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ruby923 — Catching Up On Lost Time: Chapter 2
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“Everything looks to be in order, though it could use a few more ingredients.” Kushina takes a quick smell of the ramen she was making.

“All the stuff here is based on my memories, I wonder if this will effect Naruto's taste-buds? I'm sure he will like it.” Kushina adds some vegetables in the pot as she continues her cooking.

“If Minato was here, we could truly be a family again, even if for just a short time... But then again, I don't think he would have approved how I was planning on taking care of our son.” Kushina lowers the temperature of the stove to keep the water at a reasonable rate.”

“I guess it's now or never.” Kushina takes a deep breath as she heads out of the kitchen and heads in the direction of the bathroom.

“My hands are starting to get wrinkly, I guess I should hurry up and clean myself. I've had enough time to relax in here.” Naruto begins to look around for any bar of soap or shampoo to use but quickly realizes that their was nothing or value to use. He then turns his attention to the towels near one of the shelves and decided that he would just bare with it and dry himself off.

But as soon as he begins to stand up out of the tub, his mother opens the door.

“GAAH!” Naruto quickly lowers his body back into the tub to keep himself from being exposed.

Kushina simply giggles at her son's embarrassed expression.

“Umm, mother...What are you doing in here?” Naruto states as he barely keeps his head above the water.

“Don't you remember? I said was going to be back in a moment to assist you.” Kushina states as she kneels down and opens one of the cupboards below the sink and grabs a bath sponge, soap, and some shampoo.

“Oh...So that's what you meant earlier.” Naruto's face begins to flush brightly red after understanding what her mother's intentions were.

“Both Minato and I had different views on how we wanted to bring you up. For example, I wanted you to be very out-going and self confident, while he expressed similar attributes that he wanted for you, he wanted you to grow up and follow the straight and narrow path of the Ninja. I was like...HOW BORING! I wanted you to explore the world and make stupid mistakes and learn from them like me. Not to be some goody wholesome boy like Minato was during his youth.” Kushina casually walks over to the tub and takes a seat on the side as she lathers some soap onto a bath sponge. Naruto kept his head down but did take a few quick glances as his mother continued to brush the soap onto the item while applying a little water on it.

“Umm... Well.. Mother, how did you feel when dad became the Hokage?” Naruto stutters with his words as he tries to keep up the conversation without making himself feel more awkward than he already was.

“The obvious answer would be that I was overjoyed as Hiruzen announced his successor. Though most of the villagers shared the same reaction. Orochimaru seemed to be the only one against it. Which is understandable since he had put much preparation into attaining the mantle of his sensei.” Kushina begins to lather the sponge onto Naruto's shoulders, causing his body to startle a little. His mother simply gave a warm smile as she continued her conversation.

“In a way...I was also a bit jealous and envious of Minato. He managed to attain his childhood dream of becoming Hokage before me. I really wanted to become the first female Hokage and show the Hidden Leaf a woman's touch, hehe.” Kushina smirks as she continues to clean the upper back of her son.

“Well. If it makes you feel any better. Granny Tsunade has become the Fifth Hokage and is doing a great job with the village.” Naruto takes a deep breath as his mother begins to work her way down his back while he remained motionless in the bath.

“Really!? That's great news. Before she left the village to attend her gambling needs, we use to have many drinking games together with Minato and Jiraiya. But after a while it go so predictable with only me and Tsunade being the only ones left. I swear, the two of them maybe strong in NinJutsu but they are complete lightweights when it comes to the art of drinking.” Kushina without hesitation uses her left arm put's it around Naruto mid-section as she lifts him slightly out of the water and begins to scrub his rear-end.

A look of embarrassment and shock could be seen on Naruto's face. He turned his head slightly but could only see the back of his mother's shoulders and long red hair. Many thoughts where going through his mind at the moment. He felt so exposed and vulnerable at the moment. His mind was trying to muster an excuse to escape his situation. But before he could think of any response, he began to notice how warm his mother's arm was.  He never gave it much thought but he started to feel more at peace with himself and slowly tried to calm himself down mentally.

