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Published: 2013-06-13 20:06:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 238; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 1
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I was gesture drawing, and this was one of the ones I liked. I was using this site --> [link] It is really helpful I have been using it to practice a lot.Anything you can see wrong with this, correct. Thanks.
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You're welcome. I believe you know how to do this one, but I hope it helped
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You submitted this to the Correct Me Manga folder, am I to assume you're looking for style corrections as well as general ones?
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Sure. Whatever you think would be helpful. I was a little torn on where to put this one though. While manga is an influence of my drawings, my style is more of a realistic-manga type.
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it looks pretty good proportionwise, her left thigh might be too long, given some of it should be out of sight. The pose you choose lacks threedimensionality, and so does the sketch... it shows in areas where you would suspect a glimpse at the "third side" of things, like her lower back, neck and the breast area. in gesture, hair should be left out or only indicated, the head itself is more important for the flow of the pose.
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Thanks for the pointers! I appreciate them.
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