Lizabell [2004-06-17 08:04:16 +0000 UTC]

love the rhyming scheme it sounds especially good when you read it out loud really fast! great work luke

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randomthought [2004-06-05 14:34:10 +0000 UTC]

I can't believe there are that many words that rhyme with night! (i lead a sheltered little life...)
I must agree with Pete- this new "style" of yours is pretty rockin'! It's definitely more free and raw (if you will) its good to let go every once in a while- you can learn alot about yourself from just going crazy especially in the artistic realm! I applaud you and your newfound creative style! I hope you keep up with it- it's definitely interesting and it looks wicked! I envy you and your font of talent! (in the best possible way of course....*hides giant meat cleaver...* )
Be proud...for the force is strong in this one....
(will somebody PLEASE shut me up!!! *cries*)

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jendal [2004-06-03 02:30:19 +0000 UTC]

weird infact, it was so light outside! i enjoyed it, i was in a good mood and slept well,
the poem, yeah, portrayed emotion well,

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the-figurehead [2004-06-03 01:17:54 +0000 UTC]

P.S, Yeah, it was pretty bright last night. I couldn't sleep at all.

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the-figurehead [2004-06-03 01:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Luke, I am a HUGE fan of your new art style that you have used as the pictures for your past two poems. I don't know where this new form is coming from, but I think it is a really effective new form for you. The poetry of late has also been really good. Pretty deep and it is like you are cutting loose with your emotionally poetic side. Well done old buddy.

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bigred2 [2004-06-03 01:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Interesting poem mate... you have done quite a good job here. I appreciate the way in which you've rhymed virtually all the lines. Quite impressive.

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