“So this is what it feels like...A mother's warmth. For the first time ever. I can be with mom. I...I....AHHH!!!” Naruto was cutoff from his little speech in his mind as he felt his rectom being washed thoroughly.

“MOTHER, WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?” Naruto squirms just enough that Kushina releases her left arm over the boy's mid-section causing his body to hit face first into the water.

“I'm sorry, did I hurt you, Naruto?” Kushina asks with a worried tone.

“Umm...No...I'm ok, it's just...I was...Caught off by surprise, that's all.” Naruto let's out a slight chuckle, as he quickly maneuvers himself into a sitting position in the tub while facing his mother.

“That's a relief, I thought I did something wrong.” Kushina states with a sigh.

“Ya...”Naruto places his left hand in the water as he rubs his butt a bit, feeling more awkward than he wanted to be.

Kushina slowly kneels down near the tub as she adjusts to clean Naruto's chest.

“So how have you adjusted with your life with the Nine-Tails, Naruto?

Naruto didn't respond, he was completely distracted as his eyes were focused as Kushina began to use the sponge under his arms.

Kushina splashes some water onto the boy's face taking him out of his trance like state.

“Did you hear what I said, Naruto?” Kushina asks as stops for a moment.

“Umm...Ya, I did... During my childhood I didn't even know that I had him inside me. It was only until I started training with the pervert hermit that I understood why so many people shunned me and called me the Nine Tails. As you could have told from our fight earlier, we haven't exactly gotten along all that well.” Naruto chuckles nervously still keeping his eye contact away from his mother's.

“Words probably can't even describe how rough your childhood must have been. To be treated as an outcast by people that didn't or wouldn’t understand your situation. Worst of all, I wasn't their to provide the love and protection that you needed. It's so frustrating...” Kushina stops wiping Naruto mid-section for a moment and squeezes the sponge as she reflects on past events.

Hearing his mother's change of tone in her voice, caught his attention, he took a glance at his mother, she wasn't staring at him, she seemed to be looking off into the distance, obviously deep in thought.

“Umm...Mother...”Naruto takes his right hand out of the water and reaches up and wiggles Kushina's arm a bit.

“Oh I'm so sorry, Naruto. I was just thinking about the Nine-Tails incident and if there was something that could have been done to prevent you from taking on such a burden. Kushina continues with scrubbing Naruto's stomach.

Naruto wanted to reply to her and let his mother know that everything worked out for him in the end but words failed to escape his mouth as his attention became more focused on that his mother was cleaning him. He enjoyed how gentle she was being  but he couldn’t ignore the fact that he was a sixteen year old boy being bathed by his own mother.

“Anyhow, Mom... I just wanted to let...AHH!” Naruto quickly cut's himself off as his mother begins to wipe his privates. His faced quickly turned several shades of red.

Kushina simply gives her son a straight face before chuckling to herself.

“I'm sorry, I keep forgetting that you are no longer the baby I held in my arms. For me it feels like yesterday but your are now a young man capable of taking care of himself. If you want me to stop, I won't blame you at all.” Kushina states as she brushes her hair a bit.

Naruto could see his reflection in the water which caused him to look up at his mother with a worried look on his face.

Naruto couldn’t keep his eyes off his mother's. The look she gave was the definition of caring and love. His pride as a Ninja told him to tell his mother to back off and that he could take care of himself but the part of him that longed for a caregiver overtook his thoughts.

“I...I don't mind you washing me, it's just...Different. I'm not use to this sort of thing.” Naruto states as he turns his head away from his mom's.

“I'm sure it is. Their is much bonding we need to catch up on. But if you ever feel awkward or too uncomfortable, please let me know. I'm just so anxious to spend such precious time with my baby boy.” Kushina wipes a tear from her eye. She always put up a strong front with Minato and the other villagers from the Hidden Leaf. She wanted to prove that she had the will-power to pull herself through anything that stood in her way. But as a mother and with no one else around, Kushina could finally let her maternal instincts kick in.

Naruto silently chuckles to himself after his mother called him her baby boy. He knew she was just trying to catch up on lost time. But it still caused him to blush at such a title. Before he could go further into thought, his attention quickly turned back as his mother continued to wash his lower half.

