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ryver8 In reply to ??? [2020-02-02 05:21:58 +0000 UTC]

Those two are popular! Good to know

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alaanamck [2020-01-31 04:27:19 +0000 UTC]

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ryver8 In reply to alaanamck [2020-01-31 07:24:33 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah, I know, you're right. There's lots of reasons. But it's also somewhat a gauge of interest and enjoyment, and a form of feedback. Writing is a lot of work, and a lot of my personal time, so it's nice to see if it's worth it or not

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alaanamck In reply to ryver8 [2020-02-23 23:03:24 +0000 UTC]

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synaxe [2020-01-30 00:15:12 +0000 UTC]

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ryver8 In reply to synaxe [2020-01-31 04:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Ahem.Β 

(Hey, she's in the story for a reeeeeason. We all like toothy, busty mermaids, right?)

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lightfootcomics [2020-01-29 01:29:20 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, not sure what to expect.Β  This is the last girl though?Β  In some stories, I'd wonder if the part(s) coming up would be about the prince dating each girl and choosing on-- but I think it's more likely it'll be about the existing girls growing.Β  If it's about size, it seems to me that Sierra and Maple are probably going to be hard to beat (unless I'm forgetting a fast-growing girl).Β  If all of the girls are growing, and each girl is larger than the last, and each growing faster than the last-- unless something unnatural happens Sierra would always be the largest.


Catherine as a character is hard to underestimate.Β  I can't imagine her purpose in the story is to be a non-contender.

The prince seemed interested in the twins.

Allysa I'd think has some plan if she isn't the biggest.

Maple seems very physically unstable, depending on how much time they have to wait, her increases in growth are more obvious.

Sierra is already so big, it's harder to guess how often shes growing, but she's probably growing a lot more than Maple.


I guess I like Maple the best, although it's hard not to like an underdog like Catherine.

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ryver8 In reply to lightfootcomics [2020-01-31 04:09:43 +0000 UTC]

Some interesting musings I'm honestly glad that the way forward is not obvious, as that would be a terribly boring story. But it also kills me, sometimes, not being able to confirm or deny things. I hope I hear back, after future developments.

But that's another vote for Maple. Thank you for reading!!

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hito124 [2020-01-28 06:48:57 +0000 UTC]

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ryver8 In reply to hito124 [2020-01-28 22:15:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! And thank you for reading

That's another vote for Alyssa

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pokemonbreeder18 [2020-01-27 12:38:06 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely a fan of the shark girl!!

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ryver8 In reply to pokemonbreeder18 [2020-01-27 22:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Yesss! Somebody! I sensed a lot of people already found a girl more their style, and didn't change their minds with this new girl. Which makes sense, its even probable. The other girls have had more screen time, and the odds are against one specific girl, out of 8. But, it's nice to know Sierra is a welcome addition Β 

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pokemonbreeder18 In reply to ryver8 [2020-01-30 16:56:53 +0000 UTC]

Also I am having an absolute blast reading thru the comments of this story!

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ryver8 In reply to pokemonbreeder18 [2020-01-31 07:30:48 +0000 UTC]

It's the best, isn't it?

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pokemonbreeder18 In reply to ryver8 [2020-01-30 16:53:14 +0000 UTC]

They're all welcome additions, as is *any* content you provide us with this story or otherwise

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gai987 [2020-01-27 08:26:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm not gonna lie, my first thought was that the next contestant was actually the island itself. Lo and behold, two island size breasts appear!

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ryver8 In reply to gai987 [2020-01-27 22:56:29 +0000 UTC]

Also not gonna lie ... I had thoughts about that, when planning the story! It's a really fun concept, isnt it? And a great surprise. Buuuut... it would have been hard to keep a surprise for any length of time, and still have it make sense in the story.

Oh well. She's bigger than the island anyways, so it's fiiiiine, right?

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gai987 In reply to ryver8 [2020-01-28 07:38:01 +0000 UTC]

veeeeery fun concept. and a welcome solution to that!

if we can't make the island "her" just make her bigger than the island! easy!

