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rubydragyn — The Dusk of Sunrise
Published: 2005-04-30 19:06:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description Diverging paths of gloom stretch ahead.
Find solace in the depression of the morning fog.
Promises whispered forth by the sunset;
Of a torrential midnight rain.
Fell droplets tirade againt the pane;
Solely calming the tremors of the heart.
Misguided, the violent wind screams.
Chilling even the blood within.
Desolation; oblique, inescapable.
Darkness summons' it's fatal embrace.
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Comments: 3

HellFayrie [2005-05-01 01:56:07 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely. The cadence works very well, despite it not being a rhyming poem.
The imagery is also nicely done.
Excellent.

-Chella

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rubydragyn In reply to HellFayrie [2005-05-02 03:54:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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HellFayrie In reply to rubydragyn [2005-05-02 07:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Anytime

-Chella

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