Naruto was holding his breath as Kushina continued to scrub away at his most sensitive area's.
He continued to hold his breath as his mother worked her way to his legs and then to his feet.

For the next couple minutes, Kushina thoroughly cleaned every part of Naruto's toes, making sure that no spot was left unnoticed. The blonde boy realized he couldn’t hold his breath much longer as Kushina raised his right foot out of the water as she took her time cleaning it after finishing with the left foot.

“Damn it! I can't hold it in much longer, what am I going to do?” Naruto closes his eyes, he was having mixed feelings about his current predicament.

...IT'S NO USE, I CAN'T HOLD IT IN ANY LONGER!” Before Naruto could expel his lung his lungs, he was caught off guard as he felt a splash of warm water fall down his face.

Naruto wipes away at his eyes to figure out what just happened.

“You were making such a weird face. I couldn’t help but interrupt it, haha.” Kushina states as she places a plastic bucket near her feet.

“Ugh!? So are you done washing me?” Naruto asks, feeling a sense of relief as his vision of his mother became much clearer.

“Not just yet. I just can't leave your beautiful blonde hair alone.” Kushina grabs a bottle of shampoo and begins to lather it in her hands.

“Just stay still, I don't want this stuff to get into your eyes., it can sting pretty bad.” Kushina begins to gently rub the shampoo onto Naruto's hair while messaging his scalp.

“This feels so good.” Naruto's body begins to relax after being so tense from having his genitals being washed.

“Before we got married, I use to wash Minato's hair as well. Usually it was after he completed a mission. It was usually the first thing he would request when he got back home. I could tell especially after going on mission's that had a higher rank and longer duration that washing his hair was more of a stress release than anything else. And Like father like Son, I can tell that you enjoy this just as much, Naruto.”Kushina continues to massage the shampoo into Naruto's hair.

“Believe it.” Naruto had his eyes closed as he embraced such a soothing moment.

“Naruto's so cute, he doesn't even know that he's drooling, hehe.” Kushina states in her mind as she grabs the plastic bucket and begins to fill it with water.

“So mom, what are we going to do after this?” Naruto asks casually while keeping his eyes closed, his head was tilting back and forth, enjoying every moment.

“Well the Ramen I prepared for the both of us should be done very shortly, so before then I thought I would show you to your room where you can be...properly dressed.” Kushina stutters with her last sentence, not sure how Naruto's reaction would be.

Naruto started to think about what her mom said but before he could delve deeper into it, his thoughts were interrupted as a bucket of water falls on his head removing the shampoo that covered his hair.

“Next time, you should warn me mom. I almost had a heart attack.” Naruto begins to shake a little as his upper body started to grow a bit cold.

“Sorry, I just got a little carried away.” Kushina giggles a little as she grabs a towel from one of the cupboards.

“Ah man, and just when I was beginning to feel comfortable.” Naruto wipes his dripping wet hair, but soon notices that the water in the tub he was sitting in was beginning to disperse.
“All right, let's get you out of their and dry you up.” Kushina wraps the towel around Naruto's mid-section and lifts him out of the tub much to the boy's surprise.

As Kushina begins to wipe Naruto's body, the boy's stomach begins to rumble which catches her ears.

“After we dry you off and get you changed, I'll make sure that we fill that appetite of yours.” Kushina continues dry of her son. He was unable to move due to the fact that his mother was in control and was being very thorough as she began to place another towel over his head and began to dry his scalp.

“If things were different, If you and dad were still alive, I wonder If Sasuke's fate would be different as well.” Naruto begins to think of when he fought his friend and rival at the Valley Of The End and how Sasuke told him that he could never understand him due to the fact that he didn't have any parents of his own.

“Sasuke...If I remember, that was Mikoto's child. I remembered having a conversation with her shortly before you were born. I really hoped that you would become good friends with her boy. I would love to discuss about how your life as a ninja has developed and also know more about Mikoto's child but I think we should save that conversation after we get you changed.” Kushina discards the towel as she finishes drying Naruto off.

