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rudiroo In reply to Mallymkun-Mouse [2011-05-24 16:04:11 +0000 UTC]

You don't sound bitchy at all, next time I do something I will take into account:
1) The colours I use and were there placed
2)I just like doing long eye lashes, I can see how they make him look feminine. Would you say that shorter or fewer lashes like the boy in this pic [link] is better? Please if you have time send me manga lashes you think are more appropriate for a boy.
3)I can see what you mean about the hands, that's the part on boys I'm struggling with.

I'm trying to find my own style and all constructive criticism is welcome. My proportions are on person, I just like the guy being tall, my personal preference Thank you for the help

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rudiroo In reply to sas93 [2011-05-07 15:22:04 +0000 UTC]

This is how I see Stark and Zoey, tell me what doesn't look like them, 'cause pointing the finger makes you sound like a kid with very little Knowledge in the background of art and interpretation.

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sas93 In reply to rudiroo [2011-05-07 15:29:14 +0000 UTC]

it just looks wrong. the colours and stuff seems like you spent five minutes on them.

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rudiroo In reply to sas93 [2011-05-07 15:33:12 +0000 UTC]

what colours, colours can refer to lighting, skin tone, skin complex, basic colour exeter. Use your knowledge of art, don't just bad mouth because you want to make something look bad.

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sas93 In reply to rudiroo [2011-05-07 19:03:15 +0000 UTC]

well im posting my feedback like you said. add a but more weight to them and then they might look okay but dont do a quick sketch and claim it to be a work of art. its snobby.

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rudiroo In reply to sas93 [2011-05-07 19:21:49 +0000 UTC]

I'll think you'll find during in Burned, Zoey is skinny because she isn't all there even after her soul is put back together, Stark has already lost a lot of weight and loses more when he goes to find Zoey. In Asian comic art characters are slim and and girls are always made especially petite. Look up and consider what style someone is using before you comment; having a background in more than one type of art never hurts. Technically this is art, it's not a master piece cause my use of Photoshop is a long way from OMG good; but at least I can see that, which means I'm not snobby.
I see you abandoned your colour comment, have you not got anything to use to back it up with.

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sas93 In reply to rudiroo [2011-05-08 00:27:04 +0000 UTC]

HOUSE OF NIGHT ISNT ANYTHING ASIAN AND ALTHOUGH YOU EXPERIMENTED IT HAS PROVEN NOT TO WORK.
YOU HAVE NOT REPLIED TO A FEW OF MY COMMENTS AND SEEM TO NOT LIKE MY FEEDBACK OF HOW TO IMPROVE. MORE TIME WOULDNT HURT AS YOU SEEM TO HAVE TO MUCH FREE TIME.
AND IT DOES SEEM LIKE YOU ARE SNOBBY.

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rudiroo In reply to sas93 [2011-05-08 11:15:59 +0000 UTC]

The House of night may not be Asian; but if you look up what it is or just lower your pried to see your no were near as informed as you think you are. You'll start to see I can learn to mix and draw in any style I want. It may not be what your used to seeing, but that is your lack of knowledge not mine. So why should people like me have to put up with ill-informed, low level, 'artist' like your-self; that won't even attempt to understand that the book and cartooning it are two different things. I have my own way of perceiving then drawing the characters; you know nothing about the section of art I use so I'll have to inform you.
Read carefully:
Asian comic book art is drawn and then inked (It's black and white never coloured). The title page is the inly thing in colour and is often very flamboyant or detailed.
Drawing in the style under category shoujo means girls are slim and petite, unless drawn otherwise. Have a look at sailor moon to get you started baby steps ok

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rudiroo In reply to Jynxx666 [2010-09-05 11:17:04 +0000 UTC]

No he has shaggy blondish brown hair, but you can a description at the official fan-site.

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rudiroo In reply to xxxlightsgirlxxx [2010-07-22 15:24:44 +0000 UTC]

tahkyou for the fave

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