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he sun beats hot and fervent against the back of Naruto’s neck as he feels Sasuke’s fingers graze between their abdomens, sliding up his pectoral muscles and resting on the flat of his stomach which makes Naruto dizzy and out of breath. He pulls away from the kiss, panting and trying to remember how to breathe, the pounding of rushing blood between his ears reminding him how woefully inexperienced he is in terms of sexuality.He draws away, trying to break free, filled with a flood of self-awareness and sudden ineptitude that makes him want to shrink into the ground when Sasuke flips him aggressively onto his back and suddenly he’s staring straight into the blazing sun.
There’s a lot you can say with a kiss, or so Naruto learns when Sasuke presses warm hot kisses all across his sternum, muttering something that sounds like a plea, or a string of disorganized words that build up into a mantra, and mumbling that almost becomes a song.
The kisses can be slow and gentle, or hot and strong, thorough, brief and teasing, Sasuke does something with his tongue sometimes that makes Naruto’s back arch and causes senseless sound to fall tumbling from his lips. He can even make Naruto beg if he wants, only touching his neck now, biting, licking and tasting. Trailing over places that makes Naruto’s pulse race and sends him spiralling further towards white lights.
Coming down from that high, a sort of graceless act, shuddering a little, almost surprised by the intensity of it and knowing Sasuke’s done something that will leave a large and purple bruise on his collarbone tomorrow for all the world to see, Naruto laughs – shakily.
Sasuke’s eyes are half lidded, and his perfect mouth is flushed from where Naruto has bitten and run his teeth against it and Naruto opens his mouth to say what he’s been trying to say for the past two months after he first punched Sasuke in the face and gave him a beauty of a shiner.
“I…” but the words get stuck again halfway between his tongue and his teeth and he swallows them, coughing up something that’s familiar to both of them and is so much easier to handle.
“I hate you.”
by : / Acaciabrown@LJ
She's an amazing person, she really is.
Link to fic:[link]
What I can never say, I say with my lips.
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Comments: 36
Waiel [2008-08-25 04:04:02 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE THIS!!
Finally decided to run through some deviations and I found a treasure among the troves xD
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to Ptite-tete [2008-08-15 11:47:20 +0000 UTC]
Awwwwwww~ Thank you~ XD
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hedspace77 [2008-08-13 16:59:02 +0000 UTC]
Now this is a version of Naruto worth reading! And a pretty sweet illustration to match.
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to hedspace77 [2008-08-15 11:49:33 +0000 UTC]
I enjoy scouring LJ for lovely fics to read, It also helps that it is very descriptive and gives me many um...ideas, ehem. XDDDDDDD
*pounces*
I strongly suggest you read more of her fics and any of the authors participating in the Lemontreeparade project! You won't be disappointed, I promise! * shiny eyes*
[link]
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hedspace77 In reply to ryuusei-illusion [2008-08-19 19:36:54 +0000 UTC]
Heheh...
So, how do you keep your ideas for the story "original"?
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to hedspace77 [2008-08-21 12:41:41 +0000 UTC]
Ohhoohohoo~
Wouldn't you like to know. XD
I reccomend lots and lots of fanfiction and listening to songs on repeat. Kekekekeke
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hedspace77 In reply to ryuusei-illusion [2008-08-23 20:58:30 +0000 UTC]
So, has anyone attempted to use Jiraiya in their stories?
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to hedspace77 [2008-08-24 08:58:51 +0000 UTC]
UM
I read an amazingly smutty one with Jiraiya once. Suffice to say, it left me VERY hot and bothered afterwards. >/////////////////<
I think it was on [link] ? I'll try to find it for you if I can! XDDDD
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hedspace77 In reply to ryuusei-illusion [2008-08-28 19:18:36 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha.. no don't worry about it! I was just wondering how far writers would go!
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frostheavens [2008-08-13 12:34:26 +0000 UTC]
I'm all over your LJ, leaving you comments. Hahahahahaha = >
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to frostheavens [2008-08-15 11:50:18 +0000 UTC]
XD
Oh Sherlock~ I somehow seem to be uke-material, heck I'm WATSON. 0w0
I NEED TO REPLY SOON.
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frostheavens In reply to ryuusei-illusion [2008-08-15 13:06:39 +0000 UTC]
: D EVERYTHING IS JUST HOW I PLANNED IT.
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AkeYuki [2008-08-13 07:46:03 +0000 UTC]
Woah, the picture is amazing, and I love how well written the story is!
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to AkeYuki [2008-08-13 13:09:56 +0000 UTC]
Its amazing right? The story just really inspired me, especially when its a gift fic! Please read her other stuff too~ I especially rec Fish Bird and her Naruto/Dr.Who crossover~ XD
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to Crays [2008-08-13 13:13:52 +0000 UTC]
I'm amazed that you commented! Thank you! How's life in Malaysia? XD
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Crays In reply to ryuusei-illusion [2008-08-14 06:47:06 +0000 UTC]
lol xD. Was randomly browsing other than studying xP. I'm fine, you =3 ? Where are you anyway ?
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to Crays [2008-08-15 11:43:33 +0000 UTC]
I'm currently located in Brisbane. Very chilly Brisbane. ;w;
I NEED MALAYSIAN FOOD.
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Crays In reply to ryuusei-illusion [2008-08-17 10:55:13 +0000 UTC]
Lawl. M'sia food rawks x).
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izzyisozaki [2008-08-13 00:34:29 +0000 UTC]
So much love
I really love reading your posts. I think I remember this passage.
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to izzyisozaki [2008-08-13 02:22:24 +0000 UTC]
I remember that you commented on that fic and that you squeed along with me after reading it. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Awwwwwwwwwww, thank you~ You know how much I enjoy reading your awesome entries. The fact that you like reading mine means a lot to me~
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izzyisozaki In reply to ryuusei-illusion [2008-08-13 14:29:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh god you remember that LOLZ
It was sublime
OH YOUUUUUUUU
shallnotrapeyouIshallnot
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to izzyisozaki [2008-08-15 12:02:39 +0000 UTC]
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
My modesty is challenged!
For the 2nd time by you I believe~
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izzyisozaki In reply to ryuusei-illusion [2008-08-15 15:09:11 +0000 UTC]
I admire your art so~
I feel romantic all the sudden
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Daisie2819 [2008-08-13 00:33:47 +0000 UTC]
Your really good at the getting the entire motion of what they are doing in the picture. Like the pulls and pushes, like as if they we're real. In other words, Beautiful work
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to Daisie2819 [2008-08-13 02:31:04 +0000 UTC]
0w0
*spazzes*
Thank you for that amazing comment! I never really thought that they looked like they were moving, but I'm an absolute stickler for trying to make their movements look as natural as possible.
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Daisie2819 In reply to ryuusei-illusion [2008-08-13 02:38:13 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome, I have a knack for catching things in pictures. If it's something wonderful but noticed I comment. And a again, it's really good keep up the beauty
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to Daisie2819 [2008-08-13 02:56:30 +0000 UTC]
*bows*
Thank you and I'll be sure to do that in the future!
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BJJ [2008-08-13 00:12:48 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful fanart! *reads description* I'm going to go read now!
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ryuusei-illusion In reply to BJJ [2008-08-13 02:54:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh, please do read! XD She has wonderful imagery and nuances of angst which just pulls at my heartstrings~ XD
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BJJ In reply to ryuusei-illusion [2008-08-13 17:30:00 +0000 UTC]
I just did, and I died from utter happiness!
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