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minionofgruumsh [2020-01-27 03:25:34 +0000 UTC]

A shark girl, huh?Β  If she doesn't win the hand of the prince, think she'll run across a lava boy?Β 

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ryver8 In reply to minionofgruumsh [2020-01-27 07:08:12 +0000 UTC]

Anything is possible ... Are you a fan of the shark girl?

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minionofgruumsh In reply to ryver8 [2020-01-27 13:31:46 +0000 UTC]

I mean, she alright? I will say I'm not particularly enamored with any of the cast members; Vanessa best girl. Maybe a bit with Anne as things have progressed, because we get to see that she's into it and encourags the others to be as well and doesn't Β exhibit rude jealousy.

Moreover, I was just making a joke by pointing out "Shark Girl" is half of a role reversal of that one movie with the Spy Kids kids that wasn't Spy Kids; Shark Boy and Lava Girl. >.<;

That said, I fully expect the Queen to have a horse in this race and everyone who isn't the predecided winner of the Prince's hand in marriage will be "gifted" a prize to the tune of a vacation/trip or something, and they'll never be seen or heard from again.

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superthingymajigy [2020-01-26 13:54:09 +0000 UTC]

Honestly I do really like this new girl despite what I've previously said. I'm always a sucker for these girls that keep growing even after showing up!

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ryver8 In reply to superthingymajigy [2020-01-27 07:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Me tooooo. I can't help it

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hargs101 [2020-01-26 12:58:31 +0000 UTC]

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ryver8 In reply to hargs101 [2020-01-27 07:23:05 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes the cliff-hangers are my favorite part I agonized over a few versions of this one, but I think I chose the right one heheheh

Nowhere left to go, except to infinity and beyond, hmmm? (Sorry, had to No promises though)

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Bustgoddess [2020-01-26 11:42:03 +0000 UTC]

Finally there she is and I think she is completely different to Arielle. Different characters, the only part they share is the wonderful hair color.

my fav girl so far

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ryver8 In reply to Bustgoddess [2020-01-27 07:07:32 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, yes, I am glad you like her

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chasbanner [2020-01-26 11:36:04 +0000 UTC]

"The sea level had dropped a full 6.5 feet over the course of the last hour. Some scientists had an epiphany about why the ocean level had crept up so drastically over the last few years."

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ryver8 In reply to chasbanner [2020-01-27 07:06:53 +0000 UTC]

Someone should look deeper into that

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unterwomc [2020-01-26 11:02:09 +0000 UTC]

my listΒ 

# 1) Anne: arggh!!! of the best and if they do not think the same she will make you jump by the plank

# 2) Allysa: Someone with ambition and I don't know why this kind of arrogance attitude looks good in this kind of story

# 3) Yuiko: Elegance hiding a little more lewd behind behind and may seem to have more potential in its history

# 4) Nala and Lana: Touch The Cow!!

# 5) Maple, Leona: cute,but little time on screen nothing more to say, the twins are more striking

# 6) Sierra: I like the concept of Shark mermaid, but the resemblance to Ariel brought it's a negative point, It would be better if being a shark girl had a more aggressive personality.

# 7) Cathrine: nothing against but has not taught us anything other than having good manners and etiquette

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crowmagnon In reply to unterwomc [2020-01-28 06:00:24 +0000 UTC]

unterwomc's list is mostly my own, except I would put Maple over the twins. The shy witch-girl thing appeals to me more than the milky farmgals.

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ryver8 In reply to unterwomc [2020-01-27 07:36:02 +0000 UTC]

Do it now!!

Interesting list ... I wonder ...

Well, I shouldn't say anything, yet. But I'm hoping for an update when the story is done

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Go2daWest In reply to unterwomc [2020-01-26 14:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Fascinating! That is a very different order from my list. I have the whole thing posted on Part 3 with my take-aways, but in summary:

1) Allysa

2) Maple

3) Cathrine

4) Sierra

5) Anne

6) Nala and Nala

7) Yuiko

8) Leona


I guess I'm just personally excited for whatever reveal is going to happen with Cathrine. Man, all the girls are good so it's hard to pick a good order!

Also great to see I'm not the only one who wants to give their full list.

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ryver8 In reply to Go2daWest [2020-01-27 22:58:11 +0000 UTC]

Yes, love these lists, so thank you guys for that!

