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A Prank Too FarChapter 1:
The Spark
It was a typical Sunday Morning at the Castle. For a change, The Princess of friendship was granted by schedule a day off from her royal duties as a Princess. Granted such freedom from royal duties, the adorkable princess spent such free time on her favorite pastime… reading and studding out of her hoard of books.
Twilight Sparkle came out of the library to her study holding at least five books with the magic from her horn and at least holding ten books with her hoofs. The Princess was dressed in a white button up blouse and a purple shin length skirt. “Ah spike, this shall be a great chance to catch up on my reading for today. It’s been a while and I rarely get the chance to catch up on my books now that I am a princess.” Behind her, Spike the dragon, dressed in a white T-shirt with Canterlot’s hoofball team logo on it and blue denim jeans, was struggling carrying about 20 books in his paws using his strength to carry the books to place them by the desk in the royal study. “Ah Twilight, Can’t we go out and do something normal ponies do on a day off?”
The Princess of friendship placed the five books, which she carried by her magic horn, on her desk while placing the other ten next to them. “Spike, I do that stuff all the time as princess of friendship!” Twilight complained to Spike. “Honestly at times I feel like I rarely have time to enjoy the things I like to do, heck its Twilight time, work time, party time, saving the world time, can’t I have me time for a change?” The Purple Pony complained expressing a brief moment of honesty to her dragon. The response left Spike with a expression of disappointment as it looked like yet another bright and sunny day would be spent reading books and learning more history, science, math and such which was for him like every other day in Canterlot which did not change since coming to Ponyville. But seeing the unhappy look on Spike’s face had encouraged Twilight to try to cheer him up as she kneeled down to the dragon.
“Don’t worry spike, unlike the last times I will try to make this more exciting and have you help me out on this ‘kay litte buddy?” she smiled to the dragon whom the purple pony played older sister, close friend and mother all in one role. This cheered up the Dragon a bit as he begun to remember the last few times he was left in idle hands. “Okay Twilight, only if we can do something fun after this studying?” he begged to Twilight. “Sure, I’d be happy too.” Twilight said in excitement as she stood up to sit on her chair and dig into the first book. “You might want to pull up a chair as we are going to learn some more about Science!” Twilight proclaimed excitedly, moving the chair a bit so Spike could pull up a chair and upon opening the book to the first page made a small excited hop to land in her chair.
Purrrrrrrrrrrrt!
A loud and familiar rude noise erupted from Twilight’s chair causing the purple alicorn to squeak in shock with a horrified expression. Spike instinctively held his nose in disgust. “Twilight… Did you just?” “No I didn’t!” Twilight snapped both confused as to where the sound came from and angry as Spike was claiming the sound was hers. “Well Everypony does it Twilight.” Spike protested fanning the air with his other paw. “And since when!” Twilight began but was interrupted when her ears noticed something that had been going on for a while… she heard two familiar voices outside laughing like hyenas outside. She walked over to the window to see Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash Laughing in hysterics at the prank they performed on their friend the Princess of Friendship.
“Oh that is so funny, The Face you made when you sat down was priceless!” Laughed Rainbow Dash who was finding the joke they pulled quite amusing and very funny. “Its True!” Pinkie Pie laughed, “You both believed that sound was real!” “Yes! The Egghead had laid an egg!” This set the pair even more in a laughing fit. The juvenile humor that the two were enjoying was not Twilight’s cup of tea as she exhaled in annoyance as she closed the window drowning out the ruckus. When she came back to the desk, Spike had lifted up the cushion from the chair to discover a deflated whoopee cushion. Causing the little dragon to giggle a bit, “Wow, for a second I thought you had turned on the gas.” Spike mused before Twilight placed the cushion back on the chair and slouched in disappointment realizing Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash were on another pranking spree. “Aw come on Twilight, it was just a harmless prank!” Spike mused defending the pair. “True Spike, but I worry about them sometimes, I worry their pranks could go to far… Jokes can be funny but one should know when not to go too far.” Spike shook his head, “Well I think Pinkie Pie knows comedy in good taste, and I think Rainbow Dash does too.” He defended. “Well I hope you are right Spike.” She replied to the little dragon, as she got comfortable and began to read her books.