“EHH! What are you doing mom?” Naruto watches as his mother grabs him by his waist and gently places him over her shoulder.

“What does it look like? I'm taking you to your room so we can get you changed.” Kushina states as she lightly taps Naruto's butt.

“BUT I'M NAKED!!!” Naruto states with a shocked tone as he was being carried.

“What are you embarrassed about? It's just me and you.” Kushina states as she takes her son out of the bathroom and into the hallway.

“Well... It's just...” Naruto remained silent. His mother did have a point but he still had trouble explaining to her that he was embarrassed by the fact that he was in his birthday suit while around her and being carried near her shoulder didn't help his case.

As he was being carried, Naruto couldn't help but notice at how casually his mother was carrying him. While he wasn't anywhere near the size of chouji, he wasn't the size of a toddler either but his mother didn't seem to be having any trouble holding him.

“Were you always this strong mom?” Asks Naruto.

“For the most part, yes I was. Growing up I had to prove and defend myself. And it didn't end when when I became a part of the Hidden Leaf. Most people doubted me because of my red hair and also the fact I was a woman. Ahh, the expression of the people who doubted me when I shoved their faces into the ground... Good times.” Kushina closes her eyes whiling humming a bit. Naruto simply gave off a worried smile, knowing that his mother wasn't someone to be messed with.

“This brings back a very funny memory of mine. When Minato and I got married, he had a little too much to drink and was unable to stand under his own power. Normally the groom brings the bride up to the room but it was the exact opposite. Even in bed I was the dominate one, it took a little while to finally put him on top. OH! I'm sorry, Naruto. That's a subject probably best saved for another time.” Kushina smirks a bit as she stops walking as she stood in front of a lightly colored blue door.

As much as Naruto wanted to know about his parent's relationship, knowing about their sex life felt way too disturbing for him.

“Well, here we are! This is the room I was going to raise you in. And while it maybe a little late, I don't think that should stop the two of us from this one in a lifetime moment.” Kushina begins to open the door.

Naruto was looking forward to seeing what his room looked like, he was expecting to see posters, furniture and some great looking ninja type decorations.

“I can't wait, I wonder what type of room mom had planned for me, I'm sure it's....so....cool?” Naruto's mind begins to drift off in confusion as his eyes scan the room. Everything in the room didn't match what he was expecting. He had a little trouble trying to understand what he was looking at.

The walls much like the door were painted lightly blue with clouds printed on them. The rug was dark blue to keep up with the theme. But what caught Naruto by surprise was the furniture. He expected to see a desk and a bed but instead he saw what looked to be a changing table and a wooden crib on the right side of the room and on the left side, where he expected to see some cool ninja items, instead he saw a rocking chair and a shelf near it which had infantile decorations on it. He stared at the room without blinking for a good ten seconds before his nose sniffed the air. He smelt a minty lavender scent mixed with the smell that can only come from a baby. It was the powdery substance that was mostly used on infants.

“Welcome to your room, Naruto. I hope it's to your liking.” Kushina states as she walks over and places her son on the changing table.

“Umm. Mom, what is this? This isn't my room! This is a baby's nursery!” Naruto began to look concerned, thinking his mother made a huge mistake.

“You have to keep in mind Naruto, this room was setup before you were born, so it is based off on how I originally planned it.” Kushina walks over to the shelf and opens one of the drawers as she scrummages through.

“But I don't understand, I was expecting something cool like a desk, a punching bag and a...bed...” Naruto slowly stutters with his words as he inspects the crib near him.

Naruto could feel a tight knot in his stomach as he realized that the crib was actually much bigger than he expected. If it weren't for the infantile decorations, the railings, the mobile, or even the cute stuffed animals inside the crib, it could have made a decent sized bed.

“Um. Mom? What's going on?” Naruto states with a worried tone as he slowly turns his direction to his mother who seemed to be holding up some supplies in her arms.

“What does it look like?” I'm going to change you in a nice fresh diaper. Can't let you walk around in your birthday suit all day. It's not exactly normal is it?” Kushina smiles as she places many of the items she was carrying over to the table and places them near Naruto's head.

