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Published: 2007-08-12 05:35:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 63; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Rose of love bleeding dryRunning out of tears to cry
Pain of loosing you
Is such a pain to new
I love like mine
Is so hard to find.
But you lost what it was
There fore I am no more
In your eyes of so cold steel
Death do us part
Forever and always
I love you.
Comments: 4
CeruleanNecrosis [2007-08-12 06:10:53 +0000 UTC]
mad grammar issues o_o
but that's not a very nice thing to say to a poem, since when are they supposed to read properly
pretty damn deec, yo
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RustyPumpkins In reply to CeruleanNecrosis [2007-08-12 07:59:23 +0000 UTC]
Stfu I write it in like 4 seconds.
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CeruleanNecrosis In reply to RustyPumpkins [2007-08-16 06:40:28 +0000 UTC]
You're sickeningly immature. Learn to take criticism.
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