With another prank done, the two were laughing about their escapades by the lake. Rainbow Dash, dressed in Jeans, a red black striped T-shirt and blue exercise jacket and Pinkie Pie, dressed in Pink, Yellow and Green Striped pants and a pink tank top with a balloon printed on it were now cooling off with their feet in the water. “I have to admit, The Whoopee Cushion was a hilarious prank you played on Twilight.” Pinkie mused. “Yeah, especially the part when she squeaked when it went Pffft!” she laughed, “I bet she thought she really pooted.” The two laughed “Aww, We are fully grown mares, you can say the word Dashie.” Pinkie wined playfully, Rainbow decided to play it smart, “Oh? Like beefed, tooted, ripped one, did a duck?” Each phrase caused pinkie to chortle and laugh harder snorting as she let out her bad case of the giggles. “Sorry each one is so funny!” Pinkie laughed especially to the one about the duck. “Yep,” Rainbow Dash began, “ I totally am the prank king!” “queen!” Pinkie corrected, “Gah, uh, I am the best at Pranks, I am a totally awesome comedian achieving such a funny prank today all by myself.” The blue pegasus proclaimed mightily but this left Pinky suddenly feeling left out as the two worked on the prank, like their last few prank sprees together.
“Hey I deserve credit too, if it weren’t for me and my abilities, we wouldn’t have been able to get in to put the cushion under Twilight’s chair!” Pinkie complained to the blue pony, “Were in this together!” Rainbow Dash got up getting her hoofs out of the water “Oh come on Pinkie lighten up, I came up with the idea of tweaking her seat!” Rainbow Dash protested not liking that Pinkie was “Cramping her style.” But the pink earth pony protested. “Rainbow Dash, It was I who suggested we pull a prank on Twilight as I sensed she would most likely spend the day locked in her room reading books all day, you just helped me achieve it?” the pony replied looking distraught at her best friend, and close some pony, would dismiss her effort. “What you did it with your pinkie senses?” Dash mockingly air quoted the pink pony’s mystical powers. “We only were able to achieve this great feet thanks to my awesomeness. This got Pinkie angry. “No! You didn’t achieve success alone and if it weren’t for me we wouldn’t have this fun, and don’t ever mock my pinkie senses, remember the last time someone did that?!” Pinkie stomped and twitched angrily causing her pants to droop as she turned her back toward the Pegasus. “Woah woah woah! Chill the buck out Pinkie, No sense losing your cool again…” The blue pony paused as she now got a good look at the waste band of the pink pony’s underwear. As if by black magic Rainbow Dash now had a sly smile on her face with a bad idea born in her now swollen head. It was then she had to act.
“I know what will cheer you up Pinkie, I just got a new idea for a prank that I need your help for me to make happen.” This immediately cheered up Pinkie Pie as, from the sound of her voice, that it must be a good idea if Dash thought it would be. “Really? Great, so who are we going to pull this prank on?” She turned around however Rainbow flew so that she was behind Pinkie Pie, which left the pony confused as to why Rainbow dash was floating behind her. “Wait and see.” Was Rainbow Dash’s slow response as she placed her hoofs on the sides of Pinkie Pie’s pants and in one strong thrust she yanked the stripped pants down to the pink pony’s ankles. Exposing a pair of blue panties with white polka-dots, waistband, and leg holes with the word Friday in black letters, it was a Sunday, “Huh? Pull down my pants? But we’re in private.” Pinkie replied a little confused as she would think that the best place for a pantsing prank would have been out in the public of Ponyville. The Pink Pony replied confused, and unusually calm for a mare that just lost her pants.
Rainbow Dash was getting started, “Nope, This too!” and with a hard yank she pulled up Pinkie’s Underwear up to her belly that it caused the pink pony to yelp in pain. “Ouch that’s a bit hard Rainbow Dash!” Now to be fair Pinkie Pie had done many a wedgie prank every now and then with her sisters… but It was usually only a light pull to cause minor discomfort and usually her parents would then yell at her that it wasn’t nice to do such a thing. But she tried not to physically hurt anyone with her pranks. But this wedgie that Rainbow Dash was giving Pinkie was given such force that it was quite painful, especially on her most sensitive feminine areas. “Dash could you let go now?” Pinkie asked but Rainbow Dash Ignored, “Huh? Did you say let go up? Ok.” And she pulled her underwear near her breasts. This was really painful right now. “N-No Dash Let me go!” Pinkie shouted in pain. “Ok Pinkie!” Which she then pulled her waistband back and then let go. With a loud snap from a pulled waistband, Pinkie lost her balance and then fell forward into the lake.