It was at that moment, Naruto noticed the strong odor coming from can of baby powder, the wipes next to it, and the one item that caught his attention without hesitation. The folded disposable diaper. It looked like any other diaper meant for a baby with the obvious white color and the lightly printed blue flowers on it. As his mother began to unfold it, he saw that that the size of the padded undergarment was much larger than he expected. It was too big for an actual baby but it could fit someone in their mid teens with ease.

“So go ahead and lay back and I'll get to work here, ok?” Kushina gives out a motherly smile as heads to where Naruto's feet were.

“WAIT...WAIT A MINUTE MOM! What's the meaning of this? I'm not a baby! I'M AN ADULT!” Naruto quickly releases himself off the changing table and stands firm on his two feet in front of his mom, completely unaware that he was naked in front of her.

“I already know that but it doesn't mean you can't relive the days of your infancy. Is their a problem with this?” Kushina asks with concern.

“OF COURSE THEIR IS!” Naruto yells at up at his mother's face.

Kushina's expression began to show a look of concern while Naruto's displayed shock and anger.

“I thought we were going to spend time together, mom. So what is this all about? It doesn't make sense!” Naruto raises his hands in the air, trying to fill in the blanks to his awkward situation.

“It makes perfect sense, Naruto. I thought we could spend some quality bonding time together and I felt going this route would provide us the best to chance to catch up on the time we haven't been able to spend while we have the chance.” Kushina states as she tightens her grip on the diaper, causing it to crinkle.

“I want to spend time with you, mom but not like this! This is too weird.” Naruto turns his face from his mother as he stares at the colored wall's.

“Is...That...So? I guess it can't be helped. It's not like I am forcing this on you, I just thought you would go along with this. I'm so stupid, what was I thinking!? Your an adult now, I'm sure you have many girls chasing after you. You have much more important matters going on your life now.” Kushina slowly walks over to trash bin.

Naruto was frustrated, up until now, he was enjoying his time with his mother, while he did find it odd to be bathed by his mother, he went along with it but what she was trying to do seemed way to off for him. He seemed satisfied as he enforced his feelings on the matter but it soon turned quickly into guilt as he noticed a tear falling from his mother's right eye.

“My baby boy has grown up into such a responsible and mature young man. I'm so proud of you.” Kushina presses down on one of the levers that causes the trash bin to open.

Naruto's thoughts were beginning to think about his mother's feelings and not just his. What gave him the right to dictate his mom's opinion. She was unable to raise him and love him in the proper manner which all parents should have the opportunity to do. He started to think about his younger days, he couldn’t remember ever being loved as he began to walk on his own. He was looked after and guarded by the ANBU under the supervision of the Third Hokage but it wasn't the same. When he browsed around the village he was always envious at seeing a child with their mother, he couldn’t' take his eyes off, pretending that he was that child which would help warm his heart a bit.

But that warmth was very short lived because he would usually get a stern look and the cold shoulder from that mother if they should look his way. It only became harder as he grew older when he was being shunned by his peers. His only form of salvation at the point was to cause mischief, to help replace the void that had been long lost in his heart.  Even with Master Iruka and The Pervert Hermit they couldn’t take the role that can only be held by a mother.

Naruto had thoughts of Tsunade taking on that role shortly after she became the fifth Hokage but after finding out how wild and irresponsible she was given her drinking and gambling addictions, she was a lost cause. He also once gave the thought about Shizune since she seemed to be more down to earth but she had enough trouble supervising the current Hokage from bankrupting the village.

“You don't have to throw that away, mom.” Naruto grabs his mother's arm before she could throw the diaper into the bin.

Kushina turned her head slightly and looked slightly down at her son, she noticed he had a sad expression but she could tell their was a hint of guilt with it.

“What do you mean? You don't need...”Kushina was cut off as Naruto began to speak.

“It's not what I need or rather it's what I can do for you, mom. I'm going to become the next Hokage, I can't let something simple like this ruin my relationship with you. If you want me to be your baby, I can put up with it.” Naruto pounds his chest with his fist as he gives his mother a satisfied smile.

