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Published: 2016-08-21 17:46:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 2635; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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I wanted to draw a big picture of Mabel and Dipper again also, I want to draw a sweater I liked so, I drew them body swapped. This is kinda like the episode sixteen season one from Gravity Falls called "Carpet Diem"P.S. This took 9 hours... :3
I had to edit it
Art by~Me
Character by~Alex Hirsch
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(Pleas keep in mind this is my opinion, and it is not an attack on you, pleas do not take it as such.)
ok now we got that outta the way i can continue!
so! the thing i really honestly like about the whole picture is you tried, you put effort into your work and cared, and that's something i really respect and admire about your work, and i hope you continue to care and work hard e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
So onto the actual art part of it, probably my favorite part drawing wise is the head shape and background now i wont go into detail seeing as 1Cat0Thingy already made commentary, what i want to talk about is advice and how you can improve.
First of all, start with a sketch, use layers and don't be scared to mess up (everyone dose no matter how good it looks) watch speed-paints look at books and find a art style you like, but before all of that remember anatomy, that's what is going to help you a tone with improving, you have basic colors down pretty well but now you should try learning more on shapes and how people look and perspective
Hope this was helpful to some degree e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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I really like the background on this peice! The colors go together nicely, but there seems to b some white space in the lines, which is distracting. The anatomy is also of, making the characters look stiff and tense. You can also see the lines from to background through Dipper body, and the lines from the coloring go through the line art. I cant tall where the light source is, as the shading is all over the place. But his facial expression looks really good, And so does Mabel's hand!
Over all, this piece looks good, but still can improve on many things.
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I fixed the mistakes...
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Oh! You didnt need to!
Also, You seem a bit off..? In your comment I mean.Β ImΒ sorryΒ if my critique upset you, I was giving my honest opinion.
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It didn't upset me! It made me actually see what was wrong! It took an hour to fix tho. Also I blended the colors.
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Why did Dipper and Mabel act like enemies in that episode?
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I think because they both really wanted that new room
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They are supposed to be good siblings and have a good relationship,but they're not supposed to act like sterotypical sibs
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I had to watch the whole episode again to get references. XD
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Thank you! It took forever... And the worst part was when I was almost done it deleted itself... So I had to re-Do it... I love Gravity Falls a lot!
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