For Rainbow Dash this was too funny she begun to laugh hard, as hard as she did with the whoopee cushion earlier. “Ah Pinkie, You looked so ridiculous with your undies that high, I hope you enjoy your swim!” The Pegasus continued to laugh as Pinkie Pie surfaced from the water. “Rainbow Dash that really hurt, I don’t understand how that was funny!” the pink pony responded dripping wet. “Relax!” replied Rainbow Dash in a carefree manor. “Anyway I gotta stretch my wings, Meet me at the park when you’re dry Pinkie.” Rainbow Dash finished as she spread her wings then flew off to the park leaving the soggy pink pony sitting in the lake with her underwear pulled up to her midriff.
She sighed sadly as she got up, sobbing in the process. “Stupid Rainbow Dash, and the elastic is now flimsy too.” She looked down to see that the elastic waistband was no longer in the best shape and could free fall if she moved too much. “Why would she do this.. She isn’t.” Pinkie tried to explain to herself but was to hurt to come to with this “prank” that Dash pulled. Then sadness turned to anger, to a desire for revenge on her prankster in crime. “Rainbow Crash should have remembered whom she was pranking… You haven’t dealt with the last of me Rainbow Crash!” Pinkie yelled as she walked home to begin her plan of attack.
The wedgie war had begun.
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Comments: 9
ElephantEddie [2017-06-30 21:33:42 +0000 UTC]
Pretty good first part, although it could do with a spelling and grammar cleanup here and there, you write "dose" a lot,instead of "does" which is a bit distracting.
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rumpelteaser In reply to ElephantEddie [2017-07-02 14:44:11 +0000 UTC]
I see, I am sorry that this ruined the experience for you, Well, I guess I will look in and fix the grimmer issues, it is not the first time I fixed gramer in my work.
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ElephantEddie In reply to rumpelteaser [2017-07-02 16:14:11 +0000 UTC]
It didn't ruin it, it's just a slight irritation. It's something worth improving in future, possible, but the story is still good. I'd have liked to have seen some thongs in there, too, but that's just a personal preference.
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rumpelteaser In reply to ElephantEddie [2017-07-05 04:43:48 +0000 UTC]
Ah I see, shame it was an irritation. But if it helps, I do read my works both for entertainment and to check for errors, and just today I found mistakes in Chapter 3. Plus as you can see on some of my poems and even in A Prank Too Far, I do list the Updates I make to my work. So I will probably fix those in Chapter 1.
As for the Thongs, eh he he. Its ok, I had a feeling looking at your work. Too be fair you do give the pony's cute tastes in thongs, though I will admit I kinda prefer making my characters and interpertations of characters comfortable under their clothes. Though with MLP as in the real show the ponies don't normally wear clothes It gives a bit more freedom on what clothing and even underwear to give them. I was amazed how big a hit Rainbow's Tortoise Panties were to the DA public I confess.
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ElephantEddie In reply to rumpelteaser [2017-07-05 09:38:49 +0000 UTC]
I suppose everyone has their own preferences, I try to limit the amount of thongs in my work, at least a bit, because I know a lot of my watchers aren't fon d of them, and I don't want them getting bored of excessive thongs. And some pictures people specifically request something other than a thong. I think if it was just me, doing pictures for my own amusement only, there would be a lot more thongs than there are.
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rumpelteaser In reply to ElephantEddie [2017-07-05 14:54:44 +0000 UTC]
Ah I see, well, maybe I will supprise everyone in either of my next works. To keep things interesting, but I will think on it.
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mariodashrko [2017-06-17 20:28:57 +0000 UTC]
Awesome I can't wait to see part 2 tomorrow friend
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rumpelteaser In reply to mariodashrko [2017-06-19 07:14:27 +0000 UTC]
Its done, but I would like some extra time before I submit Part 3.
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rumpelteaser In reply to mariodashrko [2017-06-18 06:35:41 +0000 UTC]
great! I will map
the story then post ch 2.
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