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Published: 2007-09-05 00:15:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Death is the Loss of All Thingsyour life flashes
more like rewinds
as you tear your face away
from the All Thing
The more thick your life
the longer it takes
to return to Go
The less weight you retain
the faster it runs
your train to No Where
It's like floating to the top
and finally breathing air
things aren't as heavy
and you discover your wings
We are where we need to be
Things are only because
we say they are
yet No Things are Real
and Death is the Loss of All Things.
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Comments: 4
jazmynmoon [2007-09-05 00:35:40 +0000 UTC]
I got one of those 2! and so did my other friend
that's a good poem, I'm worried about competing against you ><
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rvxen In reply to jazmynmoon [2007-09-06 01:18:19 +0000 UTC]
it seems we are the victims of advertising bots... ah well, it was good to get some poetry outta me...
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jazmynmoon In reply to rvxen [2007-09-06 03:06:26 +0000 UTC]
yeah, it is
I saw a shirt today that said "poet's never die"
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jazmynmoon In reply to jazmynmoon [2007-09-06 03:06:47 +0000 UTC]
crap... poets never die
kill the "'s"
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