07:51:32 +0000 UTC]
exactly. he's disgustifying.
I know the feeling. I had a pretty bad art block just last week. It started around 2 weeks ago. I did not touch a single piece of paper. T.T
... hm. Well, actually it matches around 70% of the time. An image from my head often mutates a bit once I get it onto paper, like positioning of characters, or the background is edited. Stuff like that. But I will say that the florelk page was actually supposed to be a double-page view span. After drawing only one page, I was like, "screw that..." XD
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CloudyKasumi In reply to ??? [2008-11-15 23:58:07 +0000 UTC]
lawl. So like him. ;D
Man, I'd hate to have a run in with those bugs. O_o I can imagine how unpleasant it would be to have them eating off of me. >A<
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RoxyRoo In reply to CloudyKasumi [2008-11-16 02:58:04 +0000 UTC]
These bugs devour your chakra, not your flesh. :3 But either way, you have bugs all over you.
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4845sab In reply to ??? [2008-11-15 19:15:37 +0000 UTC]
WAUGH.
MOARRRRRR.
=3
I shall wait patiently.
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Eevee445 In reply to ??? [2008-11-15 18:31:40 +0000 UTC]
Awsome
the detailes are ammazing
now is kiba's turn X3
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fire-in-the-sky2523 In reply to ??? [2008-11-15 11:12:59 +0000 UTC]
feasting hmmm, i wonder what would happen if they are done eating his chakra and are still hungry, this look really good btw
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RoxyRoo In reply to fire-in-the-sky2523 [2008-11-15 18:36:27 +0000 UTC]
I don't think they'd find his sweaty flesh very tasty. XD
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AstalIchimaru In reply to ??? [2008-11-15 03:56:27 +0000 UTC]
*pulls out raid*DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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kyuketsuki-chan In reply to ??? [2008-11-15 03:20:13 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait for Kiba and Kurenai! Keep going! It's gettin' good! ^_^
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CheshFire In reply to ??? [2008-11-15 03:11:23 +0000 UTC]
Love the creepy little beetles. >
"Mantis style is very good..."-Drunken master. "...for catching bugs."-The Forbidden Kingdom
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bkomei [2008-11-15 02:48:21 +0000 UTC]
That last panel scares me, but it's well drawn c:
Nice job with the insect simile also. xD
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RoxyRoo In reply to bkomei [2008-11-15 03:08:22 +0000 UTC]
I considered putting a warning up, but by the time the reader would look at it, it would be too late.
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Shippuden23 In reply to ??? [2008-11-15 02:28:56 +0000 UTC]
AWSOME! that's defenetly something Shino would say
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Yukari-Ookami In reply to ??? [2008-11-15 02:13:51 +0000 UTC]
whoa...that last like was creepy AND totally badass! i like the mantis simile, though. it fits perfectly. ^.^
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RoxyRoo In reply to Yukari-Ookami [2008-11-15 03:09:27 +0000 UTC]
XD
I was oddly not creeped out by drawing it though. I was angry at the little things for having to draw so many. lol
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