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DoctorDeath123 [2020-01-26 07:58:59 +0000 UTC]

Maple still has the lead as my favorite, with Yuriko as my second. Maple cause she's cute, and a shy girl which is why she's cute, plus witch hat and long hair, adorable. As for Yuriko, I appreciate how well she's taken most of this in stride, and her mostly sympathetic words this far. I'd like to see her free and allowed to both literally and figuratively decompress.Β 

Thank you as always for writing and sharing these stories with us, I have to say I am excited every weekend this month to see the next chapter come out since number 1.Β 

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ryver8 In reply to DoctorDeath123 [2020-01-27 07:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!!

I mean that. The weekly pace is a little tough at times, but I committed to it because I thought it'd be fun for all of us, this way

People actually showing up has been the best part, easily. I'm gonna have to write a journal with those sentiments.

Thanks for reading

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u-wl-be-x-2 [2020-01-26 05:41:02 +0000 UTC]

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ryver8 In reply to u-wl-be-x-2 [2020-01-27 08:08:17 +0000 UTC]

Yes, all about the build up I thought it would be a nice change of pace from some of the other entrances. I tried to make each one distinct.

Which may also contribute to why the story felt ready to end: a lot of stuff has already happened! I have more thoughts on this matter, but I think I should wait until the story is complete Β 

Hopefully you enjoy what I've still got in store ^^

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EvilSandwich In reply to u-wl-be-x-2 [2020-01-26 07:48:31 +0000 UTC]

You'd be surprised with this guy. The ladies in his stories. They get big. Really big. All of the big. Such big.

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ryver8 In reply to EvilSandwich [2020-01-27 08:08:36 +0000 UTC]

Huuuuuge

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u-wl-be-x-2 In reply to EvilSandwich [2020-01-26 16:07:46 +0000 UTC]

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minionofgruumsh In reply to u-wl-be-x-2 [2020-01-27 13:37:25 +0000 UTC]

Charlotte's story ended with her actually not even significant compared to Anja ans Sam before her. Charlotte still existed in the realm of observable on Earth, after all. So it's texhnically not super accurate to say each one has made those before seem miniscule. It's only, like, 66% on that front at best if you're counting finished full stories.

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u-wl-be-x-2 In reply to minionofgruumsh [2020-01-27 15:53:01 +0000 UTC]

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ryver8 In reply to u-wl-be-x-2 [2020-01-27 23:02:24 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, so I'm not clear if you liked those other stories or not Sorry if they weren't to your enjoyment. Hopefully this one is doing better

I will definitely take a small break from writing, after this story concludes; it's still been a lot of work. However, I'm not PLANNING to sit around too long before I start working on Marshmallow Hell Part 04. Enough people are looking forward to it that I feel motivated to put in the work!

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u-wl-be-x-2 In reply to ryver8 [2020-01-28 00:57:49 +0000 UTC]

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ryver8 In reply to u-wl-be-x-2 [2020-01-28 21:45:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the kind words

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Greemology [2020-01-26 04:36:34 +0000 UTC]

Sexiest girl: Someone

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ryver8 In reply to Greemology [2020-01-27 07:26:12 +0000 UTC]

SOMEONE. I wonder if you'll still feel that way ...

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Greemology In reply to ryver8 [2020-01-28 02:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Lol no clue, but she sounds humorous.

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Go2daWest [2020-01-26 04:24:50 +0000 UTC]

Why do you tease us with such a short chapter!? Aaaaarrgghh!!!

I don't think this changes my list very much, but this chapter has me literally shaking in excitement. Shark girl is great and the size is enormous, but it only leaves me wanting the true size queen that is about to emerge! 40 miles (plus some) is truly an impressive feat, but at only 3 times (or so) as large as Maple it isn't a terribly large jump.


I'm gonna place Sierra at #4 beating out Anne but leaving my top 3 intact. I doubt any of our current girls will match her size, but I have faith that they are big enough for the country!


Prince is still ambivalent to all this so I'm going to reiterate my idea that he may have a girl already in mind (that or he has EXQUISITE taste in truly enormous girls). And I would like to say I called it wouldn't be the finale, although for different reasons.


Good job, I await next week's even more obscene size.

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