“Are you sure? I mean you don't have to do this selfish request for me. Your basically a young adult now and you have so much going for you.” Kushina replies. ...Right now  I'm not a ninja or an adult, I'm mom's baby boy! So are you going to leave me standing here like this?” Naruto snickers to himself.

“True, I can't leave my little boy running around in his birthday suit.” Kushina giggles a bit as she walks over to her son.

Naruto takes a moment to realize that he was still naked and exposed and quickly covers his shame.

“Their is no need for that. I've already seen your little weapon and I'm not afraid of it.” Kushina giggles a little as she lightly taps Naruto's hands away from his manhood.

Naruto begins to think back to when he was at the Hot Springs with Sai during their first mission together. He was super annoyed at how he kept calling his penis small and felt a bit violated at how arrogant he was to him.

“Sai's attitude has really changed since then, he really has become a part of team seven.” Naruto's thoughts were quickly interrupted as his mother lifted him by his waist and placed him back on the soft changing table.

“So...Well...How are we going to...Do this?” Naruto gave off a look of vulnerability as he bit the tip of his thumb.

“For you it will be pretty simple, just go ahead and lay your head on the back of the table and I'll take care of the rest.” Kushina began to unfold the diaper which made Naruto a little apprehensive.

Naruto slowly allowed himself to lay down on the table, he could feel the soft padding welcome his head. He took a few deep breaths as he looked at the bare white colored ceiling.

For a few seconds, Naruto could only hear the crinkling noises from the diaper and the soft humming sound coming from her mom.

Naruto then felt his ankles being joined together and then quickly being lifted in the air by his mother's right hand. He quickly turned his attention to his mother's direction. Every second that went by he could feel his legs being lifted higher. His bare feet were in the way from his eyes getting a full glimpse of his mother's expression but based on the humming tone she was making, he could tell that she was very satisfied at the moment.

Naruto then could feel something being placed underneath his bottom, he already knew what it was but still gave him the goosebumps.

“Even though I gave you a bath, just to make sure there is nothing hiding under their, let's do a checkup.” Kushina grabs a moist wipe from a small box she placed on the table and begins to make it's way near her son's more sensitive area's.

“Careful now, it's quite cold.” Kushina warns her son before using the wipes. A “AH!!” sound could be heard from his mouth.

“What are....What are you doing mom!?” Naruto asks with concern as he felt a unfamiliar feeling connect to his skin.

“Just being thorough” Kushina begins to lower Naruto's ankles which causes his butt to hit the padded material of the diaper. He didn't notice because all of his attention was spent on looking at his mother wiping his thighs and then his genitals.

Naruto could see his mother's expression but he turned his head to the side. He didn't want to admit it but his mother was being very gentle with his privates which caused him to slightly moan. He felt disgusted with himself, he knew that his mother was just doing her job but given that he had never been with a woman and the closest he came was a punch from Sakura when he did something stupid, he felt terrible at how aroused his body was becoming.

“Looks like someone is getting a little too excited down their. I should stop before I make you feel more uncomfortable.” Kushina throws the wipe to the side as she then grabs a container of baby powder.

Naruto's already flushed face became even redder as he felt something cool brush against his lower half. It didn't take long for the smell to reach his nostrils. It was then he realized that the baby powder his mother had earlier had just been used on his privates. He closed his eyes and put both of his hands on his face to cover the embarrassed look on his face.

Kushina took notice of that after applying some of the powder onto the diaper. She knew that Naruto was at the age where he would crave freedom and independence. And he was sacrificing it for her own benefit. She wanted to apologize but she knew that if she did that it would make his situation even more unbearable. She then came up with an idea that could help soothe her son's dilemma.

“I can't feel anything...Is is over?” Naruto stated in his mind as he kept his hands in front of his face.

“Naruto. Open your eyes, I've got a present for you.” Kushina states in a childish tone.

The boy slowly removes his hands from his face and opens his eyes to see his mother standing above him while holder a item in her left hand.

“Now open your mouth and say AWW!” Kushina begins to lower the item that was dangling in her hand.

