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Skoshiman [2017-10-06 02:30:14 +0000 UTC]

 
Thank you so much! I LOVE IT! I really like the amount of detail you added to the background and the lake. The fireflies, the house/dojo in the background, and the washcloth on Leo were great additions. I also love how you gave Usagi a necklace and pipe, and I especially love how adorable you made Leo look when he's intimidated! The coloring, lineart, and shading are great, too. My only criticism is that Usagi's left arm outside of the lake looks a little off, but considering it's your first time drawing him, I think you did a pretty good job. In addition, I kind of prefer to have the text in small size near the bottom of the image like subtitles or off the image entirely, but regardless I still love the dialogue they're sharing.

This artwork got me imagining how awkward it later would be if someone secretly stole Usagi's and Leo's clothes as this scene occurs.

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