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RustyRed — Deception
Published: 2004-06-29 06:36:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 232; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 25
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Description Hunched in disgrace and imperfection
Low hangs the head of cruel deception
Thirsty she rides for whom she misguides
The fool hearty with out discretion

Deep in the hollows of Misguidance
Leading their hearts to loveless romance
All slipping away, rotting decay
Deaf blind riders without a hope’s lance

Occurrences lead to mistrusting
Aluminum promises rusting
Through hardships untold, searching for gold
They whither away while they’re lusting

Through untimely shadows springs truth
All her valor and strength save the youth
Never to quit, her path brightly lit
Rises fighting for nail and for tooth

She says fear not the trouble ahead
Sleep so tightly tucked into your bed
Keep your own faith, not that of the wraith
And be careful of when you see red  
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Comments: 19

oddiovity [2004-07-21 03:16:55 +0000 UTC]

...this is very sad. Where are you? I'm waiting for more submissions of you! Do you feel better now? I send you love...

Go and see NO.WORRIES, one of my last submissions and I promise you it will make you smile!

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RustyRed In reply to oddiovity [2004-07-22 21:31:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks i'm in New Brunswick Canada right now because my uncle died...i'm down here for one more week after this and i've already been up here for 2 weeks....so i can't really come up with a lot for art but thanks

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talonthekiller [2004-06-30 13:28:53 +0000 UTC]

Great style and form- well rounded poem indeed.

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RustyRed In reply to talonthekiller [2004-07-01 04:57:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you Alicia, coming from an artist of your tallent, that means a lot to me!

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talonthekiller In reply to RustyRed [2004-07-01 11:44:00 +0000 UTC]

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uncaine [2004-06-29 19:26:59 +0000 UTC]

Awesome word choice! Great flow!

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RustyRed In reply to uncaine [2004-06-29 21:01:51 +0000 UTC]

fanks a lot!

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DasX [2004-06-29 19:07:24 +0000 UTC]




Sarah...This really is better then any of my work! The thing flows magnificently, the imagery incredible, and the feeling powerful. Its a dark moody poem with hopeful sparks throughout it! I absolutely love it.

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RustyRed In reply to DasX [2004-06-29 21:03:31 +0000 UTC]

fanks Davely! but you are wrong, your poems are far better! But fanks for all of the support!

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DasX In reply to RustyRed [2004-06-30 04:00:00 +0000 UTC]


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RustyRed In reply to DasX [2004-07-01 05:14:09 +0000 UTC]

IT LOOKS LIKE A PIGGY BACK AHAHAHAHA

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DasX [2004-06-29 19:07:18 +0000 UTC]




Sarah...This really is better then any of my work! The thing flows Magnificuntly, the imagery incredable, and the feeling powerfull. Its a dark moody poem with hopefull sparks throught it!

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Rampaidge [2004-06-29 18:11:25 +0000 UTC]

# what a poem, keep up the good work. You should produce more, you cause rythmn in words unseen. And yet they flow. Amazing # # #

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RustyRed In reply to Rampaidge [2004-06-29 21:07:41 +0000 UTC]

fanks much!

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Rampaidge In reply to RustyRed [2004-07-01 01:07:31 +0000 UTC]

are you swearing and thanking me at the same time??

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RustyRed In reply to Rampaidge [2004-07-01 04:54:54 +0000 UTC]

lol just thanking lol

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siNglEblAckRosE [2004-06-29 06:58:29 +0000 UTC]

thats really good...you have a nice writing style. very graphic but it flows very...er...poetically (for lack of a better word)

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RustyRed In reply to siNglEblAckRosE [2004-06-29 07:03:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you ! and a

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siNglEblAckRosE In reply to RustyRed [2004-06-29 08:57:20 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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