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Published: 2010-01-19 21:07:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 145; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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did some pieces of armor and add some stuffs!thanks in advance for the look and the watches!!!
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Your underdrawings are very strong. You're doing well with choosing appropriate color palettes.
Shading is fairly consistent--Only thing I'd say is try not to highlight so many details with the brightest color, because that makes it hard to find a focal point in your work. The ear, for instance, is distracting, while I feel like, as the viewer, I should be paying more attention to the face. They're competing with each other for my attention.
Stroke economy needs more work, too. His muscles look fuzzy, almost like he has fur. There can be sharper shadows in his pants to make them look more like cloth.
You're doing very well with defining volume, form, and pose. It needs some more polish so that the textures are true to real-life textures, and then I think you'll have a perfect piece.
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many many thanks!!!
ok!i should stop to une the smudge tool when shading!my improvement is so slow but because of u i think i'll work differently for the next one!
excuse me if i made some mistakes that i've done on this one!!!be sure i've listened your words and will think about it for the future!!
thank you very much!!
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I felt comfortable giving you critique. I think you're on the right track to becoming really great!
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hopefully you are right!thanks for trusting myself and for the support!!!
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yay!many thanks! very glad that u like it!
thank you!!
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