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Published: 2013-04-06 02:05:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 165; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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this is part concept art, part poster(ish), and part practice work. I'm rather proud of it myself, but i am still not decided on minor details/things like eye shape, general tone,line thickness etc. if anybody has any ideas or opinions, i would like to hear them.oh, and here, the character names from left to right: Mera Obsi, AMEUHA, and Ken Veir.
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What exactly is the concept?
As for coloring, try yellower highlights and a cool color shadow or at least a different hue shadow color. IT isnt that bad in most areas, but with the blond's hair it is OBVIOUS. Try a more brown color for his shadows on his hair.
Eye shape isnt too bad.
Her boobs are WAY too low.
Add a bit more texture to the hair.
Your grasp of amr and leg porportions are pretty good, nd your hands are great.
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i guess what i men by concept is specifically 'character concept'(is it clear what there roles/personality's are at first glance). i was beginning to wonder if her breasts were to low. oh and thank you, i make a point to get the anatomy/proportions right.
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The roles seem sort of static.
Gun girl, sort of cheery. Manacing guardien thing, Gung-ho energetic type blond.
Right?
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sort of, the girl is part of a large family of miners, and is skilled at both field repairs and improvised equipment, but is rather cautious due to her experience with hazardous work environments. the boy is a hacker,and is very diligent but rather curious, and will often tempt fate. as far as the robot goes, hes a sort of reserved and practical sort of fellow, who has a real skill for almost any sort of weapon(and is a complete dead pan snarker to boot). but this is all still early in the game, and ill probably change some things around before I'm satisfied.
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Then work with expressions. Cautious would have less of a smile, and a different posture.
Push the poses more.
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What about the stuff we were planning? Why'd that stop?
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this IS that stuff! these are the main characters for it!
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We got that. We kinda wanted our own main characters as well, though. Either tagging along or a seperate story arc, wichever works for you.
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i had the very base core plot worked out long ago, and have figured out the ending. but i have absolutely no meat in this thing, its all bone right now. but yes, i can add things in no problem.
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or at least, the only human main characters anyway,(except for ameuha of cores)
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