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Published: 2013-08-31 22:55:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1515; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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I think these bones have a mind of their own.I can feel them shift and feel them disown.
Believe me when I say...
I'd rather be dead!
I can feel my body slowly tearing apart,
I can feel my body slowly turning inside out!
My eyes, they burn. My flesh, it bleeds.
My stomach, it turns. Then the darkness proceeds.
The end is near, the uprising is here.
Now my body's committing mutiny!
Ouch, huh? Ehehe... the pain is so bad that she's trying to kill herself by tearing her own throat open. More ouch! X3
There are a few reasons why I drew this.
1 - I wanted to practice drawing gore. Considering this is my first time really drawing torn flesh or exposed muscle, I think I did a pretty damn good job. The collar bone and ribs sticking out... not so much so *shrugs*
2 - I'm broken
I'm falling apart. Not only mentally but physically as well(currently walking is a bit of an issue and food just ain't staying down. Oh well. To the doctor once again!!) So I figured, why not draw myself like this? Ehehe. 3 - CURTIS RX ASJDHAKSFHAK
*ahem*
The lyrics above are from Rufus Rex(Curtis Rx)'s song 'Body in Revolt'. Which has been stuck in my head for the past week. And I freakin' love Curtis. A lot.
What do you guys think? I really love it. But I wanna know what you think X3 which is why I'm opening up critiques for this one
Also, does anyone think this needs a mature tag? Just the warning, not the strict 18+ one. I'm not sure. I think it's probably okay, but who knows?
Body In Revolt (c) Curtis Rx
art (c) Sabi-Cat Studios (me
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this isnt so bad first time.me likey and would like to ue tis as an reference plz
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What do you mean by as a reference? If you mean as a gore reference, awesome! If you mean as a pose reference, I would prefer if you didn't. Thank you
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then that's perfectly fine 
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o-o.... IM both scared and amazed get well soon T-T Im always here if you need a someone to talk with Β ; - ;- (( and is this alice? Or Sabi?))
Soul: W-what the hell?! Your Bleeding all over!?Β
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(this would be Sabi)
I'm okay...
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Soul: You sure as hell are not! Gah! π: 0 β©: 1
n-nyuu, I-I'm fine...
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Nyoo! Your not pulling that! -finishes with the bandages- there now what else was I suppused to do..
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Plz do I worry for my friends 
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you can fix me on Monday when we have our sleepover
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good
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O.o yes i think this absolutley needs a mature tag
But i think its pretty good! I was quite revolted xD and upon closer examination, i like the details of the poking out bones, skininess, and peeling away flesh
On another note, it is not too good that you feel like this 
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thanks! Glad I succeeded in making it revolting X3 hehe
and yeah ;_; it sucks. My leg is feeling a bit better but food still isn't a good option right now. I'm going to go to the doctor before school starts
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Haha!
Well the leg feeling better is good 
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ehehe
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Yeah i hate them now too xD but you could probably keep those down. Liquids are always good. So continue to be a fishy
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yes I shall be a fishy
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I think it's a cool picture.Β I sound so creepy.
Seriously though,Β I really hope you're okay.
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you know, you should join Thought up -->Β thought-up.deviantart.com/
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we have prompt challenges and trade offs and a lot of nice people (including me ) who would really like your art!
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this is very... disturbing but pretty cool, the way you did the muscles and the skin peeling away... i know i couldn't do it XD
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sounds fun! I'll join
and thanks X3
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I don't think this needs a mature tag. I hope things get well with you and I wish the best of luck
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thank you! I hope so too
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Pretty good, but I hope you're okay, I'm a bit concerned.
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I hope I'm okay too
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I'm hoping for the best, hon. Just stay strong.Β
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I'll try. My leg is a bit better right now so there's a plus
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Good, glad to hear something good. Β Just have to be patient and fight it through.Β
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yep. And go to the doctor
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Hmm...I see, you just have to be a bit more careful okay? You probably shifted in a weird way that caused the pain, like me with my back pains. I long time ago, I did something pretty stupid that almost could have killed me (I was 17 at the time) and I jumped off a tall platform. Half way through the fall I thought this was going to end badly. Instead of falling like you should do by crouching down to absorb the shock. I locked up when I was falling half way, so I landed flat on my feet and that caused something to crack on my right knee and my spine felt like it cracked something years ago on my lower back. Now, every now and then I would have this back pain, especially when I shift the wrong way. That was 6 maybe 7 years ago. What I may have is still a not fully recovered spine since I used to do a lot of heavy lifting (moving stuff around the house and all that junk) and possibly have one of not more then one spine disk out of place.
Keep going to the doctors, okay? I'm sure they will find a way to help you, hon. Β
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