Unsure of what the item was but not wanting to disappoint his mom, he opened his mouth as wide as he could, he then could feel a rubber like substance enter his mouth. It didn't hurt and as soon as his mother had placed the item into his mouth he immediately closed his mouth and began to suck on the item.

“I hope this well help calm you down a little.” Kushina bends over a a bit and kisses Naruto on the forehead.

“I'm...I'M SUCKING ON A PACIFER!!!”Naruto couldn’t believe the size of the pacifier, he never knew they actually made something like it in his size. But after taking a look at the crib he knew that everything in the room was based on his mother's chakra and design and in a sense it wasn't real. But as he continued to suckle on the item in his mouth, his thoughts were far past the point on what was real and wasn't.

“Looks like your little weapon is going back into it's hiding place.” Kushina giggles a bit as she begins to wrap the diaper over her son's lower half.

Naruto lifts his head a bit, still in disbelief at what he was witnessing. He could feel his entire manhood being covered by the soft texture of the padded undergarment that was being taped onto him. The smell of the baby powder continued to overwhelm his senses, he started to regret his decision which was merely based on his emotions with his mom.

“Their we are! All snug and secure.” Kushina takes a moment to look over her work, she gives a quick nod and and fist bumps both of her hands at how proud she was of her accomplishment.

“Is this really happening? Am I really in a diaper?” Naruto slowly sits himself on the table, he takes a quick glance at the diaper that was firmly around his waist. To confirm his obvious suspicions, he took his left hand and placed it on the front of the disposable item.

“This feel's really weird.” Naruto states in his mind as his mother picks him off the table with ease and hold's him slightly over her shoulder.

“I'm sure that was really tough on you, probably tougher than any mission you have ever taken on, haha. I think I should reward you with a bowl of some really tasty ramen!” Kushina states as she pats her son's diaper while escorting him out of the room.

“All right Ramen! I can't wait!” Naruto's appetite takes over his current mindset ignoring what just occurred or what he was currently wearing.
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Comments: 8

Lucian-Santana [2013-10-27 06:10:27 +0000 UTC]

I have one big issue here.
Your constant use of "their." It's a common mistake to mix up "Their" "They're" & "There." In your case, you're only using "Their" which is actually the possessive word. "There" needs to replace it in a lot of places, and whenever you want to say "They are" using a contraction you say "They're." I suggest using Ctrl+F to find and replace all improper use of the word "Their" with the proper word. It gets distracting otherwise. I know what you're trying to say but it bothers me that you're using the same word over and over improperly. Don't take offense please. I only aim to help you improve.

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ruby923 In reply to Lucian-Santana [2013-10-27 19:41:27 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate the feedback. I know my work isn't' perfect and I except all feedback both positive and negative.  I'll look into it for any revising and future work. Hope you have enjoyed the story despite the wording. 

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Lucian-Santana In reply to ruby923 [2013-10-27 20:04:48 +0000 UTC]

Honestly, I probably would enjoy it more if I didn't give up on Naruto and tried to stick with it instead of just stopping. It might've made a bit more sense. But that's more my problem than anything. However, it's good to keep in mind with Fanfics that not everyone that reads it may know the source material well. So, if you try to give details to help explain certain things it makes it easier on them. (Just don't go overboard. There is such a thing as too much.)

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EldritchBeing [2013-10-22 06:02:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm loving this story so far! Any word on when chapter 3 may be up? 

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ruby923 In reply to EldritchBeing [2013-10-25 04:46:51 +0000 UTC]

just released the chapter ^^

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BakaLeo [2013-10-18 07:32:08 +0000 UTC]

just as good as the preivious one n.n

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lalampara [2013-09-19 21:04:10 +0000 UTC]

nice.

i hate to ask but will anymore of the bleach story be up soon?

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ruby923 In reply to lalampara [2013-09-20 04:28:42 +0000 UTC]

i'm still working on it. I usually put in a few paragraphs here and their, It's a bit longer than most of my previous chapters. It all comes down to motivation, I'll continue it but I'm been more incline with this current story, I should hopefully have the bleach story out in the next week or two

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